书面表达突破(六)——俗语/谚语类原题再现我国有一句著名的俗语“有志者,事竟成〞。请以“WhereThereIsaWill,ThereIsaWay〞为题写一篇100词左右的短文,并发表自己的看法。写作模板学生习作Itiswellknowntousthattheproverb俗语/谚语.Itmeansthat俗语/谚语的涵义.Indeed,wecanlearnmanythingsfromonething,列举1.Forexample,举例.Foranother,列举2.Lastbutnotleast,列举3.Inmyopinion,我的观点.Ifyouunderstandtheproverbandapplyittoyourstudyorwork,youwillnecessarilybenefitalotfromit.WhereThereIsaWill,ThereIsaWayItiswellknowntousthattheproverb“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.〞Itmeansthatanyonewhohasastrongmindcanachievehis,wecanlearnmanythingsfromit.Foronething,whenyoufailedtodosomething,neverloseheart.Forexample,ThomasEdisonfailedabout2,000timesbeforehesucceededininventingthelight.Foranother,asitiswidelyrecognizedthatthoughtdecidesbehavior,nothingwillbehardtoadeterminedandpersistentperson.Lastbutnotleast,confrontingwithenormousdifficultiesorfrustration,onlyamanholdingasteelwillcangetthroughandembarkonanewwaywithapromisingprospect.Inmyopinion,livinginanagewhenthemoderncompetitionbecomesmoreandmorefierce,astrongwillseemsmorenecessary.Ifyouunderstandtheproverbandapplyittoyourstudyorwork,youwillnecessarilybenefitalotfromit.名师点评本文对该句谚语对人们的启迪分析得非常到位,在分析的过程中用了forongthing,foranother,lastbutnotleast等过渡词语,使文章生动流畅,这是亮点一；在写作过程中用了大量的高级词汇及句式,如remindsb.that...,achieveone’sgoals,loseheart,determined,persistent,confront,enormous,embarkon,fierce等,使文章生动有趣,这是亮点二；最后一句用了条件状语从句,留给了读者广阔的思考空间,为亮点三。仿写训练根据下面的汉语提示,写一篇100词左右的英语短文。古人云：“天生我材必有用〞(Theremustbeauseformytalent.)。请你描述你生活中的一件事,说明人各有所长,无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。参考范文Thereisanoldsayingthattheremustbeauseformyhaveregardeditasmymottoformanyrommypointofview,thereisnodifferencebetweenonepersonandanotherwithsomeusefultalent,andeveryonewillmakehiscontributionstothissociety.WhenIwastenyearsold,therew...
