第七课时SectionB(3a~4)单元同步作文导练剖析“”本单元是以生活习惯为话题,着重强调人们日常生活中好的和坏的习惯。故我们的写作目标就是描述课余时间活动安排及基本的饮食结构,并恰当地使用表频度的副词及短语。由于本单元书面表达是描述课余时间活动安排,故使用一般现在时态。教材中出现的相关句型:①Henevergoesshopping.②Ihaveclassonceaweek,everyMonday.③Shesaysit'sgoodformyhealth.④Andtwentypercentdonotexerciseatall.⑤NinetypercentofthemusetheInterneteveryday.⑥Moststudentsuseitforfunandnotforhomework.⑦Thebestwaytorelaxisthroughexercise.⑧Exercisesuchasplayingsportsisfun.⑨However,shehassomebadhabits,too.⑩Herparentsarenothappybecauseshehardlyeverhelpswithhousework.典例“请根据下面提示写一篇论述早起(earlyrising)”重要性的文章。1.早起有益健康。2.早起的具体好处:(1)可以做早操来锻炼身体;(2)对学习有好处。3.大家都应该养成早起的习惯。要求:1.短文中应包含上面提示内容,但是不能逐条翻译,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2.词数:80词左右。模板这是一篇提纲式作文,话题与本单元相符,根据题目要求及提示可考虑采用下面的模板。范文点评EarlyrisingisimportantEarly_rising_is_good_for_us_in_many_ways.①First②,itishealthyforthemindandthebody.Wecandomorningexercisestokeepushealthy③.It'salsogoodtotakeawalkalongthestreet.Second,earlyrisinghelpsuswithstudies.Whenwegetupveryearlyinthemorning,everythingaroundisquiet.Inthemorningwecanlearnmorequicklyandmemorizewhatwehavelearnteasily.Third,earlyrisinggivesusenoughtime,sothatwecanhavearelaxingbreakfast.So_I_think_it's_important_for_us_to_form_the_habit_of_getting_up_early.④①开门见山地提出了本文的论点——早起有益。②first,second,third分层次论证使得文章清晰、条理。③begoodfor,keepsb.healthy,sothat的运用让行文更加流畅。④文章结尾作者表达了自己的看法,给出了结论,既照应了开头也重申了自己的观点。技法提升实战演练“”你们班黑板报本期英语角话题为介绍你的家人或朋友的业余活动。假设你的父亲是一名医生,平时工作很忙,但他的业余活动丰富多彩(colorful),如下表。活动频率锻炼一周三次购物一周一次看电影一月一次上网一周两次读书每天请根据以上提示写一篇英语短文刊登在你班黑板报上,80词左右,可适当发挥。Onepossibleversion:Myfatherisadoctor.Heisusuallybusy,buthedoesdifferentactivitiesinhisfreetime.Heexercisesthreetimesaweek.Onweekends,heoftengoesshopping.Heshopsonceaweek.HegoestothemoviesonceamonthandusestheInternettwiceaweek.Heenjoysreadingverymuch.Hereadsbookseveryday.Hethinksreadingmoreisgoodforhismind.Howcolorfulhisfreetimeactivitiesare!