北师大版《初中英语》八年级下册Unit1TechnologyandtheFutureLesson4CommunicationWorkshop第二课时小组互评内容开头介绍工作家庭休闲结尾总结得分连词时态我喜欢的句子(用红色曲线划出)范文欣赏Inthecoming100years,howwouldourlifeturnouttobe?Tomyviewpoint,theremustbegreatchangesatthattime.Firstofall,itisextremelypossiblethatrobotscanbringusalotofconvenienceandgaiety.Robotswillhelpusinmanyfields,forexample,theycanreduceourworkloadingofhouseworkandcommunicatewithusjustlikeourclosefriendstomakeushappy.Secondly,humanbeingscanliveintheseawhenhotsummercomes.Thirdly,ourcarscanflyjustlikeaeroplanes.Atlast,peoplemaybenotsobusyandtheycanspendaholidayonmoon.范文欣赏Inthefuture,IthinkIwillworkinahospitalasadoctor.BecauseilikeChinesesmedicineverymuchandIthinkdoctorscanhelpmanysickpeople.InthefutureIwilllivewithmyfatherandmothernearthesea.Allmyfamilyliketheseaandthefreshairnearthesea.Inmyfreetimewewillsitonthebeachtoenjoythebeautifulseneryandlistentothesoundofthewaves.Ithinkwewillhaveagoodtimethen.修改作文1.根据同伴的评价2.学习范文中的好句子3.自己的感悟Homework继续修改作文