TaskLearningAimsBytheendofclass,westudentsareexpectedto1.Findouthighlightsandproblemsinourownwritingaswellasourpeerswhilefulfillingsometasks.2.focusonwritingproblemsofcontentsandlanguages,suchasthelackofdetailsaboutideas,poorwordchoicesandboringsentences,etc.3.improveouroralandwrittenabilityinevaluating(评估)andimprovingbothourpiecesandothers’,especiallyeditingourownfirstdrafts.Whatproblemsofwritingwillbemainlysolved?IlikeartbestBothmyteachersandclassmatesthinkIamabletosingwellbecauseIhaveagiftforsinging.Ibegantolearnmyfirstsong‘Twinkle,twinkle,littlestar’whenIwassixyearsold.AtthattimeIfoundthatsingingwassuchaninterestingthing,uptonow,Ihavelearnedovertwohundredsongs.Inmysparetime,Ioftensingsongstoothers.Everyoneishappytobemylisteners,becauseofmypassionandconfidence.EventhoughIcannotbeaprofessionalsinger,Istillgetalotoffunfromsinging.Becauseofsinging,mylifebecomesmorecolourful.Let’sreviewifthepieceisfinishedwellenough.一.查作品完成度Doesthewritermanagetotellreaderswhatartformhelikesbest?whetherheisgoodatthisartfrom?whenhebecameinterestedinthisartform?whetherhehasanystoriesaboutthisartform?Howimportantthisartfromistohim?AdaptedfromthequestionnaireinthetextbookLet’scheckifthewriterfinishesthewritingtaskGoodorganizationCharacteristicsofgoodwritingGoodwritingFinelanguageEnoughcontents二.评作品成熟度IlikeartbestBothmyteachersandclassmatesthinkIamabletosingwellbecauseIhaveagiftforsinging.Ibegantolearnmyfirstsong‘Twinkle,twinkle,littlestar’whenIwassixyearsold.AtthattimeIfoundthatsingingwassuchaninterestingthing,uptonow,Ihavelearnedovertwohundredsongs.Inmysparetime,Ioftensingsongstoothers.Everyoneishappytobemylisteners,becauseofmypassionandconfidence.EventhoughIcannotbeaprofessionalsinger,Istillgetalotoffunfromsinging.Becauseofsinging,mylifebecomesmorecolourful.二评作品成熟度结构:1.文章段落是否清晰易读?2分2.文章开头是否吸引读者?1分3.文章结构是否有所感悟?1分内容:1.文章是否讲述故事而非告诉事情?3分2.文章是否有生动情节和细节描写?3分3.文章全部内容是否与主题密切相关?2分...
