PAPA小班课程Lesson6JackShaw复习和作业讲评Governmentscouldcertainlymakemoreefforttoreduceairpollution.Theycouldintroducelaws（制定法律）tolimitemissionsfromfactoriesortoforcecompaniestouserenewableenergyfromsolar,windorwaterpower.Theycouldalsoimpose‘greentaxes(环保税)’（征收税imposetaxonsb）ondriversandairlinecompanies.Inthisway,peoplewouldbeencouragedto（被鼓励，被动）usepublictransportandtotakefewerflightsabroad,therefore（结果）reducing(现在分词)emissions.结尾段写作和素材积累IELTSEssayConclusion1.Useaconcludingphrase（标志词）2.Restatethethesisstatementindifferentwords（转述）3.Givesomepersonalopinions,hopes,fears,orrecommendationsaboutthefuture（个人观点,寄予的希望，担忧，建议）结尾段的三个要素1.Useaconcludingphrase（标志词）Toconclude，Inconclusion,Tosumup,结尾段的三个要素Bloodsportshavebecomeahottopicfordebateinrecentyears.Associetydevelopsitisincreasinglyseenasanuncivilizedactivityandcrueltothehelplessanimalsthatarekilled.Bloodsportsshouldbebanned.Towhatextenttoyouagreeordisagree?Example1Despitethefact(同位语)thatkillinganimalsforsportispopularinmodernsociety,itremainsacontentiousissue（有争议的问题）.(thesisstatement)Ibelievethatbloodsportsarecruelanduncivilizedandsoshouldbebannedassoonaspossible.Introduction:Toconclude,itisclearthatbloodsportsmustbeprohibitedasnocivilizedsocietyshouldallowthepainandsufferingofanimalssimplyforfun.Ihopethatgovernmentsaroundtheworlddiscussthisissuewithhasteandforbidthisinhumanetypeofsportassoonaspossible.Conclusion:Currentlythereisatrendtowardstheuseofalternativeformsofmedicine.However,atbestthesemethodsareineffective,andatworsttheymaybedangerous.Towhatextentdoyouagreewiththisstatement?Example2Alternativemedicineisnotnew.Itisacceptedthatitpre-datesconventionalmedicineanditisstillusedbymanypeopleallovertheworld.Iamunconvincedthatitisdangerous,andfeelthatbothalternativeandconventionalmedicinecanbeuseful.Introduction:Tosumup,Istronglybelievethatconventionalmedicineandalternativetherapiescanandshouldcoexist.Theyhavedifferentst...
