2014年12月年大学英语四级考试真题（一）答案与详解2014年12月大学英语四级考试真题(一)答案与详解PartⅠWriting审题思路本篇题目一改过去常写的议论文，要求写对自己影响最大的大学同学。根据题目要求，写作重点应当是描述，而不是议论。考生首先应直接或间接地引出主题，然后通过具体事例阐释该同学对“我”产生重大影响的原因,最后发表议论，照应前文，升华主题。由此可知，题目要求写一篇夹叙夹议，以叙述为主的作文。写作提纲一、提出观点：同学“Tom”改变了“我”（besubjecttobeingpessimistic，strivetoencourage,appreciate)二、阐释主题：1、在他的帮助下，我发现英语没那么难(beconfusedabout，makeprogress)2、他教我如何面对挫折(livethroughsetbacks)三、升华主题：l、“Tom”让我认识到了自信和乐观的重要性(thesignificanceofself-confidenceandoptimism)2、这种态度使人受益终身(benefitpeopleallhislife)范文点评全文翻译对我影响最大的大学同学我曾经对自己的学习并不那么自信，而且遇到挫折时就容易悲观。然而，当我的一个大学同学汤姆竭尽全力鼓励我的时候，我发现自己渐渐地有所改变。我非常感激他对我的帮助。高分范文精彩点评AClassmateWhoHasInfluencedMeMostinCollege①Onceuponatime,Iwasnotsoconfidentaboutmystudyandwassubjecttobeingpessimisticwhenconfrontedwithfrustrations.②However,IfoundmyselfgraduallychangingasTom,oneofmyclassmatesincollege,strivedtoencourageme.③Ireallyappreciatehishelp.④IusednottobegoodatEnglish；however,wheneverIwasconfusedabouttheteacher’sexplanation,healwaysinterpretedittomein-anexplicitway.Gradually,IfoundEnglishnotsodifficultandmadeprogressdaybyday.⑤Inaddition,itwasTomwhokeptguidingmehowtolivethroughallkindsofsetbacksinlife.⑥I’llneverforgettheverydaywhenIfailedmyspeechcontestandIwasoverwhelmedandashamed.⑦Tomtoldmethatnobodycandefeatapersonifheisdeterminedtostanduptoeveryfailure.⑧Withhisencouragement,Iregainedconfidence,realizingthatoptimismwasalwaysthekeytosuccess.⑨ThankstoTom,Ieventuallylearnedthesignificanceofself-confidenceandoptimism.Theynotonlyserveasindispensablecharacteristicsofpersonalitybutalsowillbenefitpeopleallhislife.①②通过描述那个曾经缺乏自信而且悲观的“我”渐渐地有所改变引出...
