第一篇：(修改版)雅思写作高分宝典

雅思写作高分宝典（打印稿）

雅思A类议论文写作

第一节——教育与学习

1、向老师还是从网络、电视上学知识

Students at school and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources(such as the Internet, television).To what extend do you agree or disagree? 【Model Essay】

In the Information Age, students have more accesses to all kinds of information.Some people argue that they should grasp every means to learn rather than learn from teachers, while others hold the opposite view.Speaking for myself, I stand on the side of the former one.No doubt, it is absolutely necessary for students to learn their lessons in class with teachers at schools and universities.But, at the same time, we find some knowledge seems practically useless, and teachers are often enthusiastic to explain some theories, which are not of much use for most of the students in their future.Such lessons are not suitable for everyone.Some students may feel boring and their requests for specific knowledge cannot be met, too.Using a range of sources such as the Internet and television to learn has obviously merits.On the one hand, students can study on line efficiently.For example, modern technology has provided many powerful computer assisted language learning programs that help students with pronunciation, vocabulary, grammar, reading and writing of different languages.On the other hand, students can learn practical skills which are taught on the Internet and television by using specific examples.Knowledge and art from these sources would be useful supplements to those from lessons at schools and universities.From the above mentioned analysis, we can safely draw the conclusion that other sources like the Internet and television are indispensable supplements to the traditional education forms.And students should also learn much more from the Internet and television.【高分词汇】 ★grasp vt.抓住，抓紧

例He thought mathematics more difficult to grasp than physics.○译他觉得数学比物理更难捉摸 ○★enthusiastic adj.热心的，热情的

例China has the most enthusiastic fans in the world.○译中国有全世界最热情的球迷 ○★be suitable for 适合……的

例 The weather is suitable for outdoor activities.○

译天气适合户外运动 ○★practical adj.实际的、实用的

例 The plan takes on a more practical aspect.○译这个计划具有更切合实际的性质 ○★supplement n.补遗、补充 v.补充

例Try a B vitamin supplement.○译试着补充些维生素B ○★indispensable adj.不可缺少的，绝对必要的

例 The computers are now an indispensable tool in many businesses ○译目前，计算机是很多公司不可或缺的工具 ○【万能句型】

1.Some people argue that …, while others hold the opposite view.Speaking for myself, I stand on the side of the former one.译文： 一些人认为……，然而其他人持有相反的观点。在我看来，我支持前者。解读：这种句型结构适用于第一段，引出题目中双方的观点，同时表明自己的立场，表示支持前者或后者的观点。

2.From the above mentioned analysis, we can safely draw the conclusion that… 译文： 通过上面的分析，我们可以得出结论，那就是，……

解读：这种句型结构适用于结尾段，承接上文，并给出结论。这种句型结构在绝大多数的议论文结尾都可以使用。

2、出国留学的利弊

More and more students choose to go to another country for their higher education.Do you think the benefits outweigh the problems associated with it? 【Model Essay】

In order to acquire more knowledge, more and more people decided to further their study abroad.I believe that the benefits of studying abroad for higher education are far greater than problems that could be associated with it.There are many reasons supporting my view.First and foremost, students can learn advanced knowledge and management experience which can widen their horizons and minds.Then, studying abroad can provide a good language environment to students and make it easy to pick a language, which can contribute to remove language barrier and make international cooperation much easier.Besides, studying abroad can cultivate students’ ability to live independently and their characters, for they have to deal with many problems and learn how to be accustomed to a new environment and how to get along with foreign teachers and classmates.Last but not least, studying abroad is an excellent way for

students to learn about themselves and the world in which they live in.By communicating with foreign friends, they will experience the characteristics of a distinct culture and see the similarities to and differences from their own.However, studying abroad also brings about many disadvantages.Firstly, students will be confronted with so many psychological problems.They often feel lonely and helpless in a new environment.Furthermore, the tuition is very high, which is a very heavy burden to the average people.To sum up, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages greatly.We should encourage students study abroad.When they accomplish their curriculum, they can make more contribution to the construction of our society.【高分词汇】

★acquire vt.获得，学到

例The company has recently acquired new offices in central London.○译公司最近在伦敦市中心弄到了新的办公室 ○★further vt.促进，推进

例We’ll do all we can to further your plans.○译我们将经历促成你们的计划。○★associate vt.是发生联系，使联合

例I don’t associate the two ideas.○译这两个概念我联系不起来。○★horizon vt.范围，视野

例Go out for broaden your horizon.○译出去开开眼界。○★cultivate vt.培养

例She cultivates her mind by reading many books.○译她博览群书，修身养性。○★deal with 应付，处理；对待

例He must deal with many difficulties.○译他必须应付许多困难。○★be accustomed to习惯于

例He is accustomed to loneliness.○译他对于孤独已经习以为常。○★get along with 与……和睦相处

例He is good-tempered;he gets along with everyone.○译他脾气好，和谁都处得来。○

3、老师在信息时代的作用

Teachers used to convey information, but now with wide resources of information from the Internet, there is no role for teachers to play in modern education.Do you agree or disagree? 【Model Essay】

Nowadays, the computer is growing in popularity in education for its marvelous functions.Some people, therefore, claim that teachers` roles are not significant any more in the Information Age given the convenience and efficiency of the Internet in terms of information access.As far as I am concerned, however, this point of view seems a bit partial and misleading.Most important of all, it is often the case that teachers can benefit students in many ways which computers cannot.Indeed, teachers often bring students a host of knowledge and ideas out of text books, such as ethics and such kind of things.There are plenty of vivid evidences to support the opinion that teachers are usually serving as the guide for students, a role which can never be performed by computers.For example, when I studied in high school, one of my teachers helped me with my study and taught me how to deal with difficulties in my life as well.It is impossible for computers to fulfill these actions.In addition, a more subtle point is that young students are more susceptible to the adverse influence of computers.It is a general principle that juveniles are usually lack in the sense of judgment to tell right from wrong.So they are more likely to be distracted from study by the lure that comes along with computers.Therefore, teachers are superior to computers in cultivating students.To conclude, it is all very well to suggest that teachers invariably enjoy the most crucial role in fostering young people, we should not lose sight of the dramatic benefits brought by computers as well.That is to say, teacher can never give way to computers buy they can make computers facilitate their jobs.【高分词汇】

★convenience n.便利，方便，有益

例 The house has all the modern conveniences.○译这栋房屋有各种现代化的设施。○★in terms of 就......而言，从……方面说来

例He referred to your work in terms of high praise.○译他对你的工作大加赞扬。○★ethics n.道德规范，伦理学

例 The ethics of his profession don`t permit him to do that.○译他的职业道德不允许他那样做。○

★subtle adj.敏感的，微妙的

例 Her whole attitude had undergone a subtle change.○译她的整个态度发生了微妙的变化。○★be susceptible to 对……敏感

例In his weakened condition, he is very susceptible to cold.○译他身体很弱，因此很容易患感冒。○★superior adj.较高的，上级的，较好的

例You’re a very superior young woman.○译你是一个非常优秀的年轻女性。○★foster vt.养育，抚育，培养

例Nowadays young couple sometimes foster.○译现今年轻夫妇有时领养别人的孩子。○★give way to 让路，让步

例Cloudy mornings give way to clear evenings.○译【谚】早晨云遮日，晚上星满天。○★facilitate vt.使便利，减轻……的困难

例Tractors facilitate farming.○译拖拉机使耕作便利。○【万能句型】

1.As far as I am concerned, however, this point of view seems a bit partial and misleading.译文： 在我看来，这种观点有点偏颇并且容易令人误解。解读：这个句型常常用于第一段的末尾，表明作者的立场和观点。2.Most important of all, it is often the case that … 译文： 最重要的是，……

解读：在这个句型中，it is often the case 一般不用翻译，它所表述的实际内容就是that后面的内容。省略了it is often the case 也没有错，放在这里主要是为了增加文章的语言色彩。

4、通过看电视学习

Some children can learn efficiently by watching TV.Therefore, they should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and at school.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 【Model Essay】

There are many ways of learning, and watching TV is one of them.Some children can learn quite well by watching TV.Hereby, some people argue that children should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and at school.As far as I am concerned, however, this point of view seems a bit absurd and ridiculous.On one hand, in spite the function of learning, TV has so many demerits.Firstly, watching TV is harmful to eyes.Staring at TV for a long time may lead to short sight.Secondly, not all the contents on the TV are suitable for children.Some of TV programs contain violence and obscenity, which are harmful to the children`s growth.Thirdly, long time sitting before TV is not good for physical growth.Staying in one position for a long time can lead to crookback.On the other hand, apart from TV, there still are other efficient ways which can help children to learn.First of all, children can comprehend considerable number of things by playing games.Traditional games do good to exploit children`s wit, and modern games help them to get a rough idea about the society.Then, telling stories is another efficient way.Encouraging children to tell stories can develop their observing abilities and language skills.Last, sightseeing is also a valid method which can help children contact close with the nature.For example, organizing children to the zoo can give them vivid images of the animals.Once you have known all the above-mentioned, you must agree with me that the idea of encouraging children to watch TV both at home and at school is absolutely insane.Watching TV is just one of many effective learning methods, but not the only one.【高分词汇】

★absurd adj.荒谬的，可笑的

例 What an absurd suggestion!○译多么荒唐的建议！○★ridiculous adj.荒谬的，可笑的

例It`s the most ridiculous thing I`ve ever heard in my life.○译这是我有生以来听到最荒唐可笑的事。○★in spite of 虽然，尽管

例I went out in spite of the rain.○译 尽管下雨我仍然外出。○★suitable…for 合适的

例 He hasn`t any suitable shoes for the wedding.○译适合在婚礼上穿的鞋他一双也没有。○★efficient adj.有效地，有能力的

例 She is an efficient manageress.○译她是个有能力的经理。○★comprehend vt.领会，理解

例I did not comprehend his meaning.○译我不理解他的意思。○★vivid adj.生动的，鲜明的

例 A vivid picture is present to our eyes.○译一幅栩栩如生的画面出现在我们面前。○【万能句型】

1.Hereby, some people argue that… 译文： 因此，一些人认为……

解读：这个句型一般用于开头段第二句，也就是在第一句介绍背景之后用于引出某些人的观点。

2.Once you have known all the above-mentioned, you must agree with me that… 译文： 一旦你了解了上面所提到的，你肯定会同意我的观点，那就是……

解读：这种句型一般用于最后一段第一句，对前面所论述的内容作出总结，并进一步强调作者观点。考生应熟练运用这种句型。在结尾段直接用I believe…这样的句型，虽然没有错误，但缺少语言色彩。恰当运用上面的句型加分的机会更大。

5、各种课程对职业的重要性

Some people think that schools should concentrate on academic classes, because they are helpful for further career.But they think music and sports classes are not useful.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 【Model Essay】

Recently, whether schools should concentrate on academic classes has triggered a heated discussion.Some people contend that career-oriented education for college students should be encouraged and schools should mainly provide academic classes.But there are also a majority of people suggest that personality-oriented education is necessary and music and sports classes should also be offered.Personally, I am inclined to be on the side of the latter one in the following reasons.On the one hand, if schools only taught academic classes, the school life would definitely be monotonous and boring.No one can tolerate such tough days.Most students treasure their happy years in school, because they are colorful and persified.On the other hand, music and sports lessons are extremely important to students.To start with, sports and music can accompany one throughout his life.Some students may forget the academic knowledge learned at school, but they will not forget how to do sports and appreciate music.Furthermore, music classes can cultivate one’s mind and temperament, which are helpful in building one’s optimistic personality.Sports can help students keep fit and build up strong character.Last but not least, sports and music can raise one’s taste.People with good taste of music and sports usually keep away from bad behaviors.Based on the above discussion and analysis, we can see that academic classes are not as important as some people think, and music and sports classes are not useless, either.Academic classes develop one’s ability;music and sports classes improve one’s personality charm.In contemporary society, only able persons with fine character and moral win the career.【高分词汇】

★concentrate on专心，把思想集中于

例 Many firms are concentrating on increasing their markets overseas ○译许多公司正在集中精力开拓它们的海外市场。○★monotonous adj.单调的，无变化的

例 She thought life in the small town was monotonous.○译她觉得小镇上的生活单调而乏味。○★tolerate vt.忍受，容忍

例she cannot tolerate that rude fellow.○译她不能容忍那个粗鲁的家伙。○★treasure vt.珍爱，珍惜

例I certainly treasure the friendship between us very much.○译我当然非常珍视我们之间的友谊。○★temperament n.气质，性情

例Success often depends on temperament.○译成功常常取决于一个人的性格。○★keep fit保持健康

例 We work out regularly to keep fit.○译我坚持锻炼以保持健康。○【万能句型】

3.Some people contend that …But there are also a majority of people suggest that… 译文： 一些人主张……，但是也有许多人建议…… 解读：这种句型常常用于第一段，介绍双方观点。

2.Personally, I am inclined to be on the side of the latter one in the following reasons.译文：个人而言，我倾向于后者，理由如下。

解读：这个句型结构一般用于开头段最后一句，表明作者赞成的观点，同时引起下文。

6、学习与职业发展

Some people think that studying in a college or university is the best way for students to prepare for their future career.But others think they should leave school as soon as possible to develop their career through work experience.Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.【Model Essay】

Time spent in campus is not always treated with great importance.Some parents may choose other ways for their children’s post-high-school period, namely, helping them find jobs, rather than sending them to a college.I can find myself against this act for many reasons, amongst which we can figure some strongest ones as follows.My first con against this behavior is that education is not just a benefit but also one’s rights.Without education, as Gorge Orwell had once said, is to be deprived of the most precious privilege in our time as a modern man.With college education, youngsters can choose a better way of doing things correctly and efficiently.The sharp contrast between those who have received well education and those without is not just financially, but more vitally, spiritually.Admittedly, we can find cases of some people achieve without college education, but these cases are famous only because they are rare.Those people who succeed with a college degree are more common.The absence of university education is hard to imagine in our days.The prospect of those juvenile workers or businessmen would be even dimmer than ever before.For in our age, knowledge is not only the power, but also the know-how to solving problems and gaining a much larger fortune.Therefore we should always encourage kids to further education and even more, we should fund those who cannot afford their college study ,because their future is the future of our nation.【高分词汇】

★deprive vt.剥夺，使丧失

例 She has been deprived of sight for some year.○译她失明已有几年了。○★privilege n.特权，特别待遇

例 We need to allow a privilege to him.○译我们需要给他一种特权。○★prospect n.景色，前景

例 The prospect of this young team is beyond measure.○译这支年轻队伍前途不可限量。○

★dim vt.使暗淡，使失去光泽

例 His defection from the party dims his political career.○译他的叛党使得他政治前途黯淡。○★further education进修

例What are my opportunities for additional training or further education? ○译我有多大的深造或进修的机会？ ○【万能句型】

1.I can find myself against…for many reasons, amongst which we can figure some strongest ones as follows.译文： 我有很多理由反对…，在这些理由当中，我们能发现下面一些是最具有说服力的。解读：这种句型一般用于第一段最后一句，表明作者的立场，引起下文。2.My first con against this behavior is that… 译文： 我反对这种行为的第一个理由是，……

解读：这种句型一般用在第二段的第一句，解释作者反对某种行为或观点的第一个原因。

第二节——经济与社会

7、技术与贫富差距

Some people believe the range of technology available to inpiduals today is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor.Do you agree or disagree? 【Model Essay】

Technology is one of the most powerful forces in society today.It is being put to use everywhere, in homes and organizations of all sizes and helps millions of people do their jobs more effectively each day.Some people, however, believe the range of technology will widen the gap between the rich and the poor.In fact, I believe that the gap between rich and poor people will narrow because of the new technologies.There are numerous reasons why I hold this opinion, and I would explore a few of the most important ones here.First and foremost, the development of technology has made the price of high-tech products less expensive, so even the poor can afford cell phones and computers, which used to be symbols of wealth.That is to say, more people than ever have the opportunity to take advantage of the new technologies, which will definitely decrease the gap between the rich and the poor.Besides, another example is from the way that people travel.We used to take a train, but presently, most people would prefer to take a flight if the destination is quite far away.Such gap between the rich and the poor is not as obvious as before.Last but not least, some poor people who are intelligent can also make good use of the technologies.There are many examples which demonstrate how some poor persons become rich by using high technologies.To conclude, wealth imbalance is not the result of technological development, but the disparity of information.The technology is just the remedy to the disparity.I believe with the range of technology available to people, the gap between the rich and the poor will keep decreasing.【高分词汇】

★ put to use 使用，利用

例 We shall put it to good use.○译 我们将好好利用它。○★ widen v.加宽，放宽，扩展

例 Her outlook gradually widens ○译 她的眼光渐渐开阔了。○★ gap n.缺口，差距

例 There is a wide gap between the views of the two statements.○译 关于这点，两位政治家的政见有很大分歧。○★ narrow vt.使变狭窄，使缩小

例 The river narrows at this point.○译 河在这里变窄了。○★ high-tech n.高科技

例 Traditional products do not disqualify the producer from high-tech ○译 生产传统的产品，不表示它就不是高科技。○★ afford vt.提供，供应得起

例 She can afford a new computer.○译 她能买得起一台新电脑。○★ intelligent adj.聪明的，伶俐的，有才智的

例 I have not arrived at a very intelligent opinion on that matter.○译 我对那件事还没有高见。○★ demonstrate vt.示范，证明

例 All of those demonstrated the correctness of his analysis.○译 这一切都证明了他分析的正确性。○★ disparity n.不同，不等

例 Rich and poop live side by side but in conditions of extraordinary disparity.○译 富人和穷人毗邻，但居住条件极为悬殊。○★ remedy n.补救 vt.补救，矫正，修补

例 Your only remedy is to appeal to law.○译 你的唯一补救办法是诉诸法律。○★ available adj.可用到的，可利用的，有用的

例 I will send you all the periodicals available.○译 我将把我能得到的期刊都给你寄去。○【万能句型】

1.There are numerous reasons why I hold this opinion, and I would explore a few of the most important ones here.译文： 持这个观点有若干个原因，在这里我将阐述最重要的几个。

解读：这种句型一般用于第一段末尾，绝大多数的议论文写作题目都要用到这个句型。它有承上启下的作用：一方面用于强调自己的观点，同时引起下文。2.Last but not least, …

译文：最后但并非不重要，„„

解读：这个句型一般用于解释作者反对某种观点或行为的最后一个原因，较常见的是用于第四段或第二段最后一句。

8、富国对穷国的援助

Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries, but it does not solve the poverty.So rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than the financial aid.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 【Model Essay】

It is natural for rich countries to give financial aid to poor ones.However, afflicted with famine, wars, diseases, people living in those poverty-stricken countries are struggling for survival.In face of the severe situation, it is suggested that rich countries should also give other kinds of help to them.This view is based on the propensity of the following points.Many countries are willing to afford financial aid to poor countries, which has turned out to be of high importance to boost economy of poor nations.For example, some rich countries invest large amount of capital to develop industries in poor countries, so that more job opportunities are brought and living standard are enhanced there.However, this kind of aid cannot solve the poverty by the roots.The causes of being economically humble lies in persified aspects, such as bad education, the lack of new technologies.And diseases and epidemics could be another reason for poverty.Therefore, other sorts of assistance should also be given to the poor ones.To begin with, some advanced technologies should be

introduced to poor countries.Then the teams of teachers and doctors should be dispatched to the needy countries to effectuate the responsibilities of educational and medical aid.Furthermore, medicine and medical training courses should also be scattered to the countries which are in the agony of diseases and epidemics.To summarize, I believe rich countries are definitely duty-bound to help their poor counterparts out.That is to say, both financial aid and other varieties of help should be offered to release those poor people from poverty.And poor countries should also struggle for advance on their own, which can really make a difference.【高分词汇】

★ financial adj.财政的，金融的

例 The company was in deep financial difficulties.○译 该公司陷入了严重的财务困难。○★ aid n.帮助，援助

例 He went to the aid of the hurt man.○译 他前去援助那些受伤的人。○★ afflict vt.使痛苦，折磨

例 Famine and war still afflict mankind.○译 饥饿和战争仍使人类遭受痛苦。○★ struggle for 为„„斗争

例 We should help those who are still struggling for liberation.○译 我们应当帮助那些仍在为独立而斗争的人们。○★ turn out to be 结果是，原来是

例 He said he was a doctor, but later he turned out to be a cheat.○译 他自称是个医生，结果证明他是个骗子。○★ boost v.推进

例 This will be a great boost to the economy.○译 这对于经济发展将是一个巨大的促进。○★ by the roots 从根本上

例 They lost the match by the roots.○译 他们从根本上输了比赛。○★ effectuate vt.实行，完成

例 The disease do not prevent him from effectuating his plan.○译 疾病并未妨碍他实现计划。○★ release from 豁免，解除

例 He released me from my torments.○译 他解除了我的痛苦。○★ make a difference

例 That will make a vast difference.○译 那将会有天壤之别。○【万能句型】

1.This view is based on the propensity of following points.译文： 这种观点基于以下几点倾向。

解读： 这种句型常常用于第一段末尾，在介绍完题目观点之后，用这种句型过渡到下一段，表示接下来要分析能够支持这种论点的几个方面。过渡自然而流畅。2.However ,… can’t…The cause of… 译文： 然而，„„并不能„„，理由是„„

解读： 在论述完问题的一个方面之后，用这种句型可以继续展开话题。However表示转折。

9、消费品价格便宜的优缺点

Nowadays people live in the society where consumer goods are relatively cheaper to buy.Do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages? 【Model Essay】

Nowadays, with the rapid development of science and technology, the price of consumer goods continues to fall.This situation is pounding at people’s traditional consumption habit and life styles, using its advantages to gradually affect peoples’ lives.As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.There are several benefits for people to enjoy cheaper consumer goods.Most important of all, reducing the price of consumer goods can stimulate requirement and boost economy, which is especially important under the background of financial crisis.Besides, with the price of consumer goods less expensive, more ordinary people can afford to buy cell phones and computers , which help people do jobs more effectively each day.In addition, as far as the merchants concerned, in order to sell more, they often cut down the profit margin, which contributes to enhance the total amount of annual sales and reduce stocks.However, to this issue, some other people hold a different attitude, arguing that cheap consumer goods also bring harm and even disasters to us.For more businesses are striving for the same customers, the lower price may be the result of unfair competition and will undermine the social

order.At the same time, for the sake of profits, some merchants use inferior materials and turn out substandard products, which will ultimately do harm to the extensive consumers.Admittedly, there are some potential risks on reducing the price of consumer goods, but the law can be executed to supervise and manage dealers strictly.In fact, cheap consumer goods can benefit both the customers and the merchants.【高分词汇】

★pound vt.猛击；跳动

例 Her heart is pounding so loudly.○译她的心正怦怦直跳。○★as to 至于，关于

例I have no doubts as to your ability.○译关于你的能力我毫不怀疑。○★stimulate vt.刺激，激励

例 The art course stimulated me.○译艺术课激发了我的灵感。○★boost n.促进，改善，激励

例 This will be a great boost to the economy.○译这对于经济发展将是一个巨大的促进。○★crisis n.危机，危急关头

例 When a crisis comes they have gone.○译当危机来临时，他们已经走了。○★merchant n.商人，批发商，贸易商，店主

例 The merchants of Arab are doing their things all around the world.○译阿拉伯商人在世界各地做生意。○★cut down 减少，降低

例 We were for cutting down the cost of production.○译我们赞成降低成本。○★competition n.竞争，竞赛

例 There is keen competition between the two motorcar firms.○译两家汽车公司之间存在着激烈的竞争。○

★ undermine v.暗中破坏；逐渐削弱

例Illness undermined his strength.○译疾病逐渐削弱了他的力气。○★for the sake of 为了

例He argues for the sake of arguing.○译他是为了争辩而争辩。○★substandard adj.标准以下的，不合规格的

例 The loss was due to the use of substandard bags for which you should be responsible.○译该损失是由于包装不合标准所致，所以应由贵公司负责这一损失。○【万能句型】

1.Nowadays, with the rapid development of science and technology,… 译文： 如今，随着科技的快速发展，……

解读：这种句型一般用于第一段第一句，介绍背景，同时引出话题。2.There are several benefits for people to … 译文： 对于人们来说，……有很多好处。

解读：这种句型一般用于第二段第一句，表示开始分析有利的方面。3.However, to this issue, some other hold a different attitude , arguing that… 译文： 然而，对于这个问题,另一些人有不同的态度，认为……

解读：这种句型一般用于第三段开头，表示这段开始分析与前一段观点不同的另一种观点。

10、好的产品是否需要广告

If a product is good or it meets people’s needs, people will buy it.So advertising is unnecessary and no more than an entertainment.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 【Model Essay】

Good products have high prestige and quality, which can gain the love of the customers.It is true that a good product sell itself.So some people assert that advertising is unnecessary and no more than an entertainment.Superficially, the above sounds reasonable.But when carefully weighing in the mind, we find that it goes against the fact.A number of causes account for my point.To begin with, as far as some companies such as Nintendo, Apple, etc, are concerned, it is important for them to spread their most positive and interesting products information to compete against their rivals.These companies are well-known not only for their great customer service and

reliable products, but also their advertisements.Apple is known for its humorous adverts.And Nintendo often has colorful advertising aimed towards the youth.These advertisements make people all over the world more familiar with the companies and more curious about their products.Then, in fact, advertising has proved to be a means of getting the latest product news to spread out quickly and effectively.The companies would probably find that adverts, even if entertaining, can help new products sale tremendously.Admittedly, some companies are so popular with the public that advertisements are no more than reminders to the masses that they are ever-present in daily life.Examples would be the corporations like Coca-Cola and McDonald’s which are so well-known in most countries that their adverts have stopped describing their products but focused more on the images of the companies themselves.For such companies, advertisement is an unnecessary entertainment.However, they may never have reached that status without advertising.For that reason, advertisement is surely not unnecessary.【高分词汇】

★prestige n.声望，威望

例 The old universities of Cambridge still have a lot of prestige.○译历史悠久的剑桥大学仍然享有很高的声望。○★reliable adj.可靠的，可信赖的

例 The news is reliable.○译这消息靠得住。○★ even if 即使

例 we should practice economy even if we are rich.○译即使我们富裕了，也仍应该厉行节约。○★reminder n.提醒的人，暗示

例I wrote a reminder in my daily planner.○译我在我的每日记事簿里写了个备忘字条。○【万能句型】

1.Superficially, the above sounds reasonable.But when carefully weighing in the mind, we find that it goes against the fact.A number of causes account for my point.译文： 从表面上看，以上内容听起来很合理，但经过仔细考虑之后，我们发现它违背事实。大量的理由说明了我的观点。

解读：雅思写作考试中，有些题目给出的观点在逻辑上或表面上看起来很合理，如本文中的观点。但却往往与实际情况不符。遇到这样的情况，就可以在第一段用这个句型引出作者对题目中的观点的评判，同时引起下文。

2.To begin with, as far as … are concerned, it is important for …to do … 译文： 首先，就……而言，对于……来说做某事很重要。

解读：这种句型一般用于第二段第一句，阐述作者持有某种观点的第一个原因。

11、企业迁出大城市的优缺点

The government should encourage industries and companies to move out of big cities and into regional areas.Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages? 【Model Essay】

Nowadays, more industries and companies develop in large cities, which causes plenty of problems like pollution, crowdedness and traffic jam.Some people suggest that the large factories and companies should move away from densely-populated areas like some metropolis.However, others oppose to their opinion.I will discuss both sides and give my own evaluation.Opponents raise many reasons to go against the vicinity between cities and large industries.They believe that many of these industries are hazardous and even fatal to human health.The monstrous system may deprive us the vigor and potential to enjoy our life and the products they produce.Proponents come up with quite different views.They firstly point out that not all industries are perilous to human, like some fine chemistry industries and even some tertiary industries, both of which can dwell harmoniously with people and offer them both products and job opportunities.They also believe moving these companies to regional areas is expensive and uneasy to the management, which may deter them from investing in their country.Personally, I side with neither side.This thesis is just too general in the scope and definition of the concept “industries and companies”.As we all well know, not every industry is harmful and noisy to us, but some of them are.Thus, how can we treat these different companies with an identical view? Putting them together and giving any comparison is quite unreasonable at all.Before we take any proposal, we had better think twice and then give our judgment.【高分词汇】

★metropolis n.首都，大城市

例Beijing is a metropolis in China.○译北京是中国的一个大城市。○★go against 违背，作对

例Don't go against your father.○译不要违背你的父亲。○★point out 指出；把注意力引向......例 This guide book points out the main facts of early American history.○译这本导游手册讲述了美洲早期的重要史实。○★deter v.阻止；制止

例Don't let failure deter you.○

译别让失败把你吓倒。○★at all 根本

例 No worry at all.○译别担心。○★think twice 三思，反复思考

例He told me to think twice before speaking.○译他叫我三思而后再发言。○【万能句型】

1.I will discuss both sides and give my own evaluation.译文：我将讨论双方的观点并给出我自己的评论。

解读：这种句型常常用于对称式写法的第一段的最后一句，引起下文，表示要分别讨论双方的观点，并在最后给出自己的结论。2.Opponents raise many reasons to go against...译文：反对者提出了很多理由反对.......解读：这种句型一般用于对称式写法的第二段的第一句，表示开始讨论反对者。3.Proponents come up with quite different views.译文：赞成者提出完全不同的观点。

解读：这种句型一般用于对称式写法的第三段的第一句，表示开始讨论支持者的观点。

12、个人为养老存钱

Some people say that it is the responsibility of inpiduals to save money for their own care after they retire.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 【Model Essay】

No one is alienated from the rest of the world.Thus, we can see no a single person to be solely living for himself--he must be simultaneously shouldering various duties for multifarious groups of people, such as employers and government, who must at the same time in turn undertake the duty of caring for him as well.I am not here to deny the necessity of saving money for one's aged life, but to state the reasons why the above parties should give their attention to inpiduals.What hits me at the first thought is that employers should have the liability to their employees, for they sacrificed their youth and shed tears and sweat for them.If employers were free to take the duties of their elderly employees, then they may feel so easy and comfortable to expel any of those “used” workers randomly.No just legislation can possibly tolerate this happen.And employers should have their duty to support the aged workers for their later part of life.Another party that should also attach importance to inpiduals is the government.People fight for their motherland with all their energy, health and even life.So undoubtedly, the government, like employers, should provide financial aid to citizens as well.As we can happily conclude, this world is not one that goes without justice and warmth between people.We give when we can and we take when we need.Employers as well as governments are due to unshakable responsibilities to give their care to inpiduals who have paid their efforts for them, which would be the way things ought to be.【高分词汇】

★alienate v.疏远

例 We'd better not alienate ourselves from the colleagues.○译我们最好还是不要与同事们疏远。○★shoulder vt.肩负，承当

例 You must shoulder the future of the country.○译你们必须肩负国家未来的重任。○★in turn 依次，轮流

例His policy was to beat each enemy in turn.○译他的方针是各个击破。○★undertake vt.承担，担任，许诺，保证

例He could undertake the work for the time being.○译他暂时能承担这项工作。○★liability n.责任，义务

例 What is your liability under the insurance contract? ○译按照保险契约贵方应负哪些责任呢？ ○★randomly adv.随便地，未加计划地

例 Few people are randomly violent.○译很少有人是随意发火的。○★attach importance to 重视

例We must attach great importance to these problems and take effective measures to solve them.○译我们必须高度重视这些问题，采取有力措施加以解决。○★unshakable adj.不可动摇的，坚定不移的

例It is our unshakable policy to help them do that.○译帮助他们发展是我们坚定不移的政策。○【万能句型】

1、I am not here to deny the necessity of..., but to state the reasons why...译文：在这里我并不否认......的必要性，我只是想说明......的原因。

解读：这个句型用在第一段，表示作者并不反对这种观点，在本文中，作者表示并不反对题目中的观点，但作者在下文主要论述的观点是but之后的内容。

2、What hits me at the first thought is that...for...译文：我第一点想说的是，„„，因为„„

解读：这种句型一般用于第二段第一句，解释作者持有某种观点的第一种原因。

第三节——工作生活与意识形态

13、信息技术和交通进步对工作和生活的影响

Today, people can work and live in anywhere they want, because of the improvement of communication technology and transport.Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 【Model Essay】

Nowadays, with the rapid development of communication technology and transport, people have more opportunities to choose the places where they work and live in.This phenomenon is often brought into public focus.People from different back grounds hold different attitudes towards it.From my own perspective, there are too many benefits that outnumber its disadvantages.The reasons are chiefly as follows.First and foremost, this development can optimize human and other resources and fuel business growth rapidly.Geographical distance is not hurdle any more to stop people from entering a flow state when they are fully absorbed.That is to say, it enables the working people to choose their ideal jobs, and at the same time, the employers can also recruit and retain right employees easily.Besides, the improvement of communication technology and transport can be a possible solution to many problems, such as traffic jams, air pollution and so on.For example, with the help of computers, the Internet, phones and other high-tech devices, people can work, shop, and study at home and fewer cars are driven on the roads.All in all, I admit the development also brings disadvantages, for example, more people rely on the modern technology and are reluctant to get in touch with others, but in many aspects, its merits obviously outweigh its drawbacks.【高分词汇】

★communication n.信息，通信

例All communications with the north have been by snowstorm.○译北部的一切通信均被暴风雨所阻。○★optimize vt.使最优化

例Design and optimize logistics solution.○译设计优化物流方案。○★fuel n.燃料

例Soot is usually the product of the imperfect combustion of fuel.○译煤烟通常是燃料不完全燃烧的产物。○★Geographical adj.地理学的，地理的

例Pollution of geographical environment is a serious problem.○译地理环境污染是一个严重的问题。○★distance n.距离，远离

例We spotted them at a distance of two hundred yards.○译我们在相距200码处就看到了他们。○★hurdle n.障碍

例In starting a new company, many hurdles must be crossed.○译刚创办一个公司时，必须克服许多障碍。○★far away 遥远，深远

例He lives far away from us.○译他住的地方离我们很远。○★moderate adj.中等的，适度的

例He has a room of moderate size.○译他有一个大小适中的房间。○★rely on 依赖，依靠

例You can rely on me for help.○译你可以依靠我来帮忙。○★reluctant adj.不顾的，勉强的

例He gives me a reluctant assistance.○

译他很不情愿地给了我帮助。○【万能句型】

1、People from different back grounds hold different attitudes towards it.From my own perspective, there are too many benefits that outnumber its disadvantages.The reasons are chiefly as follows.译文： 来自不同背景的人们对此都持有各自不同的态度。在我看来，这种现象的优点要远远大过其缺点。主要原因如下。

解读：这种句型常常用在第一段，首先说人们对这一问题态度各异，然后说出自己的观点，并为后面继续论述自己的观点做好铺垫和过渡。

2.All in all, I admit the development also brings disadvantages, for example,...but in many aspects, its merits obviously outweigh its drawbacks.译文： 总之，我承认，这种发展也带来了一些不利因素，例如，······，但在许多方面，他的优点明显大于缺点。

解读：这种句型常常用在最后一段，以让步的方式表达与前面主体部分论述的观点不同的一面，实际上是加强了对前面观点的论述。这种论述方式主要是为了避免观点偏颇。

14、体育设施与公众健康

Some people believe that to improve public health should increase the number of sports facilities;others believe that it has little effects and need other measures to improve it.Discuss both views and give your opinion.【Model Essay】

The construction of new sports facilities are definitely needed in an environment where people's health is in a declining state.However, there are those who believe that the way to improving people's health should lie in other measures that governments have to come up with to get people to live more healthily.In many countries, the lack of sports facilities has directly led to a sharp decline in the general public's involvement in sports activities, which is the major reason for overweight nowadays.If a wider range of sports and fitness facilities(swimming pools, basketball court and gymnasiums etc.)were available, then people would be more willing to spend time taking exercise, instead of watching television, playing video games or using computers at home.However, the building of such facilities may become a waste of time and money if they are built far away from where people live or if they are too expensive to use.In these cases, the government should spend more advertising healthier lifestyle.In the first place, a well-balanced diet will provide the body with all the nutrients needed, which can help people maintain health, improve immunity and reduce effects of illness.In the second place, enough sleep and less alcoholic are vital to health.These should be widely publicized among citizens.In the third place, the

government should also attach importance to the public mental hygiene problems and make mental therapy be available to all the residents.Based on the above discussion and analysis, we can see that only enlarging the number of sports facilities is far from enough and a series of measures as I have listed above should also be taken to improve public health.【高分词汇】

★come up with 提出，拿出

例I hope you can come up with a better plan than this.○译我希望你们能提出一个比这个更好的计划。○★spend...on...把„„花在„„

例He doesn't spend much time on his homework.○译他花在写作业上的时间不多。○★instead of(用„„）代替„„，（是„„）而不是„„

例Will you go to the party instead of me? ○译你替我赴宴好吗？ ○★well-balanced adj.很平衡，很均匀的，正常的，意识安全的

例We encourage and support all facets of a well-balanced work and personal life.○译我们鼓励和支持员工平衡好工作和个人生活的各方面。○★provide with 给„„提供；以„„装备

例Sheep provide us with wool.○译羊供给我们羊毛。○★improve v.改善，改进，提高

例If he can keep from smoking for a month or two, his health will improve.○译他要是一两个月不抽烟的话，健康一定会有起色的。○【万能句型】

1.In the first place,...In the second place,...In the third place,...译文： 首先，„„其次，„„其三，„„

解读：这种句型常用于论述作者支持或者反对某种观点的三点理由，或者用于表示列举。2.Based on the above discussion and analysis, we can see that …

译文： 基于以上讨论和分析，我们能认识到„„

解读：这一句型常常用于文章结尾段的第一句，承上启下，总结全文，从而得出自己的观点。

15、提倡健康的生活方式还是治疗病人

Some people think it is more important to spend public money promoting healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment for people who are already ill.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 【Model Essay】

Along with the rapid development of the society, people are attaching much importance to health.Many people think that more public funds should be spent promoting healthy lifestyles rather than on treatment for people who are already ill.After careful consideration, I, personally, stand on the side of the advocates.The reasons are presented below.First and foremost, I believe that the saying “an ounce of prevention equals a pound of cure” is true, because the most effective way to defeat something is by a preemptive strike.The amount of time and money invested in promoting a healthy lifestyle would be far less than the amount spent curing persons who were too careless about their health.In addition, the benefits of encouraging healthy living far outweigh the “benefits” of curing the sick.In fact, there are no true benefits to spending money curing the sick, which is only the result of people neglecting their health.If they took better care of their health, there would be far less illnesses to worry about.Furthermore, living a healthy lifestyle is beneficial to a person’s life and society as a whole.Healthy persons tend to be happier and think more clearly.They are also less likely to become ill, thus, saving money on health care.All in all, of course, I am not suggesting that investments for treating people who are already ill should be neglected, because some ailments are unavoidable, such as hereditary ailments like high blood pressure.However, illnesses brought about by an unhealthy lifestyle, such as Emphysema from smoking, are completely avoidable, and more should be invested in preventing avoidable illnesses.Many countries are beginning to ban smoking in public places, and have reported positive effects on public health as a result.This is just one example of how promoting healthy living which has proven to be effective.【高分词汇】

★ preemptive adj.抢先的

例I believe this was preemptive.○我认为这是先发制人的。★ neglect vt.忽视，疏忽

例 The government neglected industry.○政府忽视了工业。

★As a whole 整体来看，普遍说来，一般的说

例 There are some areas of poverty, but the country as a whole is fairly prosperous.○这个国家有些地区比较贫困，但总的来说是相当富裕的。★Health care 卫生保健

例Community health care is very important.○社区的卫生保健很重要。★ Avoidable adj.可避免的

例In fact, the mistakes are avoidable.○实际上，错误是可以避免的。★As a result 结果，因此

例As a result, he had to leave.○结果，他只得离开。【万能句型】

1.Along with the rapid development of the society, people are attaching much importance to„„

译文：随着社会的快速发展，人们开始越来越重视„„

解读：这种句型常常用于第一段第一句，介绍背景，同时引出话题。

2.After careful consideration, I, personally, stand on the side of the advocates.The reasons are presented below.译文：经过认真考虑，我个人支持这一观点。原因如下。

解读：这种句型常常用语第一段最后一句，表示赞成某种观点，并引起下文。

16、明天重要还是今天重要

An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious.” Some people think inpiduals and society pay more attention to the future than to the present.Do you agree or disagree? 【Model Essay】

An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious.” Some people also think inpiduals and society should attach more importance to the future than to the present.But another saying goes like this, “Yesterday is history;tomorrow is mystery;only today is a present.” So in my point of view, I would prefer to cherish today and strive for tomorrow.There are many reasons supporting my view.Most important of all, tomorrow is always a day after today and the future is abstract, which we can only imagine it in our mind.But we do know that today passes very quickly.So we must grasp it firmly and devote more efforts to work and study.If it is necessary for us to fulfill something today, let us finish it and do not leave it until tomorrow.Remember that today is more valuable and we must get hold of it rather than imagine what the future is like.Moreover, what we are doing at present decides what the tomorrow would be like.However, some people do not know the value of today, so they waste it in going to films, playing games and doing other useless things.Idleness is the thief of today which can bring us a failure future.Finally, what the actor said really means that tomorrow is hope and the hope is important and precious, which we should never give up.However, only hope cannot achieve anything.So we should grasp the present to work hard and to get near to the hope.In fact, as long as we catch hold of today firmly, tomorrow must be fantastic.【高分词汇】

★Precious adj.宝贵的，贵重的

例○He has sent me most precious gifts.译○他送给我极其珍贵的礼物。

★Prefer to 较喜欢；宁愿

例○I prefer country life to town life.译○我更喜欢乡村生活而不是城市生活。

★ cherish vt.珍爱，怀抱（希望等）

例○ The old lady tenderly cherished her dog.译○老妇人十分爱她的狗。

★Strive for 奋斗，争取

例○ They have strived for peace.译○他们为谋求Precious和平而争斗。

★ firmly adv.坚定地，稳固地

例○ We stood firmly against expansionism.译○我们坚决反对扩张主义。

★Devote vt.投入于，现身

例○ We should devote everything we have.译○我们应该奉献我们的一切。

★ Idleness n.闲散，懒惰。赋闲无事

例○ Idleness rusts the mind.译○懒惰脑筋要生锈。

★Give up 放弃；认输

例○I can’t answer that puzzle;I give up.译○我猜不出这个谜语，我认输了。

★ fantastic adj.幻想的，奇异的

例 What a fantastic goal!○译这球进的多漂亮！○【万能句型】

1.But another saying goes like this，“…”

译文：但是另外一句谚语是这样说的：“„„”

解读：这是引用谚语的一种句型，用谚语或古语来引出某种观点，使观点更有说服力。2.So in my point of view，I would prefer to„ 译文：因此，依我看来，我宁愿„„

解读：这种句型一般用在第一段，表明作者立场；也可放在最后一段，总结作者的观点。3.There are many reasons supporting my view.译文：有很多理由支持我的观点。

解读：这种句型一般用在第一段最后一句，引起下文。

17、保持健康是对社会还是对个人负责

People should look after their health as a duty to the society they live in rather than their personal benefits.To what extent do you agree or disagree？

【Model Essay】

The generally accepted definition of health is a state of complete physical，mental，and social well-being and not merely the absence of disease or infirmity.Some people maintain that people should look after their health as a duty to the society they live in rather than their personal benefits.I agree with this position and my arguments for this point are listed as follows.On the one hand，the healthy condition of the national people is the symbol of the nation’s peace and prosperity.We can’t forget the fact, in the end of 19th century, not only the Chinese people were sneered at “oriental illness”, but also the territory was invaded and exploited.And at the contemporary age, a nation’s prosperity very much depends on the contribution made by its citizens who are in good health.Healthy people can devote to working and bring more benefits to the society.They can enhance productivity of the society and create more fortune.As a result, the entire society tends to be more wealthy and harmonious.On the other hand, health care is the prevention, treatment, and management of illness and the preservation of mental and physical well-being through the services offered by the medical，nursing, and allied health professions.So we can see that people who neglect their health would impose heavy burdens on the society they live in.As mentioned above, we gradually recognized that health is a matter of everybody in practice but not an inpidual matter.It is a positive concept emphasizing both social and personal resources, as well as physical capacities.【高分词汇】

★ definition n.定义，释义

例I made a definition for this word.○译我给这个词下了定义。○★absence n.不在，缺席，缺乏，没有

例 A major problem is the absence of water.○★look after

照顾，照看（某人或某物）

例They don’t look after themselves very well.○译他们没有很好地照顾自己。○★prosperity n.繁荣

例The new agreement raised hopes for conditions of prosperity and harmony.○译新的协议唤起了人们对繁荣和和谐前景的期望。○★harmonious adj.和谐的，协调的，和睦的

例The advantages of harmonious relations far outweigh the disadvantages of confrontation.○译和谐关系的好处远远大于冲突的坏处。○★prevention n.预防，防止

例Prevention is better than cure.○译预防远胜于治疗。○★impose vt.强加，强迫

例Overcrowding impose mental stains.○译 过度拥挤使精神紧张。○【万能句型】

1.The generally accepted definition of …is… 译文：被普遍接受的„„的定义是„„

解读：这种句型一般运用在第一段，用定义的方法引出话题。被定义的往往是题目中的关键词。本文就是首先运用对“健康”一词定义，为下文展开话题作铺垫。2.On the one hand，„ 译文：一方面，„„

解读：这个句型一般用于论述作者赞成或反对某种观点的一个方面的原因，如果是用于第二段开头，这一句的内容就是该段的中心句，后面会包括几个更具体的原因。3.On the other hand，„ 译文：另一方面，„„

解读：这个句型一般用于论述作者赞成或反对某种观点的另一个方面的原因，和on the one hand配对使用。

第四节——环境与动物保护

18、技术发展与环境问题

Development in technology causes problems.Some people believe the solution to these problems is for everyone to live a simpler life, while others say that technology can solve these problems.Discuss both views and give your opinion.As we all know, certain developments in technology lead to environmental problems.The best example I can give for this is the industrial revolution, and manual labor was largely replaced by machines, which were operated by burning coal and fossil fuels.This is thought by many to be a major cause of pollution and other environmental problems since the waste and after–products of burning fuels are usually disposed of into the air and water.How to solve these problems? Before rendering my opinion, I think it is important to analyze the following arguments on two sides.Some people advocate that living a simpler life and less consuming lifestyle is a solution to the matter, and everyone should certainly make an effort to be less wasteful in their daily lives.However, although this method may be the most practical one, it would require an extraordinary amount of effort from everyone which perhaps a little too much to expect.And sadly, some people may not be cooperative with any steps taken to ensure such a lifestyle because they have become too comfortable in their over-consuming way of life.Others point out that technicians are working hard to find ways to keep the earth clear.For example, scientists have studied clean technologies like batteries and wind power for years because of the threat of climate change.At the same time, with the development of technology, energy companies can produce more energy while emit less carbon dioxide.Admittedly, both sides are reasonable.But they are one-sided.In my opinion, the country should build up and carry out scientific development philosophy in an all-around way and set up environment-friendly policies and systems to develop recycling economy and stick to the way of new industrialization.Moreover, we should reinforce international cooperation in terms of environmental protection and sustainable development.【高分词汇】 ★lead to 导致，引起

例 In given conditions, a bad thing can lead to good results.○译在一定条件下，坏事可以导致好的结果。○★industrial revol