第一篇：2010中考英语如何写好中考英语作文

中考英语如何写好中考英语作文

纵观我们国家的各大小考试，无论是中高考，还是将来的四、六级，研究生考试，英语写作都是英语水平测试命题当中的一个热点。原因很简单：运用英语进行流畅的写作是英语表达中一个很重要的部分。具体到中考，更是如此，大部分地区的孩子，基本是上初中后才开始系统化学习英语，对于一门陌生语言，从接触到熟悉，再到流畅表达，是需要一个过程的。学习了三年英语之后让学生进行书面的流畅表达，这是一个很高的要求。但是目前中学生英语写作水平总体仍处于一个较低层次。在讲评学生习作的过程中我经常发现初中孩子惯有的毛病：洋洋洒洒一百词的作文中，基本上全是中式英语；又如，满篇句子当中，竟然70%都是“I”开头的简单句等等。这样的水平在中考写作中是肯定拿不到高分的。当然中考作文中也有写得很好的文章，读来流畅地道，让人心旷神怡，耳目一新。在总结了一些学生写的中考作文通病和闪光点之后，我想以下的几点可以作为同学们备考时练习写作的一个参考，或者说是高分作文的一些技巧：

一、提炼字词句

一篇作文是由单词和句子组成的。这是写作最基本的要素，就像万丈高楼需要一砖一瓦层层盖起来一样，如果砖瓦质量不好，那么这座高楼很快就会垮掉。同样的，如果基本的词句掌握不好，那么我们在写文章的时候就会感觉提笔无从下手，甚至连一个句子都很难写出。这就是因为头脑中没有“存货”造成的。因此，从现在开始，我们应该重视字词句的提炼，把我们学过的，见到过的甚至在新闻、广播、杂志、电影里见到的优美的、地道的词句提炼出来为我所用。一般来说，我们掌握了初中教材要求的大部分词汇以及考纲中全部词汇和词组，写出一篇合格的作文并不是难事，然而，面对如此激烈的竞争，仅仅是一篇合格的文章就够了吗？恐怕不是的。因此，掌握更多的优秀词句能让我们在写作中出彩。我们可以从作文素材中进行词句的提炼：

第一个资源，也是我们最容易忽视的资源，就是我们手中的教材。

教材文章难度适中，词汇丰富，是非常好的词库。也许有的同学不以为然，那么我们看这个句子：A比B要美得多。如果让你用英语写出这个句子，你能想到的句型有几个？在你想到的句型中，是不是转来转去就那么几句：A is more beautiful than B, 或者A is more beautiful when compared with B , 或者B is not as beautiful as A„„这样的句型你会写，还有数万个和你一样的中学生也会写，但是如果你写出：Although A is beautiful, it pales when it is in comparison with B.(虽然A很美，但是与B相比便黯然失色了。)这样的句子，效果会大不相同。

第二个资源，基于教材，我们可以向外发散，任何你读过的报英文刊杂志，比如《21st Century》《China Daily》等等，都是很好的资源，还有很多经典的英文电影，英文歌曲也都是丰富的词库，从中可以提炼出非常多的优美的词汇和句子，改造一下，就可以放到我们的文章中，为我们的作文增色不少。

第二、巧用过渡词

所谓过渡词，就是表示先后顺序的first, second,„.at last，表示因果关系的as a result, due to, because of„，表示分述关系的what’s more, furthermore, besides, in addition等等。为什么要使用这样的词汇？原因有二：其一，我们每个人写的文章虽然内容几乎千篇一律，但是每个人的写作风格和逻辑思路不尽相同。怎样在短时间内让阅卷老师进入自己的逻辑体系，快速而精准的判断你的文章呢？过渡词就是一个很好的“向导”，它能够引导阅卷人的思路，让其短时间内对你的文章做出公允的评价；其二，我们列好提纲准备下笔的时候，总有一个先后顺序，总有一个逻辑结构，如何使自己的文章结构清晰，要点明确，中心突出，答案还是过渡词，使用了过渡词，可以规范自己的逻辑思路，让我们在有压力的写作之下能够做到

临危不乱，有条不紊，层次清晰，逻辑通畅。

第三、句式多变

如果一百份试卷里都是清一色的“I think”简单句，那阅卷人读起来将会多么的乏味，乏味至极的阅卷人又如何能给得出高分？所以，我们在写句子的时候，要尽可能的变换句式和结构，让文章富于变化，错落有致。具体地说：中考作文中，我们可以尝试使用更多的复合句，主要是宾语从句、状语从句以及尝试变化语态。例如，2008年中考北京卷作文题，以汶川地震为背景描写一个叫做林浩的小英雄的故事以及自身感受。其中有一句细节描写叫做“他救出了自己的同学并步行七小时到达安全地点。”例文给出的句子是“„he saved two of his classmates.Then he walked for seven hours to safety.” 这句话我们可以改写成为一个从句：saving two of his classmates, Lin Hao walked for seven hours to safety.如果再加上语态的变换，还可以改写成：Being saved from the earthquake, two of Lin Hao’s classmates walked for seven hours to safety with Lin Hao.这样的变化在作文中能够主动使用的话，一定会增加阅卷人的青睐，从而给你的文章增加获胜的筹码。

第四、善用名人名言

在中考作文中，很少有同学能主动写出名人名言为自己的文章画龙点睛。名人名言是精炼浓缩的，富有哲理和智慧的句子，经过数百年人们口耳相传到了今天，足以说明它的凝练和它的魅力。如果在文章中能成功使用合适的名人名言，那将会是怎样一番景象，其实不难想象。比如你在一篇讨论中学生该不该使用手机的文章中用了“Just as the saying goes, ‘every coin has two sides.’”，那效果就相当于一个美国人在汉语水平考试作文里写出了“中国人有句古话叫‘福兮祸之所倚，祸兮福之所伏’”一样的震撼！因此，学会使用名人名言，将会使我们的文章大放异彩。当然了，使用名人名言的前提是我们得记得住一定数量的名言。很多同学在写作的时候没有办法写出漂亮的名言来衬托，这一是因为自己平时积累不够，写不出合适的名人名言，第二是对名人名言没有形成条件反射，联想不到。大家在接下来的文章中不妨可以尝试一下，看看效果如何。

总之，冰冻三尺，非一日之寒，练习写作也是一样，三天打鱼两天晒网是不行的，必须得持之以恒的练习，才会有进步。上述的技巧也是要建立在练习的基础之上的，否则没有办法深刻体会，更何谈自如运用？只要勤加练习，相信每一位同学都能取得巨大的进步！

一、英语书面表达常用短语、连接词：

（1）、用于描述过程，让你的文章更富有条理性：

1.First,… Second,… Third,… Finally,…

2.First,… Next,… Then,… Finally,…

4.First,… Later on,…After that,… Last,…

二、用以下句型，你的文章层次分明：

1.First,…Besides,…In addition,… Also,…Finally,…

2.My first reason is,… My second reason is… Then,… Again,… Finally,…

3.First of all,…Also,… Finally,…

6.Some think that…On the other hand ,(另一方面来说)…But others think…

7.It’s true that….,However,…

8.It is important(necessary)to do(or: That)

9.We should pay special attention to..(or: Special attention should be paid to…)

10.We have made much effort, there is still more we need to make(We have learnt a lot, there is much more we need to learn…)

三、开头常用词：

1.As we know= It’s well known that…

2.It is widely accepted + that…

3.Every coin has two sides…

四、结尾常用词：

1.As a result2.In my opinion…3.I think…..4.In a word(总之；简而言之)…..5.From the above(mentioned)综上所述

6.I hope….五、表示上下关系的常用短语与连词：

1.As a result2.because of(this)3.therefore 因此，所以

4.as I have said 如我所说5.so that6.However 然而，可是

7.in order that;in order to(do……)8.on the other hand 另一方面来说

9.above all 最总要的是；尤其是10.anyway/anyhow 无论如何，总之

11.in other words 换句话说12.luckily

13.indeed 真正地14.moreover 此外，而且

15.generally 通常，普遍地16.in fact事实上

17.in short简言之；总之18.what’s more 另外；再说 表示层次关系：in addition, besides，what’s more，on the other hand,finally

表示举例关系：for example, such as...,take...for example

表示转折关系：but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the other hand, even

though, except, instead, instead of, of course, after all,表示条件关系：as long as只要,if,unless，表示并列关系：or, and, also, too, not only...but also, as well as, both...and,either...or,neither...nor

表示因果关系：because, because of,since, as, thanks to介词...多亏, therefore, as

a result(of),otherwise,否则so… that,such… that

表示让步关系：though, although, as, even if, even though, whether...or..., however,whatever, wherever,表示比较关系：be similar to, the same as, compared with(to)...just like, just as, not so(as)… as…

表示目的关系： so that;in order to;so as to……

表示强调关系：indeed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly,especially

表示概括归纳：in a word总之, in short总之, on the whole总的来看, generally

speaking一般来说, As

we all know, as I have shown, finally, at last, in conclusion综上所

述……as far as I’m concerned..就我而言

二、常用连接句型：

1.not only… but also;neither… nor…;either… or…

2.so … that,not… until…;enough…;as soon as…;

3.It is + adj.+ of / for sb to do sth

4.I think ……I don’t think…;I hope…

第二篇：中考英语作文

中考英语写作范文

1.【英语学习问题】：

We have been learning English for over 6 years and really love it.English is one of the most important langnages in the world.It’s necessary for us to learn it well.How do you study? Everyone learns English in different ways.I think the best way to improve your English is to improve your English skills.When I was in Grade 7, my English was very poor.One day, Mrs Zhang, my English teacher asked me to go to her office.She had a long talk with me.She encouraged me to study English well and gave me some good advice.This helped me a lot.I become confident now.And I’m making much progress.“Practice makes perfect”!I practice speaking English as much as possible.I believe my English will be much better in the future.I hope everyone makes progress.2.【环境保护问题】 例文

As we all know, the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse.Insome places we can’t see fish swimming in the river or trees on thehills.Somepeople even have no clean water to drink.So I think we must do something toprotect the environment..But what can we do? How to protect our environmemt?For example ,we can go to school on foot or by bike.we can use shopping basskets not plastic bags when we go shopping and we can use both sides ofthe paper when we write In a word ,if everyone pays more attention to ourenvironment , there will be less pollution and our lives will be better.“There is only one earth”,I hope everyone will protect our environmentwell.3.【保卫地球(Saving the Earth)】

As time goes by, man is making the earth sick.People cut down too many trees and leave rubbish everywhere.Factories let out their waste without doing anying to it.This has cause some serious problems.Such as the land is sandy, the river is dirty, the air is less clean, even the temperature of the earth is rising.What should we do to save the earth ? My suggestion is that we should plant more trees, put rubbish into dusbins and stop factories pouring waste directly into the air or rivers.In all, we have only one earth, we should do our best to protect it, or we will regret.4.【外出植树：】

Last Friday, our teacher told us that we would go to plant trees by the South River the next day.On Saturday morning I got up at six thirty and went to school with a bucket.My classmates

were waiting at the school gate with buckets and hoes.As soon as we got to the South River, we began to plant trees on the river bank.Some students were digging holes, the others were planting or watering the young trees.After we finished our work, we were tired.But we all felt happy to see the young trees we had planted on the river bank.5.【关于烦恼：】

As a teenager, I met the same problem as you.But now I can get along better with my mother.Here are some ideas for you.Your mother talks much, because she cares about you.Maybe it's not a good way, but it shows your mother's love.So I think you should listen to her.If your opinions are different from your mother's, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about.If your mother doesn't take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.I hope what I say here can help you a lot.6.【节假日活动（母亲节）】

Today is Mother's Day.I love Mother so much that I've done many things for her.In the morning I bought many flowers with pocket money and put them in the vase.In the afternoon I went to the market to buy vegetables and cooked a simple but delicious dinner for my family.After supper, I gave Mother the card that I made myself and said “Happy Mother's Day” to her.Then I told her to pay more attention to her health and not to overwork.I also promised to help her do some housework from today on.Hearing the words, Mother was moved to tears.Today is a special day, warm and meaningful.7.【健康问题】

例文1：

All of us want to be healthy.First，we should get enough sleep during the night.We can go to bed early and get up early.Staying up late is bad for our health.Second, we must have the right kinds of food.We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat.We should drink a lot of water.We should have healthy eating habits.Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies.Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day.8.【关于中学生使用手机】Now mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school.As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information.A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information.The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to make the best use of it.Suppose there's a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately.There're also some games in the mobile phone.We can relax ourselves by playing them when we're tired of our studies.In my opinion, it's not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way.9.【网络问题】

Today , I'll talk about going online.We know that there are too many net-bars(网吧)around us.The Internet can make our lives interesting and enjoyable.Many of us like going online very much because we can learn how to use the computer and get more information from the Internet.We can learn English.We can read some good newspapers and magazines.It can make us clever in playing computer games.I can send e-mails to our friends quickly.We can chat(聊天)online with our friends.It can help us get in touch with(取得联系)people from all over the world.But some students spend too much time in playing computer games and some stay in the net bars all day and all night.As a result, they do worse and worse in their lessons and they don't study well any more.I think we mustn't go online when it is time for us to study.We can do it in summer or winter holidays.10.【毕业感想】

初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想（请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名）。

提示词供参考。three years，memories，one of，one day，think，happy/ sorry How time flies！I have studied in my school for three years.And I will graduate from middle school in a month.I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you.I had so many memories in three years’ life.On of them impressed me very much.I still remember，when I began to learn English，I found it too difficult.No matter how hard I tried，I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.As soon as my English teacher found my problem，she had a talk with me about how to learn English well.Since then，she has kept helping me.Little by little，I’ve become interested in English and I’m good

at it.I think I am so lucky to become one of her students.I’ve learned a lot from her.I will try to help others when they are in trouble.I think it is a happy thing to help others.11.【低碳生活】

现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”（low-carbon life），即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。

提示词语：be good for，everyone，ride a bike，think，make a difference，environment，suggest，reuse

Low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help with the environment，I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.Besides，I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes.If everyone does something for the environment，I believe the earth will be a better place.12.．现在越来越多的人在网上购物，网购已 成为流行趋势，二网购的利弊也成为人们讨论的焦点，请参考下面的信息，并结合就的观点些一短文，谈谈你的看法。

1.方便，可以在家买东西，不受时间限制。

2.有很大的商品信息，可以买到当地没有的商品。价格较便宜。3.买货容易退货难；实物和图片有差距。4．网络支付不安全。提示词：实物：materiai object

Now Internet shopping is more and more popular in the world.It’s a new way of shopping.It has lots of advertages.The most important is convient.You can shop whenever you like because the online shop are open 24 hours a day.It is often to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that youcan’t buy in the shop.Besides,it’s cheaper.But “ Every coin has two sides.” So is Internet shopping.You can’t see the material objects or check their quality.Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods.So when we get the goods and don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back.What’s more , It’s not safe to pay through the internet.So

13.目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。

原因：1.考试太滥 2.自身勤奋不够 3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上 4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴

看法与建议：

1、作弊有害；

2、要做人诚实，学习发奋；

3、学校应减少考试。

要求：

1、字数80-100；

2、围绕要点可适当发挥；

3、文章开头已给出，不计入总字数。

参考作文：

At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit-cheating in examinations.There are three main reasons.First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult.Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons.Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet.So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams.Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study.We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress.Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.14.【初中生活的回顾】

回顾初中三年成长过程，你一定有很多感受，从学习，生活，爱好等方面作出自我评价(毕业 回顾评价)I have studied in my middle school for three years.I have learned a lot.I have learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk to others.I have many hobbies.I like sports.I often play basketball, football and volleyball with my friends.Football is my favorite.Of all my subjects, I do best in English and Chinese.But my math and physics are a little weak.I think I will try my best to learn them well.I hope I can study in No.1 High School.15.【感谢信】

初中阶段的学习即将结束，回想自己在父母和师长的关爱和帮助下的成长过程，心中充满感激之情。请用英语给父母或老师写一封80词左右的信表示感谢。范文（1）

Dear parents，Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you.You have taken good care of me since I was born.When I am in trouble,you always encourage me and cheer me up.Once I argued with my best friend and was upset,you talked with me the whole night and finally helped me solve the problem.With your help,I have become a good student.I am so thankful for your love that I will work harder and try to do better in the future.Best wishes.Yours, Zhanghua 范文（2）

Dear teacher，Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you.You have taken good care of me since I came to this school.When I am in trouble,you always encourage me and cheer me up.You are kind but strict with us, you never allow us to pretend that we know what we don’t know.You often tell us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding.With your help ,my English has greatly improved.Thank you for caring about me, I will work harder in the future.Best wishes.Yours，Zhang hua

16.【网上购物】 Shopping Online

With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job.Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished.You needn't step out of the room.It seems easy and quick.But there's always a trap（陷阱）online.If you are careless, it will bring you some trouble.You may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too big.If you want to be different, you'd better not buy clothes online.Once you put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people wear the same clothes in the street.So you must be careful, because everything has two sides.英语写作中可以使用的参考句型等：

1.It’s important/necessary/difficult/easy…for sb to sth对于某人来说做某事很重要/必要/困难/… 2.so/such……that……如此……以至于 3.too……to do sth太……而不能做某事

4.sb spend time/money doing sth/on sth

It take sb time/money to do sth某人花钱/时间做某

事

5.be good at sth/doing sth

do well in sth/doing sth 擅长某事/做某事 6.be good/bad for对……有好处/有坏处

7.used to do sth 过去常常做某事

be used to sth/doing sth习惯于某事/做某事 8.hear from sb收到某人的来信

9.be busy doing sth/with sth忙于做某事/某事

10.worry about sb/sth

be worried about sb/sth担心某事/某人 11.try one’s best to do sth 尽某人能力做某事

try to do sth尝试做某事 12.decide to do sth

make a decision to do sth决定做某事

13.sb find it difficult/easy/important to do sth某人发觉做某事很困难/容易/重要…….14.on the one hand……on the other hand…一方面……另一方面 15.have fun doing sth做某事很开心

16.sb can’t wait to do sth某人迫不及待要做某事 17.be interested in sth/doing sth对什么很感兴趣 18.As you know,…./As we all know,…众所周知

19.As a student/teenager/young man,…作为一名学生/青少年/年轻人 20.not only…… but also……不仅……而且

21.first……second…..then….finally首先……其次……然后……最后….

第三篇：中考英语作文

My Dream(P41 Ⅰ)

I want to be a writer when I grow up.Writing has been part of my life.Through writing I will be able to share my ideas and make friends with others.I can achieve my dream by reading widely and by working hard at school to learn as much as possible.It's also important to find out how successful people did it so that I could learn from them.I'm determined to hold on to my dream till one day it comes true.(P41 Ⅱ)I am Liu Qiang.I think it's not strange to have worries.Some students say they have become fat and that it really makes them feel bad about themselves.I think this is one of the biggest worries for us.But I think we can do something about it.First, you could eat less.The body needs food for energy, but you'll become fat if you eat more than your body needs.If you eat less, the body can burn more calories than you eat.Second, do more exercise.Doing exercise can also help the body burn the calories and make you thinner.There are many ways to do exercise.For example, you could go to school on foot or by bike.Don't worry too much.I think you will become fit soon.My After-School Activities(P41 Ⅲ)As we grow, both our after-school activities and what we care about are becoming more and more.In the past, I often watched TV or played computer games at home.Sometimes I went out to play football with my friends.And I only cared ahout my own feeling and never cared about others.But now, I often have a communication with my parents, and let them know what I think and what I want to do.And now I am a volunteer.I often help people in need.I don't think only about myself, but about others.This made me feel happy.We are growing up.We should think more about others, not only about ourselves.We should do some meaningful things.My good friend(P90 一)

I have a good friend.Her name is Susan.She is 14 years old.She's from America.She's a tall girl with blue eyes and she has long golden hair.She likes doing sports, especially swimming and running.She enjoys reading books and listening to music.What's more, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture.So she often reads books about China.She's lovely and friendly.She gets on well with her friends.She's also helpful.She often helps me learn English.With her help, I made much progress in English.I'm lucky to have such a good friend.(P90 二)Dear Robert, It's three weeks since you were ill.How are you feeling now?(Are you feeling better now?)We all miss you very much.Recently we have had many activities.We took part in the sports meeting in our school and won the first prize.The matches were exciting and tough.But we tried our best and got the good result.What a pity!You didn't watch them.I hope you'll get well soon and come back earlier.We're busy preparing for the singing competition now.We practice a song every day in order to sing best.Remember to have a good rest and don't worry about your lessons.I'll help you with them.Best wishes.Yours，Lin Feng

(P90 三)June 10, 2012 Sunday

Fine It's a fine day today.My parents and I went to the movies in the afternoon.We left home at 1:00 pm and went to the cinema by bus.We

got there half an hour later and watched the latest 3D movie Avatar.It is a very interesting movie.We like it very much.My parents and I talked about the movie happily all the way back home and we got home at half past five.What a great movie!I'm looking forward to seeing it again.How to relax ourselves after the exam(P91 四)It is necessary to relax ourselves after the exam.There're kinds of activities for us to take part in.First of all we can travel around to get closer to nature and this can broaden our mind as well as enriching our life.We can also go to the movie or listen to music.What's more, joining in a sports club is a good choice, which can keep us healthy.For example, playing a football game in the afternoon may relax ourselves.Above all, we should arrange our time reasonably and live a regular life.I hope all of us can have a wonderful time.(P91 五)Dear Tony, There are lots of things you can do.First, you can ride your bike in your neighborhood and try to find some kids.When you find some, you can go up and talk to them.You

should also let your parents know that you want to make friends because they can help you.Second, you can ask your parents to take you to the library or some(public)places where there are lots of kids.You could try joining an art class or a sports club.These are all great ways to meet people.Third, you can try making friends in it if you go out to take part in activities on Sundays.(You can try making friends at churches(教堂)too if you go to church on Sundays.)In a word, try to be active wherever you are, but just be yourself and don't try so hard.It takes time and patience(耐心).I hope you will find a best friend soon!

Yours，Know

(P92 六)Dear Daming, I know your problem.You've made two mistakes.First, you used your classmate's pen without her permission.Second, when you broke the pen, you didn't tell her the truth.Yes, you must tell her immediately.If you tell her the truth, perhaps she'll be angry with you, but at least you'll prove you are honest.Then I think you should offer to pay.You can use your pocket money to buy a new pen for her.She will realize that you're truly sorry.I hope the advice can help you.I'm sure you

will make up with her soon.Yours，Tom

How to keep safe?(P92 七)As teenagers, we should keep safety in mind.But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line.Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely.Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health.Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river.In short, safety must come first!

My Favourite School Life(P93 八)My school life has changed a lot since this term.We don't need to get to school early.We begin our lessons at eight o'clock.We can get enough sleep.At school we have at least one hour for sports to relax ourselves every day.After the second class we do morning exercises.After that we usually kick jianzi or skip rope.In the afternoon, we can do different kinds of sports.Some play basketball, some play football, others run on the

playground.After school, we don't have too much homework to do.We have lots of free time.We can do what we like.We can take part in many after-school activities.In a word, we are happier and healthier than before.My Spare Time(P93 九)I am a middle school student.Though I'm busy with my lessons, my spare time is still colorful.After school I usually play sports.I like basketball and foothall very much.Sports help me to keep healthy and study better.I often do some reading in the evening.I think books are our best friends.They give us much knowledge that we can't learn at school.So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time.Sometimes I watch TV or surf the Internet.I find it's a good way to relax myself.At the same time it can also help me open up my eyes to the outside world.At weekends I often help my parents with the housework.I clean the house, wash clothes and learn to cook.I enjoy myself in my spare time.The Advantages of Eating at Home(P93 十)Jingzhou is home to delicious food.There are many restaurants that

offer a lot of quality food.Even so, I still prefer to eat at home.Let me tell you the reasons.First, the food we eat at home is cleaner and safer.Besides, it is well-known to all that eating at home doesn't cost that much.Finally, it helps family members become closer, because preparing food at home is not only fun, but also encourages more communication(s)in the house.Eating out is great, especially at festivals, but it cannot bring us as much happiness as we can get when eating at home!

My Holiday Plans(P101)We've been busy working in the past three years.The summer holiday is coming and I want to do something interesting and relaxing.First of all, I'm going to visit my grandparents because I haven't been with them for a long time.Next, I plan to go to the seaside, swim in the sea and lie on the beach.Then, I'll practice playing table tennis which is my favourite sport.Finally, I'Il read some interesting books.I'm sure I can enjoy myself during the holiday.I'm looking forward to it.(P109)My parents and I went to Jingzhou on May l.Jingzhou is

famous for its beautiful lake.In the morning we visited Jingzhou Ancient City Wall.Then we went boating on City Moat, where I had a lot of fun.In the afternoon, we visited Xiong Jia Zhong and Jingzhou Museum.At Jingzhou Museum we met three foreigners.I tried to speak English with them and told them the way to Jingzhou Hotel.I was shy, but they were friendly to me.I was very happy and excited that day because I could use English to help others and I really like the places of interest.5

第四篇：中考英语作文.doc

下面是汶川地震中的一张照片。它记录了一个叫郎铮的三岁男孩在地震十小时后被解放军从废墟(debris)中救出(rescue)。躺在担架(stretcher)上的他慢慢地举起右手向救他的人敬礼（salute to）。请你以“感动”为题，用英语简单描述这个故事并写出你的感想。要求：故事描述要包括提供的所有信息。字数：80---100。短文开头已给出，不计入总字数。

Moved

At 14:28 on May 12, an earthquake broke out in Wenchuan.Soon people all over China went to the rescue.A three-year-old boy named Lang Zheng was rescued from the debris by the PLA men ten hours after the earthquake.While he was lying on the stretcher, he slowly raised his right hand and saluted to the soldiers.His salute not only expressed his thanks to the people who saved him, but also moved the people around him.I was also deeply moved by his salute.As a three-year-old boy, he knew that the first thing to do was to express his thanks after he was saved.It is the good nature of the Chinese people.假如你是初三学生杨帆，在复习备考阶段遇到烦恼时。你的笔友Mike给过你很多鼓励。现在请你给他写封回信，感谢他对你的鼓励和帮助。内容提示：1.What troubled you? 2.How did he encourage you? 3.Thanks for his help.写作要求：1.80词左右；2.信的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.信中不能出现真实姓名和校名。

Dear Mike，Although I haven't written to you for a long time, I'd like to thank you from my the bottom of my heart.Since I failed in the PE test, I've lost interest in studying anything.I believed no matter how hard I worked.I wouldn't realize my dream to be a famous senior high school.It's you who encouraged me to overcome myself.What you said is right.Whether to enter an ideal school is not my real goal.The most important thing is that one should always dream to be better.As long as I try my best with the spirit of not giving up, everything will be OK.Having a friend like you, I'm sure we'll make progress together.Thank you.1、汶川大地震

A.5月12日，四川省汶川地区发生了罕见的大地震，那里的人们痛失亲人和家园。全国人民众志成城，抗震救灾。作为一名中学生，请你谈谈你的做法和感受。

要求：文章语言流畅，逻辑清晰，用词准确，80-100字左右；词汇参考：地震earthquake悲痛sorrow受到感动be deeply moved安慰comfort重建rebuild自愿做某事volunteer to do sth

参考范文：

On May 12th, a big earthquake happened in Wenchun, Sichuan.Many people lost their relatives and their homes.All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow.1

A lot of people volunteer to help them.Some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children.Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand.I'm deeply moved by these people.So I'll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there.I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.2、雪灾

去年春节期间，我国大部分地区遭受雪灾，特别是南方，室几十年未遇。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭，电网瘫痪，数百万人不能回家过年。部分山区人民生活异常困难，在各级政府的带领下，人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击雪灾，涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生，你有何感想？有何打算？能不能改变这种状态？

As we know, our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival.Everything was covered with heavy snow.It made the buses, trains and planes stop.Millions of people couldn't go home.Many people suffered trouble.There was no food, water or light in some places.Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow.As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes.We must study hard at school.We should learn all kinds of nowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.2、保护环境

从2008年6月1日起，国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋，掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。内容包含：1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋； 2.尽可能地再利用使用过的课本； 3.离开教室应关灯；4.最好走路或骑自行车上学； 5.简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等注意：1.词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数；2.可根据要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3.文章中不能出现真实姓名和校名，否则以零分处理。3.参考词汇：布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保护protect能源energy污染pollution课本textbook

参考作文： What Can We Do for the Environment

Hello, everyone.I'm Li Hua.It's nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.What's more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!2

环境问题：今天环境变得越来越糟糕,环境问题影响着人们的工作,学习,生活等,而我们的工作,生活,生产等又使环境污染越来越严重..........,如何保护我们的环境?请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”为题写一篇短文。提示:存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重 2.砍伐森林严重 3.大气污染严重 4.白色垃圾等。要求：如何改善/保护环境?至少:3---4个方面，80字左右的。

How to protect/save our environment/world?

The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today.Water is polluted ,we have no clean water to drink Many trees are cutting down, some animals is getting less and less.Some factories is poring dirty air in the sky , the population is increasing faster and faster ,resources is getting less and less…etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future.people's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life, we need protect our world.We should n't throw away rubbish everywhere.We want to recycle ,reduce ,reuse things.Don't waste things ,This saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.We don't use plastic bags.We mus plant more trees and stop the people cutting them.We hope our world is more and more beautiful.为了保护地球有限的资源，我们应该采取什么措施呢？请根据下面的提示写一篇约80词的短文，短文开头已经给出。提示词；1.save water, the source of life , protect drinking water, stop polluting, make full use of it；2.save electricity, crucial, turn off, other electric machines；3.save forests, useful ,stop cutting down；4.recycle useful rubbish, save resources

参考作文：

Although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer.In order to protect them,something must be done.Save water.Water is the source of life.No water, no life.So it's very important for us to do so.Not only should we protect drinking water and stop polluting it, but also make full use of it.Save electricity.It is crucial.We can't imagine what the life will be like without it.Everyone should do his best to save electricity.Don't forget to turn off lights or other electric machines when we finish working.Save forests.They are useful.Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead.Make our world a green one to live in.Recycle useful rubbish.Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans,paper, bottles, and so on.We can save resources in this way.根据中英文提示，写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的稿件。（字数不少于60词，英文提示词供选用）有写学生不爱吃学校的午饭，常到校外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们的身体健康。“英语角”打算针对这个问题展开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿，谈谈你的看法和建议。

参考词汇：not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer

We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn't delicious.So they often go out of school to buy something they like to eat.But I'm afraid it's bad for their health to eat lunch outside because some of the food they buy isn't healthy enough.In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.、你们班上周进行了一次“说出你的烦恼”的调查活动，请你根据下面信息用英语写一篇短问。词数80左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）20% 活动少，体质差；50%作业多，学业压力大；30% 父母要求严，相互沟通少；20%---twenty percent of the …活动少---don't often do sport；体质差---not health, be weak in health；作业多---have too much homework；学业压力大---feel stressed too much;under too much pressure；父母要求严---be strict with sb.；相互沟通少---don't often talk with sb.；

Our class has made a survey--

“Don't keep your worries.” About fifty percent of the students in our class are worried about their homework and studies(学业).And they feel stressed too much.About thirty percent of the students think their parents are too strict with them.They don't often talk with their parents.The other twenty percent of them say they are weak in health.They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or exercise.So I hope that our teachers will give us less homework.And I advise our parents to allow us to spend some time with our parents doing outdoor activities.I think our teachers should give us less homework to do.And our parents are supposed to talk with us often.In this way, we will be happier.3、请用英语写一篇论述“早起”(early dsing)重要性的短文。

1．论点：早起有益。2．论据：早起可呼吸到新鲜空气，做早操，对身体健康有好处；早起对学习有好处；早起可从容制定工作计划；对工作有好处。3．结论：晚起的人都应早起。

Early Rising

Early rising benefits us in many ways.First, it helps to keep us fit.We all need fresh air.Besides, by taking morning exercises we can improve our health.Second, it can help us in our studies.In the morning we can learn more quickly.Third, it can enable us to plan our work for the day.We cannot work well without a proper plan.Early rising can also give us enough time to get ready for our work.So we say that those who always get up late should make great effort to get up early.2、中学生学习时间长、压力大，专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。你代表班级在一次 “The Ways for Students to Relax”的学校座谈中与二(1)班的Terry讨论了这一话题，请根据他的观点和你自己的观点，用英语给你的外籍教师Mr.Griffin写一篇有关这次讨论的汇报材料。His ideas Your ideas 1.Watching TV 1.…2.Playing computer games 2.… 3.Hanging out with friends 3.…

注意：1.开头和结尾已经写好;2.可以适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的话语,使内容连贯

3.所写内容必须包括上面表格中他的观点和你自己至少三个观点 4.词数：70字左右。

Mr.Griffin，Recently I have had a discussion about The Ways for Students to Relax with Terry, a student from Class One Grade Two.(As we study too long every day, every student should choose ways to relax.)In his opinion, the best ways are watching TV and playing computer games.He also believes that sometimes hanging out with friends isn't a bad way.However, I'm not quite agreeable with him.In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a good way to help us relax.I think listening to music and playing sports are good ways because they can help us keep healthy.I often play pingpong after class and I find it really helpful to both my health and my study.Besides, I think chatting with our friends isn't a bad way.I think it can help me get on better with my friends.3、假如你叫李华，你校初三年级同学正在开展一场讨论，主题是“初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”。请根据下面所提供的信息，用英语总结出讨论情况。

提示： 70%的学生：应该每天进行体育锻炼，但不要时间过长；锻炼能增强体质，保持健康；锻炼能使大脑休息，使学习效果更好 30%的学生：锻炼浪费时间、使人疲劳；锻炼以后很兴奋，较长时间不能投入学习；锻炼中可能会受伤要求：语句通顺，句意连贯；词数为80词左右；发言稿的开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Dear classmates:

I'm Li Hua , After the discussion we found that 70% of the students think they should take all kinds of exercise every day, but not spend too much time.They think exercise builds body and can keep them healthy.Sports also let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.On the other hand, 30% students believe taking exercise is tiring and it's a waste of time.They say that after having sports they are too excited for a long time to focus on their lessons.And it's possible to be hurt while doing sports.4、阳光运动工程(Sunshine sports program)

Dear Jane，Thank you for your last letter asking about our sunshine sports program.Now I tell you some sports in our school.Many students doing sports one hour everyday.Different students have different interests.Some boys like playing football, because they love it.Most girls like shopping, because they think it relaxing.But most boys like playing Chinese Kongfu, because they believe it can help they keep healthy.And some girls like dancing, because they want to keep fit.I think the sunshine sports program is very important for us.Because the study of students very hard.Sports can also let brains have a good rest so that our study will be more effective.And it can help you relax.Yours，Cai zongrui 初中三年的学校生活就要结束了，在这即将分别之际，你一定有许多话想对老师说，老师何尝不是如此！那就让我们敞开心扉，写出你对彼此说的话，将朝夕相处三年的师生情谊存留在记忆之中。Dear Mrs Guo，I want to say “Thank you.”most at the moment when I have to say goodbye to you.I really appreciate what you have done for me.I used to be too shy to speak English in front of the class.You found my problemand helped me out.I can still remember clearly your smile on the day when I won the first prize in the English speech contest.It was you who gave me the confidence.I have a dream of going to Beijing University in the future.Though it's hard for me,I'm sure your love will encourage me to achieve it.Yours

Zhang Xu、回顾初中三年成长过程，你一定有很多感受，从学习，生活，爱好等方面作出自我评价(毕业 回顾评价)I have studied in my middle school for three years.I have learned a lot.I have learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk to others.I have many hobbies.I like sports.I often play basketball, football and volleyball with my friends.Football is my favorite.Of all my subjects, I do best in English and Chinese.But my math and physics are a little weak.I think I will try my best to learn them well.I hope I can study in No.1 High School.假如你将代表你校2009届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，发言稿的内容要点如下。回顾 美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获感谢 老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助 祝愿 考生自拟，至少两点

注意：1.词数90左右，发言稿的开头和结尾已经为你写好i，不计入总词数； 2..发言稿须包含所有要点，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；发言稿不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates，It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2008.It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school.Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting.We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers' effort, our parents' support, and our classmates' help.At this moment, I'd like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!

Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends!

Thank you for listening.

第五篇：中考英语作文

中考英语作文范文

无论在学习、工作或是生活中，大家都跟作文打过交道吧，借助作文可以提高我们的语言组织能力。你所见过的作文是什么样的呢？以下是小编帮大家整理的中考英语作文范文，仅供参考，欢迎大家阅读。

中考英语作文范文1

其实不难，大部分的同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？我们为同学们把中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

关于体裁，本文包含记叙文和议论文两种最容易考到的类型，其他一些文体也有可能会综合涉及。

关于题材，同学们的反应可谓是几家欢喜几家愁。中考写作也有自己的特色：一般围绕着生活化、学校化来考察。近几年，考试题目实际上是一些比较贴近中学生活，为中学生能够接触的认识能力、生活经历所能驾驭的问题。

【比如】

20xx年题目Comics

20xx年题目Understanding、signs、understanding、languages

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有无话可说的感觉。那要我们如何才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功单词、短语和句型的问题。英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

【评分标准】

1.整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

2.内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

3.不满60个词，少15个词扣0.5分，610个词扣1分。

4.所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

5.每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

6.语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子！

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；

简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：语言结构句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

中考英语作文范文2

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。 2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的高分。

一：先看一下扣分点：

1.内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

2.字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

3. 语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计;

4. 标点错误：每4个扣0.5.

二：加分点

除了这些扣分点，还有一些得分点：比如说作文的组织结构分，就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。

只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。例如，有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分

很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮，符合3个简单的标准即可：没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。

中考英语作文范文3

点题是用简明扼要的语句把文章的中心思想提示出来，话题作文作为一种应试文章，应该让阅卷者在短期内就有一个明确而正确的印象，了解这篇文章的材料和题旨，恰如其分的点题就能起到这样的作用。在文章恰当的地方(一般在结尾处，也可用“题记”的形式出现在文首)，恰当地点题，不但在结构上收拢全文、收束文脉，更重要的是，让阅卷者能及时充分、准确地把握文章的中心思想，对文章做出恰如其分的评价。话题作文的点题，一般可以采用明点的形式，在文章适当处出现和题目中关键字眼相同或大致相同的词语，直接解释和说明题目的含义，提示出文章的中心思想，以得到阅卷者的认可并赞同，当然也可以用象征式、比喻式、联想式的点题，但这类点题要求比较高，一般不易掌握，考生应该慎用。

中考英语作文范文4

俗话说得好：“佛靠金装，人靠衣装”，作文也靠题装。这是一个重视包装的时代，像一本精彩的书要有一个好的封面，优质产品要有精美的包装。文章标题是阅卷老师第一眼看到的部分，标题拟的好，能收到引人入胜、先声夺人的效果，可以给整篇文章增光添彩，同时，也定下了写作方向。

作文题目要准确，更要生动、凝练、含蓄、新奇，有美感。标题是文章的眼睛，是内容和读者情感的第一个接触点，是让人一见钟情的因子，也是提供给读者窥视文章内容的独特视角。文不对题，眼睛无神，总是缺憾。所以说：“题好一半文”，一个出彩的题目定能在最短的时间内吸住阅卷老师的眼球，让阅卷老师一见钟情的拟题的方法有：

1、以话题为中心词，在话题前后加上适当的修饰、限制或补充性的词语，这是拟题的最基本方法。因为它可以对写作范围加以限制，使话题由大变小，由虚变实，由抽象变形象。以“感动”话题为例，我们可以围绕“感动”，拟出这样一些标题：“就这样被你感动”、“妈妈，我为你感动”、“感动我的一个瞬间”、“心灵的感动”、“感动之后的思考”、“今天，你感动了吗”等题目。

2、用标题来表明自己的观点。如“诚信不可少”、“莫以成败论英雄”、“感动不需要理由”、“多情未必不丈夫”等等。这些标题就是文章中心的高度概括，考生对自己文章的整体把握和概括能力的高低决定了所拟标题的优劣。

3、用修辞方法拟题。如以“假日”为话题，可用比喻拟题，拟为《假日——爱的桥梁》，将桥梁比喻成爱的桥梁，在父母离婚后，“我”被判给爸爸，于是利用假日与妈妈构筑了一条情感的纽带。又如以“感受生活”为话题，可拟为《苦咖啡》，这便运用了双关，既实指咖啡，又暗指生活，通过叙述自己在校独自锻炼的苦，折射出其中的甜。

4、用联想的方法来拟题。该法适用于一些有象征意义的话题，如“水”、“山”、“树”等。以“树”为例，我们可以通过联想和想象拟出很多见解独到的标题，如“前人栽树，后人乘凉”、“材与非材”、“木秀于林”、“谈个体与集体的关系”等等。

中考英语作文范文5

命题作文就是我们依据所给题目,确定中心,选择材料,写出符合题意,内容表达具体、充分的文章。

写命题作文通常要注意以下几点：

一、审准题目:文章的中心要对题目的分析来确定,一定要弄清主题的内涵,确立与文章联系的主题思想,表达不能游离于主题,否则即使内容再精彩,也是跑题作文,得分将会大打折扣,因此,写命题作文最重要的是先审清题目,确立要表现的中心。

二、构思结构:就是开放思路,启动联想,构想表现形式,勾勒出文章的结构层次,依次写出引言段,主题句,发展段和结尾句,努力使之新颖,别致。

三、选择材料:这一点很重要,一定要围绕想表现的中心去选择组织材料,所选的材料必须典型精要。

四、表达:就是用最确切明了的语言贯穿材料,表达自己的思想,力争用符合英语语法规则。英语表达习惯,最顺畅自然的词,句,段去表达中心思想,与表现中心无关的话即使再生动形象也不要去写。就写作的目的表现形式来看,命题作文分为三种形式:1、记叙文类;2、说明文类; 3、议论文类。

下面就谈一谈记叙文的写作

记叙文就是以记叙人物的经历或事物发展变化过程为主的一种文章。在初中写作训练中,记叙文是最基本,最常见,最重要的书面表达形式。记叙文有六要素即指时间,地点,人物和事件的起因,经过和结果。一篇记叙文只要把这些要素写清楚,文章就会内容具体, 眉目清晰,中心意思明确。一般情况下,这六要素中的人物,时间,地点作为开端,要写在文章的开头。事件,原因常作为记叙文的段落发展,又称为文章的主体部分,应该放在文章的中间。结果作为记叙文的结局常放在文章的末尾处。

中考英语作文范文6

假设你是《21世纪中学生英语报》“heart to heart”专栏的编辑.下面是你收到的一位中学生的来信.请你根据他来信的内容写一封回信.针对他的问题。

Dear Xiaowei,

Weight problem is quite common among teenagers everywhere. So