简单学习网课程讲义学科:英语专题:书面表达常见错误与修改主讲教师:丁屹人大附中英语教师http://www.jiandan100.cn北京市海淀区上地东路1号盈创动力大厦E座702B免费咨询电话4008-110-818总机:010-58858883http://www.jiandan100.cn词数词数在(60-80)±201、中考作文的词数?60-80words2、中考作文的句数?(8-12)sentences确定句子的数目:书面表达通常要求的字数是60—80,换成句子的话,也就是长句子约8-10个左右,短一点的句子10-12个左右.“书面表达”中常见错例5分析1.审题不清内容不切题,则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确,都会被判为零分。2.拼写错误3.语法结构如动词的时态、语态、人称、数等的不一致名词的单复数的混淆;代词的各种格的混淆;形容词和副词的混淆及其比较级等等。4.中式英语5.无限发挥英汉语言形态学差别汉语没有什么形态变化,使用非常方便。比如同样都是行为动词“写”字。汉语只用一个“写”字。英语则会在不同的时态中出现不同的词性变化。比如:I’mwritingabook.Iwroteabookyesterday.Ihavewrittenabook.Ishallwriteabooknextyear.题一题面:谓语错误多第1页http://www.jiandan100.cn1.Whynotdoyourhomeworkquick?2.Don’tbeworry.Don’tworriedaboutit.3.IfIwereyou,Iwill…4.Youshouldbeconfidence,whichwillhelpyou.5.You’dbetterdon’tgetnervous.6.YoucouldlistensomeEnglishsongs.7.Don’tafraidofspeakingEnglish.动词出错类型1.分不清楚两类动词:be动词和实意动词2.动词时态3.therebe句型和have的混用4.一致性beV.S.doW:Whenyouarefinishwashingyourhands…R:Whenyoufinishwashingyourhands…谓语动词的时态W:Shelikeitverymuchandreadsittotheclass.R:Shelikeditverymuchandreadittotheclass.W:Hesaidhewillgobackhome.R:Hesaidhewouldgobackhome.W:Waterwillboilat100℃.R:Waterboilsat100℃.thereV.S.haveW:Therehavemanystudentsplayedintheplaygroundeveryafternoon.(×)R:Manystudentsplayin….Thelakehasice.(v)Thereisiceonthelake.(v)一致性错误主谓,数,时态的不一致W:Onceonehavetruth,hecanbehappyashewishes.R:Onceonehastruth,hecanbehappyashewishes.第2页http://www.jiandan100.cn用词错误W:Hegavemeaverygoodadviceyesterday.R:Hegavemeapieceofverygoodadviceyesterday.词性误用介词当动词;形容词当副词;名词当动词W:Fewpeoplecanaroundtheworld.R:Fewpeoplecantravelaroun...