第一篇：高考英语写作教案

高考英语写作讲义

-------张雄

Part 1

高考英语写作模板句型

（一）段首句

1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to ____.Some people suggest

that ____.2.俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______.It“s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.3.现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First, ____

Second,____.What makes things worse is that______.4.现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。

Nowadays，it is common to ______.Many people like ______ because ______.Besides，______.5.任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both

advantages and disadvantages.6.关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，……

People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say

that ______.To them,_____.7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more

serious.8.……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。

______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young

and heated debates are right on their way.9.……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it

has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as

well.10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？

According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar

graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______ while.Obviously，______，but

why?

（二）中间段落句

1.相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。

On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time，they

say____.2.但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。

But I don”t think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example，____.Worst

of all，___.3.……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……

______is necessary and important to our country“s development and

construction.First，______.What”s more, _____.Most important of all,______.4.有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。

There are several measures for us to adopt.First, we can______

5.面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……，另一方面，Confronted with______，we should take a series of effective measures

to______.For one thing，______For another，______

6.早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。

It is high time that something was done about it.For example._____.In

addition._____.All these measures will certainly______.7.为什么……？第一个原因是……；第二个原因是……；第三个原因是……。总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……

Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is

______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to

______.8.然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。

However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has

its own disadvantages, such as ______.9.尽管如此，我相信……更有利。

Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.10.完全同意……这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下：

I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.（三）结尾句

1.至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为……

As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.I think

that ____.2.总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。

In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.3.但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢）……

But ______and ______have their own advantages.For example, _____，while_____.Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______.4.就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……

Personally, I believe that_____.Consequently, I’m confident that a bright

future is awaiting us because______.5.随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。

With the development of society, ______.So it“s urgent and necessary to

____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be

better and better.6.至于我（对我来说，就我而言），我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能……

For my part, I think it reasonable to_____.Only in this way can you _____.7.对我来说，我认为有必要……。原因如下：第一，……； 第二，……；最后……但同样重要的是……

In my opinion, I think it necessary to____.The reasons are as follows.First

_____.Second ______.Last but not least,______.8.在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。

It is difficult to say whether _____is good or not in general as it depends very

much on the situation of______.However, from a personal point of view

find______.9.综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论……

From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the

conclusion that____.10.如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是……

If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some

undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is_____.Part 2

高考英语写作模板文体

对比观点题型

（1）

要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

1．有一些人认为。。2．

另一些人认为。。3．

我的看法。。

The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They

hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more，③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------（理由

二）.Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）.The reason is that ⑨

--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain

my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.（2）

给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）.For example, they think ②

-----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④

-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的

理由之二)．

Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对 文章所讨论主题的看法)．

阐述主题题型

要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述． １．

阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义． ２．

分析并举例使其更充实．

The good old proverb----------------（名言或谚语）reminds us that----------------(释

义).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,-----------------(理由一).For example,-------------------(举例说明).Secondly,----------------(理由二).Another case is that---------------(举例说明).Furthermore ,------------------(理由三)．

In my opinion,----------------(我的观点).In short, whatever you do, please remember

the say------A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll

necessarily benefit a lot from it.解决方法题型

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 １．

问题现状

２．

怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second,---------------(举例进一步说明现状)

So we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.First,---------------(解决方法一).Then-------------(解决方法二).Furthermore,--------------(解决方法三).In my opinion, I believe that-------------(我的解决方法).Finally, I think that a bright future is coming soon because--------------(带来的好处).说明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）

１．

说明事物现状

２．

事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）３．

你对现状（或前景）的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(Ａ的优点之一).Besides-------------------（Ａ的优点之二）.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(Ａ的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(Ａ的第二个缺点)．

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法)．

(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(对前景的预测)．)

议论文的框架

(1)不同观点列举型（选择型）

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.（2）利弊型的议论文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文题目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___优点一______.And secondly ___优点二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, ”every coin has two sides“, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺点一______.In addition, ____缺点二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.(3)答题性议论文

Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文题目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途径一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)谚语警句性议论文

It is well know to us that the proverb: ” ___谚语_______" has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____谚语的含义_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)

A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..图表作文的框架

as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease(goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.实用性写作（申请信)

Your address

Month, Date, year Receiver’s address Dear..., I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in....And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising..../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed.On the one hand,....On the other hand,....I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview.I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours，X X X 现象说明文

Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.There are many reasons explaining__________________________.The main reason is____________________.what is more_________________________.thirdly__________________________.As a result_______________.Considering all there,________________________.For one thing_____________________,for another________ ____.In Conclusion____________________.《范文》

一种事物或现象（负面意义倾向）

关于A的话题,早已引起了广泛的社会关注。如今在电视、报纸、日常生活的很多角落，都有越来越多的关于A的议论。

给A一个精确恒定的定义并非易事，因为它的概念涉及了科学、人性、思想、经济、社会、自然等广阔的领域。一般而言，我们可以这样描述A…

A能成为公众关注的焦点，主要是由于它对个人、集体乃至整个世界都有着不容忽视的不良影响。

认真分析后我们可以看到，A对社会/世界 /健康的不利有很多。首先，从最直观的角度来看，A的出现直接损害了（这里加入一句针对性的话，如人类的身体健康和环境的平衡）。（举例）。其次，从更深一层次上讲，它为人类的精神文明蒙上了一层阴影。更可怕的是，由于A所产生微小利益，却促成了许多可悲的人们为其忘乎所以，破坏了人类生存的法则和空间。

事实上，A的出现是社会发展和人类进步的产物，A所带来的危害是人类进化过程中付出的代价。同时，A的产生来源于部分人们的自私和趋利性，他们看到的是肤浅和片面的利益，而从未从整个全局和人类整体的利益出发去认识和分析它。这使得A始终挥之不去。对此，我奉劝他们，跳出狭小的角落，用长远和全局的眼光去重新审视A。

而如今，我们已深受其害，要想消除它的危害，我们必须从根源上杜绝它的产生，我们每一个人都应给予A高度的重视，用系统的和科学的方法去解决，唯有这样，避免它带来更多损失，我们人类前进的脚步才会更加平稳，更加欢快的迈向辉煌的明天。

One object or phenomenon(negative significance inclination.)A has attracted extensive attention of the society.Nowadays, increasingly more argumentations about A can be found in TV programs, newspapers, ugogo and marry aspects of our everyday life.Since its concept covers vast fields, such as science, humanity, ideology, economy, society and nature, A is difficult to be defined, precisely and fixedly.Generally speaking ,we can describe A as follows:…….A’s status as the focus of public concern mainly results from its in negligible but harmful influence on inpiduals, collective, and even the whole world.It seems to have a strange power to drive some inpiduals or organizations to act wrongly.The essence of these wrong actions is:

(1)to gain personal, short-term and partial inpidual interest at the expense of damaging others’ long-term and overall interest;

(2)to adopt improper means to win more rewards with less input.Situating under the shadow of A, inpiduals /organizations and violate natural law merely to obtain temporary, or even illusory interests.However, the result may turn out to be loss of really important and valuable resource or ability.We must keep highly alert of the problems evoked by A, because once the harmful influence accumulates to a certain degree and then spread, it will surely threaten the development of the whole society.Though with various reasons and forms, from the perspective of the essence, the problems brought by A originates from the fundamental principle of human ideology and material production.Thus, we should seek the solutions through setting foot on this principle.Due to the depth and width of A’s harmful influence, we should draft our solutiogogotematically on the basis of deep analysis of A problem.We must acquire our power from technology, management, law and culture terrorm, effectively eliminate the shadow of A, and ensures ourselves a bright future.Part 3

高考英语名言

1.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。

2.God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。

3.Easier said than done.说起来容易做起来难。

4.Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成。

5.One false step will make a great difference.失之毫厘，谬之千里。

6.Slow and steady wins the race.稳扎稳打无往而不胜。

7.A fall into the pit,a gain in your wit.吃一堑，长一智。

8.Experience is the mother of wisdom.实践出真知。

9.All work and no play makes jack a dull boy.只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。

10.Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance.无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。

11.More hasty,less speed.欲速则不达。

12.Its never too old to learn.活到老，学到老。

13.All that glitters is not gold.闪光的未必都是金子。

14.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。

15.Look before you leap.三思而后行。

16.Rome was not built in a day.伟业非一日之功。

17.Great minds think alike.英雄所见略同。

18.well begun,half done.好的开始等于成功的一半。

19.It is hard to please all.众口难调。

20.Out of sight,out of mind.眼不见，心不念。

21.Facts speak plainer than words.事实胜于雄辩。

22.Call back white and white back.颠倒黑白。

23.First things first.凡事有轻重缓急。

24.Ill news travels fast.坏事传千里。

25.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。

26.live not to eat,but eat to live.活着不是为了吃饭，吃饭为了活着。

27.Action speaks louder than words.行动胜过语言。

28.East or west,home is the best.金窝银窝不如自家草窝。

29.Its not the gay coat that makes the gentleman.君子在德不在衣。

30.Beauty will buy no beef.漂亮不能当饭吃。

31.Like and like make good friends.趣味相投。

32.The older, the wiser.姜是老的辣。

33.Do as Romans do in Rome.入乡随俗。

34.An idle youth,a needy age.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。

35.As the tree,so the fruit.种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。

36.To live is to learn,to learnistobetterlive.活着为了学习，学习为了更好的活着。

Part 4 高考写作常用连接词

1、表示时间的

af first 起初

next 接下来

then 然后

after that 那以后

later 后来

soon 不久

soon/shortly after ……之后不久

finally 最后

in the end 最后

eventually 最终

at last 终于

lately近来 recently 最近

since then 自从那时起

after that 那以后

in no time 不一会儿

after a while 一会儿

afterward 后来

to begin/start with=in the first place 首先、第一点

immediately 立即、马上

meanwhile=in the meantime=at the same time 在此期间、同时

earlier, until now 直到现在suddenly=all of a sudden 突然

as a young man 当…… 是个年轻人的时候

at the age of… 在……岁的时候

as early as 早……的时候

as soon as 一……就…… before, the other day 几天前

early in the morning 大清早

after/before dark 天黑后/前

one day 有一天

one afternoon 一天下午

one morning 一天早晨

2、表示空间的to the right/left 朝右/左

on the rinht/left 在右/左边

in the middle of 在中间

in front of 在前面

in the front of 在前面

at the back of 在后面

at the bottom of 在底部

on the edge of 在……的边上

on top of 在……的顶部

opposite to 与……相对

close to 靠近

near to 在……附近

next to 与……相邻

under 垂直在下

over 垂直在上

below 在下方

above 在上方

across 在……的另一边

around 在周围

behind 在后

before 在前 against 靠着、抵着

further on 再往前

3、表示列举和时序

first, second, third…finally firstly, secondly, thirdly…finally first of all, next then, lastly for one thing…for another… at the same time at first at last

4、表示列举

for example 例如：…… namely 即…… for instance 例如：…… that is(to say)也就是说

such as 如……

take…for example 拿……来说

like 像……

5、表示比较或对比

like 像

unlike 不像

similarly 同样地 in the same way 以相同的方式

compared to 与……相比

while 而

still=nevertheless 然而

on the contrary 正相反

different from 与……不同

on(the)one hand…on the other hand 一方面……另一方面

in contrast with 与……成对比

6、表示增补

and 而且

both…and 不但……而且

not only…but also 不但……而且

as well as 不但……而且

also=besides=furthermore=more over 此外、而且

in addition 并且

apart from 除了……之外

what's more 而且、更重要的for another 另一方面

worse still=what's worse=to make matter worse 更糟糕的是

including 包括

7、表示因果

because 因为

since 既然

as 由于

now that 既然

therefore 因此

thus 这样

so 所以

as a result(of)结果

because of=on account of 因为

thanks to 多亏、由于

for this reason 由于这个原因

if so 如果这样

if not 如果不是这样

8、表示目的for this purpose in order to do so as to do so that… in order that…

9、表示让步

though/although no matter+疑问句

in spite of

whatever/however/whoever even if/ even though

10、表示递进或强调

besides 况且

what's more 更重要地是

thus 这样

above all 首先

indeed 的确

in fact/ as a matter of fact 事实上

in other words 换句话说

in that case 那样的话

or rather 更确切地说

particularly 特别地

11、表示转折

but 但是

still 然而

however 然而

while 而

12、表示总结

in a/one word 简言之、一句话、总之 generally speaking 一般说来

in short=in a few words 简言之

in conclusion=lastly 最后地

on the whole=taking everything into consideration 从总体来看、大体上

so 所以

therefore 因此

thus 这样

as has been mentioned 正如所提到的it is quite clear that 很显然

there is no doubt that 毫无疑问

it is well-known that 大家都知道

as we all know=as is known to us all 大家都知道

as/so far as I know 据我所知

to sum up=to summarize=in summary 总之

13、表示转折话题

by the way 顺便说

I am afraid 我恐怕

in my opinion 依我看来

to tell the truth 说实话

to be honest 诚实地说 in face 事实上

第二篇：高考英语写作

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高考英语写作模板

一：议论文模版

(1)不同观点列举型（选择型）

①There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.②People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.③As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.（2）利弊型的议论文

①Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文题目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___优点一______.And secondly ___优点二_____.②Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺点一______.In addition, ____缺点二______.③To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.(3)答题性议论文【问题解决型】

①Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文题目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.②As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途径一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.③Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)图表作文的框架

①As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease(goes /increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.②There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing

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如何写出好作文

1.谋篇布局：认真审题，确定文章的体裁并列出提纲 2.段落发展：条理清楚、衔接得当、句式多样 3.句子表达：语言正确、表达地道、信息丰富

高考大纲中常用的连接词

1.表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容

另外，还有：what is more;besides;

also;moreover;in addition

2.表示转折关系

但是，然而，相反：but;however;yet;

instead;on the other hand;

on the contrary.3.表示因果关系

因为，因此，所以: since;as;because

(of);so;thus;therefore;as a result;

4.表示条件关系

如果，只要: if;on condition(that);

as long as

除非: unless

否则: or else 5.表示时间关系

当… 的时候 : when;while

在…之后: after

在…之前: before

直到: until

一…就… : as soon as

后来，然后: later;afterwards

不久: soon 近来: lately;recently

自从… :since

从那时起: from then on 6.表示特定的顺序关系

首先，最主要的: above all

其次: secondly

然后: then;next

最后: finally;in the end

7.换一种方法表述

换句话说: in other words;

that is to say;

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例如，比如: for instance;for example;

like;such as

9.用于陈述事实

实际上: in fact;actually;

as a matter of fact

跟你说实话 : to tell you the truth

10.对一个话题进行总结

总而言之，总的来说:

on the whole;in short;all in all;

in general;in a word 11.其它常用到的副词

Therefore;otherwise;finally;

furthermore;Thus;

namely;

although;afterwards;personally;

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第三篇：高考英语写作

高考英语作文范文50篇

2009年全国各省市高考英语书面表达题

范文集锦完整18套（附解析及专家简评）

一、（2009全国卷I、海南、宁夏卷）

假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括： 1．外出购物 2．替房东还书

3．Tracy 来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消 2）此事已告知Susan 3)尽快回电

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【参考范文】 Mrs Wilson, I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm.I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to.She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting.She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home.She has already told Susan about this change.Li Hua 【解析】

作文题仍然同去年一样，属于提纲式要点作文，要求学生就所给内容写一张留言条，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。应注意下面几点：1）注意人称，应该用第一人称的形式给房东（第二人称）写便条；2）注意时态的正确使用：从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点1和2时应用将来时；而要点3中的几个方面则需要注意时态的替换，会用到一般过去时，现在时和将来时。3）注意恰当使用逻辑词语，是各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。

【专家简评】

依然保持全国卷I短文写作的老套路：人物李华（自1999年以来，中间除了02年，统统都是李华同学在写信，历时十年，众多效尤者），话题为简单的外语外事活动，形式为写信（邮件或留言），实则依然是短文写作，控制程度较高，体裁以陈述说明为主。

二、（2009.全国卷II）

假定你是李华，你的美国朋友sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：

1.简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺；

2.位置：天安门广场南面；

3.交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线； 4.特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。

参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street 当当车 trolley car 地铁 subway 注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。

【参考范文】 Dear Sarah, Thank you for your letter for asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street.Here is something about it.Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old.Along this 800-meter street, there are more than 300 shops.As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian’anmen Square, it’s very convenient to get there by bus.You may take Buses No.17, 69 or 59.Subway Line 2 has a stop there too.Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to chatters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life.I’m sure you‘ll like it.【解析】

本文是书信格式，给出四个要点，属于常规文体，学生只要把四个要点写全，注意上下文，句与句之间的合理过渡即可。

【专家简评】

人物李华，简单的外事活动。体裁属于陈述说明性质。话题是介绍前门大街改建情况。但这个话题对全国卷II考区的考生多少有些歧视。这种歧视可以理解为城乡歧视和信息歧视。因为该考区学生对前门并不熟悉，所幸试题控制很严，只当是翻译了。另外，试题所提供的名词类词汇缺乏考试的实际意义，只是照抄而已，对考生并无挑战。

三、（2009.北京卷）

第一节，情景作文（20分）

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。

注意：词数不少于60 提示词：郊区 suburbs 第二节 开放作文（15分）

请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50 第一节 情景作文（20分）

一、内容要点：

1、骑车去植树

2、植树

3、安插提示牌

4、照相

二、说明：

内容要点可用不同方式表达

【参考范文】

Green Action in Our Class April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way.Upon arrival, we began to work immediately.Some were digging holes.Some were carrying and planting young trees.Others were watering them.After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees.Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action.Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【解析】

本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。题材贴近学生实际，学生只要注意理清思路按照活动的内容和时间来写即可。

【专家简评】

在全国卷和地方卷中，08年只有北京卷是记叙文，09年又是记叙文。有趣的是，都是“红星中学高三一班的学生李华”。场景设置几无二致，形式更是何其相似乃尔。如果追索源头的话，全国卷NMET时代的连环画看图说故事便是始作俑者了。NMET1998年书面表达题跟北京卷有得一比。四格或六格连环画的形式，多少让人回到了九十年代。一个是红星农场，一个却是红星中学。就话题而言，08北京是春游活动，09北京是植树主题，而NMET1998则是参观活动主题，话题显然高度相关。

第二节 开放作文（15分）

【参考范文】

What an interesting picture!A Western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles.He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks.He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot.At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles.The man in the picture is trying to copy us.Obviously he is doing it the hard way.Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking.Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【解析】

本文是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。

【专家简评】

北京卷每年的第二篇作文（开放作文）一直都比较新颖，也能引人思考，问题是往往那个思考的关键点（文眼），学生未必能抓住或说未必能清楚地表达出来，尤其是要达到一语破的之妙，在高考那种氛围中，似乎不易。In my opinion,we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking.Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.这样的灵智多么需要现场的急智啊！如何让自己的思想收缩在几个简单的句子结构里面，这本身就是智慧。

北京卷的短文写作基本形成了自己的风格。近几年一直比较稳定。而2010年的北京随着课改的深入，高考应该会发生一些变化。

四、（2009.天津卷）

61.假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛，本的主题为“The English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者，你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言，请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。

1.说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力，养成读书的习惯等；

2.说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过5分钟，语言流利，发音准确等； 3.预祝比赛圆满成功。

注意：

1.词数：不少于100词；

2.可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯；

3.发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。

一、评分原则

1．本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分 2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后综合给分。

3．词数少于100的，从总分中减去2分。

4．评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。

5．拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。每错误书写3个单词从总分中减去1分，原则上不超过3分，重复的不计。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。标点符号错误，将视其对交际的影响程度酌情减分。

6．如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

二、内容要点

1.说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力，养成读书的习惯等；

2.说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过5分钟，语言流利，发音准确等； 3.预祝比赛圆满成功。

【参考范文】

Good afternoon.Ladies and gentlemen.Welcome to this year’s English speech competition.Taking part in English speech competition is a helpful way to learn English.While we fully prepare for the competition, we can improve our abilities of listening and speaking and develop a good habit of reading English.In the process of the competition, you should pay special attention to the following rules.First, you should finish your speech in five minutes.Second, you try your best to express yourself in English fluently.Finally, you should have a good English pronunciation.I hope that the English speech competition wil be a great success!Thank you!【解析】

本题属于提纲式作文，体裁为应用文中的演讲稿，题材内容贴近学生生活，给出要点表述较全，题的难度较小，考生注意一下几点即可：

1、学生在写作时对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要逐条翻译，语言不要太书面化。

2、正确运用关联词，使上下文联系更加密切，逻辑性强。

3、注意要使所写内容和原文所给出的开头、结尾处衔接自然，浑然一体。

【专家简评】

天津卷的一贯风格接近全国卷I。前五年主要涉及与中学生生活学习相关（04，07，08）话题和与外事活动相关话题（05，06）。09年则是与外语学习相关的话题。本题属于标题作文，天津共出现三次标题作文（04：中学生应该如何使用家长给的零花钱。07：How to Protect Our Eyesight）。体裁属于陈说性质，连续多年都使用陈说性质或陈说+议论性质，08年则是叙事+议论，这说明天津比较偏好陈说性质和议论性质这两类写作文体。

五、（2009.四川卷）

假设你是李华。你的外国笔友Jane打算于七月来中国，特来信了解中国人的社交习俗。请你用英语回一封信，从以下几个方面作具体介绍。1.页面时的问候方式； 2.对毛病伯回答方式； 3.接收礼物时的回应方式； 4.餐宴礼节。

注意：

1.词数100左右，信的开头和结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

【参考范文】 Dear Jane, Glad to hear from you and you’re welcome to China in July.The following are some Chinese customs.Firstly, we greet each other by saying “Hello” or asking such questions as “Where are you going?” or “Are you busy?” to express our care.Secondly, when praised, we reply with “Oh, no!” or “I’m over-praised” to show good manners.Next, when receiving a gift, we usually say “It’s unnecessary” besides “Thanks” to show politeness and then put it away.Finally, at dinner parties, we talk loudly and touch glasses when drinking to someone’s health or success to show that we’re warm.Anyhow, different cultures, different customs.If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome”, you’ll enjoy more of your stay here.I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey.Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】

本文是一种常规的书信体提纲式作文，要点有四，学生只要把四个要点用恰当的语言，条理的句子，合适的句式，表达完整，注意过渡和复杂句使用即可。

【专家简评】

我一直认为语言学习的过程中应该双向度渗透文化，而不是单纯地从目的语国舶来文化，而且，更应该在学习目的语的过程中就开始将母语文化做对等的交流。惟其如此，才能充分使学生在语言学习中体会文化比较的快感，这个快感也是双向的：一方面来自对异族语言文化的吸纳与接受，一方面来自对母语文化的更深层次的认同感和自豪感。如果仅仅是单向度的获取甚至是“掠取”异族文化或母语文化，而对其中之一进行贬损、排斥，这必然将语言学习引向反面，也必然会使生动有趣的语言学习变得枯燥乏味，同时也必然会使两种语言的学习都产生障碍，由学习观念的障碍演变成为学习行为的障碍。可喜的是，目前国人已有一种共识：要想学好外语，母语必须学好。双语相长，汉英互补，这样就可以大大的提高中国学生学习语言的效率。

六、（2009.安徽卷）

假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。

演讲稿的主要内容应包括：

认为同学们不必为此苦恼；

希望能够体谅父母的苦衷；

建议与父母进行交流和沟通。注意： 1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

【参考范文】

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries.I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sad.Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into any trouble.They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same.Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are dong it all wrong.My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them.If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around—thy are bound to read it.Thank you!【解析】

本文属于提纲类作文，体裁为应用文中的演讲稿，题材的现实性强，考生的话语较多，显见这种作文，难度不大，考生应注意基本语言和句式的运用，以及上下文的过渡。

【专家简评】

五年来，安徽基本上都是走的陈说（05）和陈说+议论（06，07，08）的文体路线。09年则来了一个典型的议论性质文体，这是一个很了不起的进步。和天津卷一样，话题场景设置为英语演讲比赛一类的活动。话题非常好，贴近中学生的实际生活。也是中学生十分困惑又十分敏感的一个问题。对于这样的问题，中学生一般都有话可说，也有话能说。往往有这样的情况，有话可说是满肚子的汉语在心中翻滚，可是无法转成英语。而这个话题的最大好处就在于有话能说。不过，本题的控制程度较高，三个观点已经用汉语给出，考生只需将其翻译或形成比较好的适合书面形态的英语即可。有几个问题值得师生们探讨。在这样的控制下，如何使语言表达更加贴切？如何用较高级语汇来表达？如何过渡？如何画龙点睛？如何使文气贯通等等？

七、（2009.山东卷）

第二节 写作（满分30分）

假设你是李华，曾在美国学习半年，现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr.Smith,但没有其联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的美国同学Tom 写一封信： 1． 感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助；

2． 询问Mr, smith 的近况并索要其联系方式； 3． 邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。

注意：1.词数120-150； 2．可适当增加细节。

【参考范文】

Dear Tom, I am now back China and sound.In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for your kind assistance in my English learning when I was in New York.Additionally, your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into a unforgettable memory.I have been missing our English professor, Mr.Smith whose unusual cast of mind, wide and varied knowledge, together with a singular personal charm, combined to exert a strong influence on me.What about him recently? I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability.However, his email address is not available.So would you mind delivering it to me via the online mailbox? I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival-Chinese Lunar New Year so that I can repay your friendship.You can partner with me to have a try in lion dances ,which is extremely exciting.And the grand lantern festival parade will be bound to impress you.I assure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did at you home.With my best regards!Yours cordially, Li Hua 【解析】

本文仍属于半开放性体裁，与书写体结合给考生发挥的空间，考生按照三个要点的提

示，用合适的句式，句型表达出来即可。

【专家简评】

李华，写信，海外学习背景，回国后的联系。和全国卷I短文写作的基本命题路数一致，是一种小心翼翼的翻版。所给话题第三条“邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化”不失为很好的思路。语言的学习离不开文化，语言的交流更离不开母语文化的输出，学习别国语言并不代表别国的语言优于母语，更不等于别国的文化优于母语文化，只不过各自文化的发展路径不一样，文化的优势结构也不一样，等等。其实，文化的多元性和多样性只能说明我们这个世界丰富多彩，而不能由此得出自家文化不如别国文化的观点。所以，学习语言的目的不外乎两个，一是要“师夷之长技”，也就是要将别国的器物文化、制度文化到思想文化化为己用，使自己的文化更为先进和发达；另一个则是“自立于世界民族之林”，也就是要将自己的独特的灿烂的文化推介出去。所以，分省命题六年来，大家都接受了这样一个观点，那就是不仅要掌握目的语背后的东西，更要关怀母语背后的东西。不仅要关注异族语言与文化的输入，更要关注母语及自家文化的输出。

八、（2009.陕西卷）

假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上, 你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖（post）寻求帮助, 请根据帖子内容, 写作要点和要求回贴。

写作要点：

1.告诉Grown-up要理解母亲；

2.给Grown-up提出解决问题的具体建议。

要求：

1.短文需写在答题卡的指定区域。

2.短文词数不少于80（不含已写好的部分）。3.内容充实, 结构完整, 语意连贯。4.书写须清晰、工整。Ks5 【参考范文】 Hi, Grown-up，As a student of your age, I understand your situation.The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers.However, it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings.Here are a few suggestions.First, it’s advisable to talk more with your mom.Heart to heart talks help you understand each other better.They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes toward many things.Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a “Grown-up”.It’s even better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking.【解析】

考生在写作中应该注意如下几点： 1.文体：应用文（电子邮件）。2.主体时态：一般现在时。3.主体人称：第二人称。

4.内容要点：① 问题介绍；②建议一；③建议二；④我的愿望。

亮点句式：

1.The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers.2.Here are a few suggestions.3.it’s advisable to talk more with your mom.4.They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes towards many things.5.Second, you should learn to do your own things well.【专家简评】

李华，英文网络论坛，这是高考英语写作中第一次出现回帖的形式，尽管回帖和回信、回电子邮件没有本质的差别，但是场景设置显然更加贴近时代了，也更没有写信的形式限制了。因此，质而言之，这种回帖仍然属于短文写作范畴。这个话题是关于成长的困惑和烦恼，即自己认为自己已经成人，但在父母眼中仍然是孩子。这个当然是老话题，无甚新意，但由于这个话题是开放式的，即题中所提供的材料只是起到了引发话题的作用，不像其他卷种那样由于材料丰富使得考生作文只是做一做翻译或接近翻译的工作，而陕西卷却要求考生提出个人思考：“理解母亲”和“解决问题的具体建议”。“理解母亲”起码可以有两个思路：一是可以写出年轻人应该主动接近母亲，积极理解母亲。二是可以写出如何理解母亲的具体方式，比如，开诚布公的谈话，多关心母亲等等。而“解决问题的具体建议”却要求考生放开思维，自己找话说。可能因为众多考生都会有话可说，甚至可能出现千差万别的思路和千差万别的作文，这样可能对有效和公平阅卷会产生一定的不利影响。但是，09陕西卷不仅有个好话题，而且还有个好形式，因为这个展开性话题留给考生的思维空间相对较大。

九、（2009.江西卷）

学校即将举行以“Turning a bad mood（心情）into a good one ”为题目的英语作文比赛，请按下列要求定一篇100词左右的记叙文或议论文。1.好心情的重要性。2.产生坏心情的原因。3.应该如何调整心情。

记叙文 议论文

1.发生的具体事件。

2.对你的心情有何影响？

3.你如何应对？

【参考范文】议论文

Turning a Bad Mood into A Good One It is very important for us to have a good mood in our daily life.If you have a good mood, you will be happy with everything in the world.Most importantly, you will have a optimistic effect on the people around you.We all will live a harmonious and happy life.It is also good for your health.However，sometimes when you meet some difficulties, when you quarrel with others or when you fail in doing something.You may have a bad mood.If so, you should get rid of it as soon as possible.As we all know, every thing has its two sides.So you should think more about its bright side.We are sure that everything will be better with time passing by.Remember: Only you can make yourself happy.I hope that everyone has a good mood every day!【解析】

今年依然是开放式的作文，只提出了一个话题“Turning a bad mood into a good one”, 并给出了体裁上的选择和内容上的简要提示。话题非常切合学生实际生活，考生只要按照要点去写，注意过渡即可。

【专家简评】

这是第一次在地方卷种中对写作形式（体裁）作出的可选性规定，并分别给出了具体写作内容及写作说明。此举为创新。这个标题作文的命制具备双重可选特征，即既可以通过一个故事的叙述来完成，也可以通过对同主题的议论（重要性、原因与方法）来完成。这是一个典型的标题作文，江西05年获得自主命题权，五年来，基本上为标题作文形式（除05年外），此次尤为特别。可以预见，在今后的全国卷地方卷试题改革中，这种形式将会成为各卷种效仿的对象，甚至可能走得更远。

不过也要指出的是，在本题记叙文要求下的第三条“你如何应对”，笔者认为这样的表述说明文的口气过重，容易误导考生的写作。最好表述为“你是如何应对的”。这样的表述才是叙事性的而不是说明性的了。第二条稍微好一点，不过建议改为“对你的心情产生了什么影响”。总之，那种“如何”，“有何”之类具有说明文性质的表述容易让考生写作时发生体裁“跑偏”现象。

十、（2009.江苏卷）

鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。

鼠标的必要性对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪„„

鼠标的便捷性

点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除„„编辑文本，搜索信息„„

收发邮件，选购商品„„

点播音乐，下载电影„„

如果过分依赖鼠标„„（请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点）

注意：

1．对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2．词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。3．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

【参考范文】

The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer． For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet.A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen.With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want.It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games.Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way.Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing.Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth.Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.（153 words）

【解析】

本文为提纲式说明文体裁，所选内容与我们生活相关，考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述，适度发挥，不要逐条翻译即可。

【专家简评】

对于江苏的考生而言，自08年改革以来，整卷分值虽然下降为120分，但短文写作的分值仍然是25分，和绝大多数卷种同题赋分一样。但是，从写作词数要求、写作话题和写作形式（体裁）几个维度来看，江苏卷的写作可以归为比较难的一类。第一，写作词数要达到150左右的卷种，目前只有广东和江苏两地，09年江苏范文词数为153词。第二，六年来，江苏的话题选择有一个明显的特点：时代性比较强。从“江城介绍”（04）、“建设和谐社会”（05），“奥运志愿者的宜与忌”（06），“阳光体育活动”（07），到09年的“鼠标的利弊”等，这个话题选择的路径鲜明地反映出江苏卷对时代的敏感性，问题是这些特色话题又给考生带来了表达上的困难。对于优秀的考生，这种话题可能如鱼得水，而对于中等偏下的考生，这种话题显然有点“尴尬”：想说点什么，但要嘛说不出，要嘛说不好。第三，这个“难”还表现在写作形式上，几年来，江苏卷主要采用的是混合形式的写作：陈说+议论。我分析了一下09年江苏卷给的范文，尽管鼠标的好处部分汉语提示很充分，控制很严，但要想精确表达，也不容易。尤其是题中未列出“不利影响”的部分，考生要想用寥寥三、