第一篇：六级作文-教师用

大学英语六级作文培训

（教师用）教学步骤：

1．考试题型和要求

2。应试策略

3历年题型分析

4。议论文分类

5。常用句型讲解 6． 作文实践

7。范文讲解

一、考试题型和要求

目的是测试学生运用英语书面表达思想的一般能力。考试时间为30分钟，要求写出不少于120个词的短文。六级考试作 文的出题方式有：命题，作文看图画或图表作 文，根据所给文章(英文或中文)写出文章摘要 或大意，给出关键词作文等。考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识，不涉及 知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。对作文的要 求是：切题，文理通顺，表达正确，意思连贯，无重大语言错误。内容切题，文字连贯，条理清楚。一)作文评分标准

1．CET检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规 定的六级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此 要求为准则。

2．CET作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores)，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。

3．从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评 判。内容和语言是一个统一体，作文应表达题 目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也 要考虑是否用英语清楚而确切地表达思想，也 就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障 碍。

4．避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括 满分；该给低分的给低分，包括0分，一名阅 卷人员在所阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的 几种分数。(二)作文评分标准 1．本题满分为15分。

2．阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分 及14分。各有标准样卷1、2份。3．阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似，即定为该 分数(即8分)；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，即可加 一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)。但 不得加或减 半分。

4．评分标准： 2分……条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎 或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性 差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清 楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中 有一些是严重错误。11分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小 错。[注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有 几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。

5．字数不足应酌情扣分 累计字数 110-119 100-109 90-99 80-89 70-79 <69 扣分 1 2 3 5 7 9 [注]1．如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数。2.只写一段者：0-4分；只写两段者：0-9分（指规定三段的作文）3．为了便于问卷人员掌握评分标准，现将各 档作文分相当1百分制的得分，列表如下，称 为得分率。其中9分的得分率为60(相当于百 分制的60分)。作文分 15 14 13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 得分率 100 94 87 80 74 67 60 54 47 40 34 27 20 14 7 从1997年6月起，有“作文最低制”标准，足见教委对作文之重视。作文0分，总分即为0分，作文低于6分，总分中要减去6分，然后再加实得作文分。

二、应试策略

1．）阅卷老师的弱点：

1，快，要求一分钟一份，实际上有老师50秒一份，字迹潦草很吃亏。2．好多老师只看第一段、最后一段，或只看前三、五个句子。

3．对大词、好词的偏爱。如wonderful而不是good，pretty而不是beautiful。

2．）作文题目本身的局限：

1． 字数要求只是泛泛而谈，并不深入，有话可说，不必猜题。

2．规定了主题句，不存在新思想。它说金钱是万恶之源，就批判，说是幸福之本，就推崇。3． 没必要一定写出自己的观点，可以挑好写的写。如my favourite TV program，最好的新闻、体育，而不是“非诚勿扰”。

3} 保证基本正确 四、六级考生的最大问题不是写得太简单，而是严重错误太多。基础一般的同学即使使用小学或中学词汇和句型，只要使用得基本正确，也可以得到及格分数。考生最常犯的语言错误有三类：语法、拼写、标点。最常犯的语法错误包括：时态、冠词、主谓一致、名词单复数等。

4）争取丰富多变，拿高分

基础较好的同学，要想取得四、六级写作高分，应做到丰富多变。丰富多变体现在词汇和句型两方面。同一词语在一句话、一个段落乃至一篇文章中最好 不要重复出现，应尽量使用同、近义词替换（无法替换的关键词除外）。例如：think可以替换为suppose，reckon, assume, argue等词。如果想不到同、近义词，可以使用上义词进行替换。此外，句型也应富于变化，不要拘泥于主谓宾句型，可以使用主系表、过去分词和现在分词短 语作状语、不定式短语作状语、状语从句等多种句型。

六级只需12句左右。全文应以短句为主，长短句相结合。句子长度的最佳排列：三长两短，所谓短句是指10个词左右的句子，不能全篇都是5、6个词的短句。同时，全文应有一定数量的长句，一般15~20词即可，太长则易冗赘。精炼的短句可以放在段首表示强调；复杂的长句可以进行具体的论证、举例或描述。

5)打开思路：第一招问为什么，比如写汽车的坏处，为什么有坏处-太贵-我国经济不发达-处于第三世界-人口多-多修停车场、道路-占耕地、拥挤等等，最后整理一下思路。

第二招，对立统一，先抨击对立面。如“大学生要了解社会”，先说有人认为大学生深入社会是浪费时间、干扰学习，世俗化等。

第三招，用比喻。比如说书的好处，像灯塔导航，像良师益友，像粮食，就生动 第四招，举例子，生动，容易理解。第五招，用排比。6）注意起承转合

7）审题、构思、列出可能用到的闪光点（句式）、把想到的好词、好句用上、检查 提高英语写作要多读、多背、多写、多改。多读、多背是首要任务，是积累输入的关键。考生应大量积累经典英文句型、表达和范文，平时勤于背诵。

上述的高分策略是提高四、六级英语写作水平最有效的方法。在练习写作的初始阶段, 可勤查语法书和字典等工具书, 背记常用词和短语，以扩大词汇量，拓展知识面。背单词时要深刻理解所背词语的内在含义，并了解其使用环境。备考时，熟记一些过渡词、句型和范文，并进行仿写。考试时，使用学习过的、熟悉而有把握的词汇和句型，没有把握的句子，尽量采取“回避政策”，切忌自编自造汉语式的英语词组和句型.三、历年题型分析（1993-2010）

1．Cycles and City Traffic.1.近年来中国城市中的摩托车

2.摩托车的优点和缺点

3.你对我国城市中摩托车发展前景的看法

2.My View on Opportunity.有些人认为机会是极少的，另一些人则认为人人都有某种机会。你的看法如何？写出你的观点，说明你的理由并举例。在你的文章结尾处不要忘记写出你的结论。

3．We Need to Broaden Our Knowledge.1.科学技术是社会发展所不可缺少的2.社会科学和自然科学相互渗透

3.现代大学生需要广博的知识

4．My view on the Negative Effects of Some Advertisements.1.现在有些不良的商业广告

2.这些广告的副作用和危害性

3.我对这些广告的态度

5．Should Firecrackers Be Banned? 1.有人认为放鞭炮是好事，为什么？

2.有人认为放鞭炮是坏事，为什么？

3.我的看法。(Suggested key words: firecrackers 鞭炮 set off / let off [放鞭炮])

6． Why I Take the College English Test Band 6.1.有人认为没有必要参加大学英语六级考试（简称CET-6）。

2.我参加CET-6考试的理由。

7。Health Gains in Developing Countries.1.以下图为依据描述发展中国家的期望寿命（life expectancy）和婴儿死亡率（infant mortality）的变化情况。

2.说明引起变化的各种原因。

8。Haste Makes Waste 3 1.为什么说“欲速则不达” 2.试举例说明

9。My View on Job-Hopping

1.有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作，因为......2.有些人喜欢经常更换工作，因为......3.我的看法

10。My View on Fake Commodities

1.假冒伪劣商品的危害。

2.怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品。

11。1998年

6、Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? 1.有些人认为某些数字会带来好运。

2.我认为数字和运气无关，......12、1999年1月Don’t Hesitate to Say “No” 1.别人请求帮助时，在什么情况下我们说“不” 2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不” 3.该说“不”时不说“不”的坏处

13、Reading Selectively Or Extensively? 1.有人认为读书要有选择

2.有人认为应当博览群书

3.我的看法 14、2000年1月How I Finance My College Education 1.上大学的费用（tuition and fees）可以通过多种途径解决

2.哪种途径适合于我（说明理由）

15、2000年6月 Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? 1.很多认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是......2.也有人持不同意见，......3.我的看法和打算

A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test(CET).16、2001年1月How to Succeed in a Job Interview? 1.面试在求职过程中的作用

2.取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是......17、2001年6月CET作文题目

write a letter.Suppose you are Zhang Ying.Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday.You should write a t least 120 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.4 1.表示欢迎

2.提出对度假安排的建议

3.提醒应注意的事项

A letter to a Schoolmate

June 23, 2001 Dear Xiao Wang，Yours，Zhang Ying 18、2002年1月A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus:

假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。

January 12th, 2002 Dear Mr.President, 18、2002年6月Student Use of Computers.You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

1.上图所示为某校大学生平均每周使用计算机的时间: 1990年（2 hours）、1995年(4 hours)、2002年(14 hours)，请描述其变化；

2.请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）；

3.你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。

19、2003年1月It Pays to Be Honest 1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象

2.诚实利人利已，做人应该诚实 20、2003年6月Changes of Ownership of Houses in China 图表内容是1990，1995，2000的公房和私房变化柱状表，趋势是公房越来越少，私房越来越多。字数150以上，时间30分钟。提纲：1.简单描述一下图表内容

2.变化原因

3.这个变化对个人和社会的影响21、2004年1月Reduce Waste on Campus

1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重

2.浪费的危害

3.杜绝浪费, 从我做起 22、2004年６月 设想你买了一本英文词典，发现有这样那样的质量问题，书店的服务态度又不好，因此给报社编辑写信。信中必须包括以下内容：

1、事情的起因

2、与书店交涉的经过

3、呼吁服务行业必须提高服务质量 23、2005年1月Your Help Needed

1、对病人的简单介绍：目前的病情和家庭情况

2、目前的困难：无法继续承担医疗费用，需要护理

3、希望捐助，联系方式 23、2005年6月18日 “On Piracy” of no less than 150 words.1．目前盗版的现象比较严重。

2．造成这种现象的原因及危害

3．我们应该怎么做

Useful words and expressions

盗版piracy(n)

盗版产品pirated products

知识产权intellectual products

侵犯版权infringe sb’s copyright, copyright infringement 24、2006年1月

Directions: For this part.You are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a company declining a job offer.You should write at Least 150 words following the outline given below:

1.对公司提供职位表示感谢

2.解释为何不能接受所提供职位的原因

3.希望予以谅解，并表达对公司的良好祝愿.25、2006年6月题目：国外旅游

1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游

2、出现这种现象的原因

3、这种现象可能产生的影响 26、2006年12月The Importance of Reading Classics阅读经典著作的重要性

1、阅读经典著作对人的成长至关重要

2、现在人们越来越少阅读经典著作，原因是„„

3、作为大学生，你应该怎么做27、2007年6月Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed 1.有的人认为应该有回报

2.另外的人认为应该象雷锋一样不要回报

3.我的看法 28、2007年12月The digital age 1.如今，数字化产品越来越多，如„

2.使用数字化产品对于人们学习工作和生活的影响 29、2008年6月Will E-books Replace Traditional Books?

1.随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多

2.有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书，理由是„„

3.我的看法

范文一：

The number of E-books is constantly on the rise as a result of the rapid development of information technology.It is thought by some people that E-books might replace traditional books in some time because of various advantages of E-books over paper ones.A great variety of reasons are held by people with the above viewpoint in which economy is the key factor to make such prediction attainable.To start with, since all E-books could be downloaded from the internet, most of which are free of charge, whereas paper books in book stores are relatively expensive.Besides, the popularity of E-books could reduce or even avoid the waste of paper.Finally, E-books can be easily stored in our computer or other portable disks while paper books usually occupy too much space on our shelves.In short, E-books have obviously become more and more popular in our daily life.As long as we can ensure the safety of E-books, we can enjoy a better life.范文二：

With the advancement of science and technology, there’s a steady increase in the number of E-books, or electronic books.Some experts have claimed that these books will be prevalent, thus rendering all traditional ones in disuse, however, other authorities maintain that the traditional books are here to stay.From my perspective, I’m firmly sided with the former.There are several reasons responsible for my point.For one thing, it is convenient for people to carry E-books around.Therefore, readers will be no longer concerned about the heavy burden within their bag.What’ more, a considerable number of E-books can be stored away altogether in the reading gadget thanks to their digital pattern, which is a huge leap from conventional books given its cost-reducing and space-saving nature.Above all, people might finally find a workable solution to deforestation, a result brought about by paper use.To sum up, traditional books will still be the leading means of reading, however, sooner or later, the age of paper books will be ultimately outlived by E-books.30、2008年12月 How to improve student's mental health

1、大学生的心理健康十分重要

2、因此，学校可以......3、我们自己应当......Students' mental health has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.Indeed, it is widely accepted that it has gained growing popularity among persons in all walks of life.There is a general discussion today about the issue of disorder in brains.Obviously, it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent problems.Authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation.To begin with, schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide chances for the young men to ease their attention.What's more, some are physically strong, but psychological problems are able to bring potential threats.Teaches may have a chance to find them in advance.Besides, specialists in this field are to be required to make full preparation for cases in time.Facing the crisis, experts can deal with it in a professional way, which means they have more or better opportunities to save us than others.(学校)

From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we can free ourselves from mental illness by taking certain precautions.For example, if you have pains or puzzles in mind, finding a friend to express these is a good 9 way to release pressure.Certainly, there is little doubt that further attention will be paid to the issue.(我们)31、2009年6月

On the Importance of a Name

有人认为名字（名称）不重要；

有人认为非常重要；

你认为呢？

On the Importance of a Name

A name is the representation of a person or an entity.It plays an important role in social recognition, just as the old saying goes: a thing is the entity of a name.However, people have perse opinions on the importance of a name.Some people say that name is important, while the others maintain the other way round.But I think name is of great importance because it is the symbol that distinguishes one thing or person from the others.We cannot deny the importance of a name, be it for a person or a thing.In the world today, no one can live without identification because they must get social recognition, and name is the symbol of the identification.Once a person or a thing gets social recognition, people will remember their names, and they will get further improvement.Besides, a good name will bring people some nice association.A person with a special name may be easily accepted by a group or a community because of the deep impression the name leaves.As for companies or products, a name is also vitally important.Years ago, a computer company spent millions of dollars for the name “Acer”.Since then, the company caught the attention of potential customers and became one of giants in the field.However, another company was facing bankruptcy, for the name of its product implies unfavorable meaning thus cannot be sold out.Can we say that name is not important?

A name may affect the whole life of a person, and a name may also influence the future of a company and its products.Therefore, we must treat names carefully.http://www.xiexiebang.com/slj/ShowArticle.asp?anclassid=155&nclassid=1377&ArticleId=219566 32、2009年12月should parents send their kids to art classes? 1现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班 2对这种做法有人表示支持，有人并不赞成 3我认为

范文(1)Should parents send their kids to art classes?

With the development of our society and economy, parents become more concerned about the future competition of children , so more and more parents manage kinds of ways to enhance the ability of children in every aspects , like they sent their children to art class after schoo or at weekends in order to promise their kids a more competitive future.The majority parents have the above view on this issue, beliving it is a good way to cultivate the children’s interests and hobbies, paving their future path in life.while there are also some people who think that this will give kids heavy burden, not really good for their growth.In my opinion, we should respect our kids and do something to child's own interests and hobbies rather than blindness.Second, do not give too much pressure on kids, giving them a healthy environment for growth is much more than attending art classes.范文(2)Should parents send their kids to art classes?

Nowadays，it has been common that parents send their kids to various art classes such as music, drawing dancing ,etc.at weekend or during holiday。

Some people take it for granted and think through this method, their kids can make use of leisure time to learn more skills and be prepared for the future fierce competition in the adult world.Nevertheless, there are still some sounds against this phenomenon, saying that it shouldn’t be encouraged。

As far as I’m concerned, I stand by the latter side, because its disadvantages far outweigh than the advantages.Above all, for children, play is their nature.It will do great harm to both their physical and mental health if they are deprived of the right to have enough free time.For another thing, most kids are sent to art schools to learn thing they are not even interested in.Consequently, they will be reluctant to cooperate with the teachers resulting only in the waste of time and energy.Thus, obviously, it is better to set children free to do things in which they passion actually lies, rather than forcing then to go to art classes 33、2010年6月 Due Attitude Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese

1、近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文的现象

2、出现这种现象的原因和后果

3、为了改变这种状况，我认为„„

In recent years, the ignorance of Chinese has been prevailing among the students.In contrast, more and more students attach great importance to foreign languages 11 since the economic globalization.In this essay, I will discuss the factors and consequences of this phenomenon and offer my own view on it.There are a number of factors which can be attributed to this situation.One of the most common factors is that the majority of people hold a view that English is the dominant language in the world and we should give priority to it.Moreover, although Chinese is a compulsory course in higher education, most professors and students haven’t given due attitude to it as fewer courses and credits are distributed to Chinese and fewer students attend the class or choose it as their major.And the fundamental factor is that most students take it for granted that Chinese is their mother tongue and they’ve already mastered it.As far as I’m concerned, this ignorance may be the very first step to furthermore overlook Chinese cultures and in order to avoid this consequence--to the students, they should read more Chinese articles not only to gain knowledge but also to broaden their scope;to the schools and colleges, they should alter the traditional teaching approaches to interest more students to study Chinese such as speeches and dramas.To live, to learn, our Chinese still need to be promoted.总结：以论说文居多，少数有信件和图表作文。六级考试写作主题大多是校园生活，其次是和人们日常生活相关的热门话题。其实考什么不重要。重要的是从不同的题目中找到写作共同的规律。分析以往试题，大多文章的结构一般是简要描述现象，主体部分是分析原因或者列举影响，最后大多是总结和建议。有时会有一些变动，基本结构是类同。

作文的主题也不是考生担心的问题，因为考试的中心是语言，内容不偏题就行。在我们课堂讲解中，对于这种文章大家都会有一些成熟的句型或模式，关键是灵活应用这些句型，另外英语重变化，课堂中教的加法句、减法句、插入句等等都是可以用的。最后要提醒的是减少语言错误。

四、议论文分类

信件：注意主题、信件格式（称呼、语气、结束）

图表：把图表转化成文字，信息，说明什么问题，表达观点 论说文：解决问题（how to），正反观点、陈述型

五、常用句型讲解

六、作文实践

七、范文讲解

第二篇：精选六级作文

The core value can be interpreted as following: The City, built by people, has been evolving and growing into an organic system.People are the most dynamic cells with the best ability to innovation this system.People’s life is closely interactive with the urban morphology and development.With the rapid urbanization, a more extensive relationship and interaction has been established between the city organic system and earth’s biosphere and resource system.People, city and earthare just like three organic systems linking with each other and fusing into the integrity.Throughoutthe whole process of urban development.其核心思想可以这样理解：城市史人创造的，它不断地演进、演化和成长为一个有机系统。人是这个有机系统中最具活力和最富有创新能力的细胞。人的生活与城市的形态和发展密切互动。随着城市化进程的加速，城市的有机系统与地球大生物圈和资源体系之间相互作用也日益加深和扩大。人、城市和地球三个有机系统环环相扣，这种关系贯穿了城市发展的历程，三者也将日益融合成为一个不可分割的整体。

For further reflect of the theme “Better City, Better Life”, five sub-themes are defined;they are “Blending of Diverse Cultures in the City”,” Economic Prosperity of the City”, Innovation of Science and Technology in the City”, “Remodeling of Urban Communities”, and “Rural-urban Interaction”.为了更好地理解“城市，让生活更美好”，上海世博会还设有五个副主题分别是“城市多元文化的融合”、“城市经济的繁荣”、“城市科技的创新”、“城市社区的重塑”、“城市和乡村的互动”。

Creating a Green Campus

Recently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has become a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society.The concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s mind.Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on students’various environmental protection activities after their graduation.What’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to solve.To make “green campus” come true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus.Secondly, it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste.Last but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the co-effort of the whole society.避错指导

本次作文在题材上，虽然仍然延续了我们所熟悉的校园类话题，但与社会背景有很大关系。刚刚闭幕的哥本哈根世界气候大会使环保减排这个主题成为焦点，在全世界都提倡可持续发展、和谐发展这一背景下的“绿色校园”，同时也是一个社会热点话题，这是我们审题时所必须考虑的。另外开篇时，切忌拖泥带水，应直截了当，使阅卷老师对文章主题一目了然。

【生动的用词】 maintain保持;concept概念;profound长远的;sustainable可持续的;recyclable可循环的。

【丰富的短语】bring benefit to带来利益;play a crucial role in发挥关键作用;under the burden of在„„重负下;come true实现;call for要求。

【同义词转换】

作文表达除了准确，还要做到句式多变，词汇灵活多样。

1.realize → be aware of 意识到

We’d better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us.我们最好意识到周围污染的严峻性。

2.keep → preserve 保持

It is necessary to educate the students to be conscious of the importance to preserve the environment.有必要教育学生意识到保护环境的重要性。

3.lead → conduct 引导

This will help conduct the activities of the college students.这有助于引导大学生的行为。

【话题备考锦囊】

6.The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.“绿色校园”绝不仅仅是一个绿色环境。

7.The construction of “a green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part in various environmental protection activities.建设“绿色校园”将会极大激励学生参与环境保护。

8.To bring “a green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken.为全面实施“绿色校园”，必须采取有效措施。

9.Campus construction is of vital importance not only to the physical development of students but to their mental health as well.校园建设不仅对学生的身体发展很重要，而且对他们的心理健康也很重要。

10.There is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campus.毫无疑问，对于绿色校园应该给与更多的思考。

【话题词汇拓展】

devastation n.毁坏

disastrous a.损失惨重的 doom v.厄运，毁灭

existence n.存在，生活

healthful a.健康的

messy a.肮脏的，凌乱的 participation n.分享，参与

preserve v.保存，保护

preventive a.预防性的 purify v.澄清，净化

stimulation n.激励，鼓舞

arouse consciousness 唤起意识 1.上图所示为某城市1989、1994、1999、2004年参加成人教育(或继续教育)的人数情况，请描述其变化;

2.请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从社会发展及竞争能力方面加以说明)

3.请预测我国成人教育(继续教育)的前景

A Boom in Continuing Education

From the graph, we know the statistics of the Continuing Education participation and the increasing numbers of the participants in X city.In 1989 there were only thirty people taking part in the Continuing Education, but in 1994 the number has grown to eighty? Our thousand people, and in 1999, a hundred and sixteen thousand, and in 2004, the number of Continuing Education participation reached its top: a hundred and seventy thousand.It can be seen easily that there are more and more people who hope to get advanced degrees and gain more knowledge after they began to work.There are many reasons responsible for the great change, and the following are the typical ones.For one thing, during the work people begin to realize what they have learned before is far from enough.They know what kind of knowledge they need.In addition, as the science and technology in China are developing so fast, adults after graduation have to go back to universities to refresh themselves and improve their competitive ability in society.The main reason is the population growth that affects people? promotion chances.Many people without Bachelor have been laid off.Therefore, such competitive social background stimulates many people to continue to study.However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future.I believe one thing is quite certain that education can? be separated from our social development.As our society is developing, more and more people will receive Continuing Education in the future.1.中国传统节日受到冷遇，西方节日日益升温已成为趋势

2.形成这种现象的原因

3.你对这种现象的态度

【范文】

The Prevalence of Western Holidays

It is noticeable that western holidays are becoming increasingly popular day by day, while Chinese traditional holidays are being somewhat neglected.Old people often complain that Chinese New Year has lost its real meaning.To their astonishment, young people in China, ignorant about Chinese traditional holidays, are crazy about Christmas or Valentine Day.There are several possible reasons for this phenomenon.First, western nations, such as the United States and Britain, are powerful and dominant in every aspect.Everything in these countries is assumed to be superior and adored by some modern young people.Second, the prevalence of English as a world language and the development of globalization enable western culture to flood in China.Overwhelmed by such a trend, Chinese unconsciously get involved in western culture.Last but not least, some Chinese people have blind faith in foreign things while dismiss our own possessions with contempt.I am critical of this trend.China boasts a brilliant history and splendid traditions.In modern times, Chinese tradition should be preserved and promoted.But it seems that young people no longer treasure the tradition.On the contrary, they turn to pursue enthusiastically a supposedly more modern culture.If this trend is allowed to continue, the priceless heritage of our ancestors will be replaced by western traditions.Nobody expects such a consequence.So let join hand in hand to protect Chinese tradition.1.据统计，在网上聊天交友、玩网络游戏是目前我国大学生上网的主要活动内容

2.专家认为，那些沉迷于聊天和游戏的大学生，不仅耗费了金钱、时间和精力，还影响了正常的学业和人际交往

3.我们应当如何看待大学生上网的问题

【范文】

What are College Students doing on the Internet?

Nowadays surfing the Internet has become very popular on campus.I am impressed most that many college students spend too much time playing games and chatting on the Internet.As is well known, chatting and playing and can do much harm to us if we spend too much time on the virtual world.Firstly, it is an enormous waste of time and we will have little time for our study.Secondly, those who play games or chat day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep.Thirdly, our social ties will suffer as a result of the immersion in the virtual world.The last but not the least, it will cost us much money.In my opinion, we should deal with the Internet carefully.On the one hand, we can get some pleasure and knowledge from the Internet.On the other hand, we shouldn’t spend too much time, energy and money on the Internet because study is our priority.In conclusion, we should make good and proper use of the Internet.工作的选择

A recent survey shows that people who get higher salaries generally work longer hours than those who get lower salaries.Some people favor higher-paying jobs, even though such jobs always result in longer work time.They believe that money is so indispensable in people’s lives that without it no material comforts or well-being can be guaranteed.However, others have different preferences.They would rather take up lower-paying jobs with shorter hours.In their eyes, money doesn’t necessarily ensure happiness and well-being.They want to spend more time in doing their likes and getting together with their family and friends.As for me, I prefer to take up a job with shorter hours even if it pays less.In my opinion, work is not our whole life.We should allocate enough time to our family and friends and have more time to enjoy our life.Besides, we are not machines.We need time to relax and rest so that we could be energetic enough to do our job better.校园“考证族”的队伍不断壮大，很多学生忙于考区各种资格证书 大学生忙考证的利弊 你的观点

On Qualification-obtaining Fever

Currently, there is a long-lasting fever of obtaining a variety of qualifications among college students, including vocational qualifications and skills certificates.Many students spend their weekends and vocation in preparing for tests on English, Law and Computer Science.Even after their graduation, some of them are still having full enthusiasm on it.No doubt qualifications have attractions of their own.They are evidences to confirm students’ abilities.Work-related or competence-based qualifications may even help students find a satisfactory job, so students hold the opinion that they are obtaining not credentials but opportunities for their future.However, as it is known to all that each coin has its two sides, obtaining qualifications also brings negative influences in spite of its advantages.First, some vocational qualifications are obtained at the expense of the basic discipline study or major learning.Second, it will take 300 to 500 Yuan to go in for a certain certificate, leading to great financial burden.Third, better jobs do not always necessarily follow more qualifications.From my point of view, what matters most is relevant experience or skill, not the number of credentials you have obtained.[Next Page好词佳句]

好词佳句总结：

fever 狂热可用指某种现象

vocational qualification 职业证照

work-related 与工作有关

credentials 学历资历等的资格

at the expense of以„„为牺牲

同学们注意下范文最后一句，使用该句式又稳妥，又能拿个不错的分数。

From my point of view, what matters most is„ not„

1)道路事故会给人们的生命和财产带来很大的损 2)分析道路事故发生的主要原因 3)如何降低事故发生率

行文思路：

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析造成该问题的原因，提纲第3点要求说明解决该问题的方法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出道路事故的严重性及主要危害;分析导致道路事故的主要原因;说明应该如何降低道路事故的发生率。

高分范文：

Road Accidents

Road accidents, as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern.In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents.In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives.The following reasons contribute to road accidents.Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities.More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents.In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even don’t comply with the traffic regulations.For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk.Besides, the weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason.Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it.Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose.Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations.Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners.Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully.2009年英语六级作文预测范文第二篇

1)随着互联网的普及和应用，网络犯罪开始摆在世人面前

2)应该如何来打击和预防网络犯罪越来越成为人们必须要解决的一个难题

3)作为大学生，你应该怎么做？

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点指出解决该问题的紧迫性，提纲第3点要求谈谈大学生应该如何应对该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述网络犯罪出现的背景及问题现状；指出解决网络犯罪问题的紧迫型，说明解决办法；从大学生的角度谈谈应该如何应对网络犯罪。

【参考范文】

Cyber Crimes

With the popularization of Internet, cyber-crimes have become a serious problem facing us.Nowadays cyber criminals seem to be everywhere on the Internet.To illustrate, some commit fraud or lift intellectual property, others snatch passwords or disrupt e-commerce, and still others unleash viruses to crash computers.As a result, these crimes destroy network security greatly and make computer users suffer great losses。

However, we shouldn’t tolerate these cyber criminals any more.It’s high time for us to take effective measures to fight against cyber-crimes.First, we should reinforce the cyber laws to punish cyber criminals strictly.Moreover, we should develop high techniques as soon as possible to improve intrusion detection and prevent cyber-crimes.Besides, more talented people should be trained and more effective firewalls should be built up so as to make the net immune to all kinds of viruses。

As college students, we have responsibility to join the battle against cyber-crimes.For one thing, we should not use others’ computers unless we get permission.For another, we should be honest to others on the Internet and not release or spread unreal information.In a word, it takes our common efforts to defeat cyber crimes。

1)有些人会选择收入高但工作时间长的工作；有些人则宁愿选择收入低但工作时间却相对较短的工作

2)如果让你选择，你会选择哪种工作？理由是„

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的工作选择，提纲第2点要求表明“我”的倾向，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出人们对工作的两种不同选择倾向：一些人即使需要工作更长的时间也会选择收入高的工作，一些人则宁愿拿低工资也会选择工作时间较短的工作；表明“我”会选择什么类型的工作，说明“我”这样选择的理由。

【参考范文】

My Choice for Job

A recent survey shows that people who get higher salaries generally work longer hours than those who get lower salaries.Some people favor higher-paying jobs, even though such jobs always result in longer work time.They believe that money is so indispensable in people’s lives that without it no material comforts or well-being can be guaranteed。

However, others have different preferences.They would rather take up lower-paying jobs with shorter hours.In their eyes, money doesn’tnecessarily ensure happiness and well-being.They want to spend more time in doing their likes and getting together with their family and friends。

As for me, I prefer to take up a job with shorter hours even if it pays less.In my opinion, work is not our whole life.We should allocate enough time to our family and friends and have more time to enjoy our life.Besides, we are not machines.We need time to relax and rest so that we could be energetic enough to do our job better。

1)现在各种各样的电视选秀节目吸引了许多年轻人

2)为了实现明星梦，一些年轻人甚至放弃了学业，这种现象引起了许多关注

3)你怎么看？为什么？

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点和第2点指出一种有争议的现象，提纲第3点要求表明“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述年轻人热衷选秀节目的现象，引出对其的争议；表明“我”对年轻人热衷选秀节目的看法，并说明“我”的理由。

【参考范文】

Attending TV PK Shows Does No Good to Young People

Nowadays TV PK shows are great hits in China and have attracted many young people.Some youngsters even give up their studies to attend these shows in the hope of becoming famous overnight.Some people think these shows provide young people more chance to show talents, while others believe that attending these shows does no good to the young people.As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion。

It should be admitted that some young people like Li yuchun has stood out from the numerous attendants in the PK show, but that doesn’t mean attending the PK shows is a good way to become successful for young people.The following reasons can support my view.Firstly, TV PK shows breed restlessness and induce young people to hunt after fame at whatever cost.Secondly, TV PK shows can subvert the youngsters’ values.They think attending the PK shows is a shortcut to the success, so they may despise the way of achieving success by hard work.Finally, if the young people fail in these shows, they will suffer a psychological unbalance。

In a word, entering for TV PK shows is not a good way for young people to make a success.I suggest young people should think twice before deciding to attend PK shows。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting.You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1)近年来出现大学生就业难的现象

2)产生这一现象的原因

3)如何解决这一问题

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出目前大学生就业难的现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象产生的原因，提纲第3点则要求阐述应该如何解决这一问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：提出大学生就业难的现象，指出现象的表现；说明现象产生的原因，如大学生追求目标过高等；从几个方面提出解决方法。

【参考范文】

College Students’Job Hunting

Nowadays, the employment of college students is becoming more and more of a problem.About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after graduation, while the things are quite difficult at present.In addition, according to statistics, about 30% of graduate students can’t find a job but stay at home after graduation。

Employment difficulty of college students is due to the following reasons.Among these, the increasing recruitment of colleges and universities plays a vital role.In addition, many colleges and universities fail to adapt their courses to the development of economy。

Considering the seriousness of unemployment of college students, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem.Above all, college students should realize their own defects and further improve themselves to keep their competitive edge in society.Moreover, colleges or universities should provide more trainings and internship opportunities before the students enter the society.Besides, college students should hold a right attitude towards jobs and set their job expectations at a suitable level.Only through these ways can the college students find a satisfactory job and have a brighter future。

In the sound of the whistle, the May meeting of rain and tears.This is a sad moment: the mothers, fathers, sons, daughters, wives, husbands, lovers, teachers, students, friends, colleagues, neighbors…...to at 14:28 on May 12 before the dull, busy, hope , Disappointed, sad, happy…… those beautiful days.Today's Wenchuan Festivals, it is only a short farewell.Life, not just breathing and heartbeat.Man's bitterest sorrows are separation and death not the lives of the border.Pro-people did not leave, everything will continue.In the ruins of the baby crying sound, called a “Wenchuan” new life, born today.在悠远的汽笛声中垂首默立，任5月的雨水和泪水交汇。这是挥别的一刻：向母亲、父亲、儿子、女儿、妻子、丈夫、恋人、老师、学生、朋友、同事、邻居„„；向5月12日14时28分前的平淡、忙碌、盼望、失望、忧愁、欢喜„„那些美丽的温馨日子。

今天的汶川祭奠，一定也只是短暂的告别。生命，并非仅仅是呼吸和心跳。生离死别，不是生命的边界。亲人们没有离去，一切都将延续。在废墟上嘹亮的婴儿啼哭声里，一个叫做“汶川”的新生命，今天降生。

May 12, 2008, let us all Chinese people always remember this day for it, our “national calamity,” the history of the Chinese nation, engraved too many disasters, but never the candidate of our national glories, One of the disaster, and again before loading the line, then let us bury the grief of all good, clean up all the ruins, was once their homes on the land, rebuild our homes, to live boldly, to live On a good living.2008年5月12日，让我们所有中华儿女永远记住这一天吧，我们的“国难日”，中华民族的历史本上，铭刻了太多的灾难，但这永远也难掩我们民族的辉煌，一次次的灾难，一次次的负重前行，那么就让我们掩埋好所有的悲痛，清理干净所有的废墟，在曾经是家园的土地上，重建我们的家园，勇敢地活下去，能活，就好好活。

Broken heart, tend to become very fragile, post-disaster reconstruction, the firm has become particularly important, three minutes after we wiped away tears, we cannot weep, to bravely live, because their relatives in heaven We watched, Tongbuyusheng, sad to tactic is not their wish to see, good to live in, they are to our expectations, think about this, it has the ruins to life for the life of the mother, “Dear Baby, if Can you live, to keep in mind that mother love you ”;think that in order to save the expense of four children and teachers, we go to these family members, in their own lives to give us an opportunity to a live, To them, we have to live better.破碎的心，往往会变得相当脆弱，灾后重建，坚强就变得尤其重要，三分钟过后，我们要擦干眼泪，我们不能再哭，要勇敢地活下去，因为亲人会在天堂看着我们，痛不欲生、伤心欲绝不是他们想看到的，好地地活下去，是他们对我们的期望，想一想，那废墟中以已命换子命的母亲，“亲爱的宝贝，如果你能活下去，要记住，妈妈爱你”；想一想那为了救四个孩子而牺牲了的老师，我们的走了的这些亲人，用自己的生命给我们争来了活的机会，为了他们，我们也要活的更好。

We all Chinese people, is a lifelong hard to forget the day, because today is the “national crisis,” Sadness Wenchuan, the country was sad, we use such a way, to commemorate those in earthquake In the passing away of relatives, we used this as a way for them came in on the road toward heaven, I hope they will be well all the way, when they look back at the earth, will see tens of thousands of their compatriots hand-foot-, Look up to the sky pray for them, so they will not be alone, not lonely。

对于我们所有中国人来说，都是一个终生难忘记的日子，因为今天，是我们的“国难日”，悲情汶川，举国志哀，我们用这样一种方式，来纪念那些在地震中逝去的亲人，我们用这样的一种方式，为他们招魂，在奔向天国的路上，希望他们能够一路走好，当他们回头遥望故土大地时，会看见成千上万的他们的同胞手足，在仰望苍穹为他们祈祷，所以他们不会孤独、不会寂寞。

1)有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资，而有的则认为良好的职业发展空间才是更重要的

2)阐述他们各自的考虑

3)表明你的看法

High Salaries or Career Development?

There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views about what kind of job they should choose.[1]Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries.[1]Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.[2]People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness.[3]With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life.Otherwise, they will suffer from depression [4]due to lack of enough money.[2]However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.[5]It is career development that counts most.Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later.In my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us long term satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short term happiness.Besides, [7]generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries sooner or later.So I will [8]give my vote to the career development first and then high salaries.[1]用于引出两种不同的观点或倾向。

[2]用于对比分析两种观点各自的理由。

[3]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构充当状语。

[4]“因为缺钱”。

[5]强调句型，此处是强调句子的主语。

[6]while引导比较状语从句，意为“然而”。

[7]“一般来说”。

[8]“选择”。

1.佳句：Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.临摹：近些年来，越来越多的人开始喜欢洋快餐。

___________________________________________________________________________.2.佳句：However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.临摹：然而，持第二种观点的人认为体育明星们为社会做出了杰出的贡献，因此应该得到特殊待遇。

___________________________________________________________________________.3.佳句：Career may give us longing term satisfaction while high salary would give us short term happiness.临摹：我们之间的共同之处使我们的关系牢固，而不同之处则都会我们如何相互理解。

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1.In recent years, there are more and more people who have showed a preference for western fast food.2.However, the holders of the second view argue that since sports stars have made great contributions to the society, they deserve some special treatment.3.The similarity between us makes our relationship solid while the difference teaches us how to understand each other.1.大学生自主创业已经很普遍

2.大学生自主创业的好处

3.我的看法

范文：

Recently, self-employment has become a popular idea among youngsters, college graduates in particular.Owing to favorable policies, a large number of graduates launch their own business as the starting line of career.Furthermore, some successful examples have already been reported in the newspapers and Internet.Admittedly, there are several advantages for graduates to become self-employed.Firstly, the current intense competition for jobs can be eased to a large extent.Besides, it is apparent that young people can broaden their horizon in this process.Even if unsuccessful, they can learn from their failure and enrich their experience.Lastly, the hardship in self-employment enables graduates to be more diligent, which will be of tremendous benefits to their career in the society.As modern college students, not only should we get a good command of professional knowledge, but also make a clear and reasonable plan for our future career.Personally, I intend to establish my own business after graduation.I am convinced that being self-employed can contribute a lot to my personal development.(170 words)

第三篇：六级作文

话题：Open Courses

1.现在网络公开课很盛行;2.网络公开课有不少好处，也存在一些问题;3.我对此的建议。

范文：

Online open courses are gaining popularity in recent years.Follwoing globally famous universities like Yale and Harvard, some universities in China have also started to offer online open courses.Those courses have attracted people from all classes with different occupations.The courses have brought many benefits to people.Many of the courses are provided by universities in foreign countries, and thus offer fresh ideas to us.Through them, we can keep up with what people are thinking all over the world.But that can also be a problem.Some of the courses may not be very suitable for Chinese students because of cultural differences and may cause chaos on Chinese campus.In my opinion, online open course is useful and we should make use of it to broaden our horizons.But we should also remember to have our own thinking and not be brainwashed by improper ideas.题目：On Blind-date Show

1、目前电视相亲节目很流行

2、出现这种现象的原因是：

3、我对此的看法

范文：

Nowadays, the blind-date shows are becoming more and more popular.Whenever we turn on TV, those incredible senses of blind-date shows would pop up on the screen.Many people, from teenagers to the elderly, are so crazy about these shows that they never miss a single chance to watch them.Three reasons would contribute to the popularity of these blind-date shows.To begin with, there are over 180 million people who remain single long after they have reached the official age for marriage.Moreover, a great number of people would like to amuse themselves by watching other people dating.Last but not least,more and more television producers add a couple of attractive elements to cater for the different tastes of the audience.In my view, the government should impose restrictions to these blind-date shows.Many of these shows advocate money-warship and materialism;quite a few of the guests’ identities are artificial.If these problems are not solved, the misleading effects can be disastrous.题目：Self-help Traveling

1、越来越多的大学生选择“自助游”

2、也会带来一些问题

3、我的看法

范文：

Self-help traveling enjoys great popularity among college students today.The reason may be that they can save a lot of money by arranging the routes, booking cheaper hotels and deciding cheaper transportation tools all by themselves.Convenient and economical as self-help traveling sounds, they still have some potential problems.Perhaps the most important one is the safety problem.Being alone without a group or a tour guide, a traveler may be helpless in face of danger, i.e.robbery, wild animal attacks, etc.In addition, they are more likely to be at risk of getting lost when traveling alone in a city strange to them or in the remote countryside.In my view, self-help traveling can be exciting and challenging and is worth trying.However, before setting out alone, travelers should make good preparations.Besides, they should bear safety and security in mind all the time and keep in touch with their friends or relatives.Thus, they can enjoy both safety and pleasure of exploring different places.题目：On Adversity

1、每个人都会碰到逆境

2、人们对逆境的看法不一

3、我的看法

范文：

Everyone meets setbacks and frustrations in life,and each tries hard to avoid them, only to find that they are just like your own shadow accompanying you all your life.When confronted with adversity, different people make different response.Some people consider it a stumbling block on the road to success,and get depressed or even sink into despair, others consider it the stairway to great accomplishments and try to overcome it with constant struggle.The latter, therefore, will recognize their disadvantages from their temporary defeat,draw lessons from it,and grow stronger each time they have coped with a difficulty.In my opinion, adversity often leads to prosperity.Painful and depressing as it is, overcoming adversity endows us with great confidence that is crucial to success.Great people are not born successful, they are great only because they have tempered their personality and remedied their deficiencies through experiencing countless adversities and defeats，which is actually a goddess of blessing in disguise.Traveling Abroad

In recent years, more and more citizens are traveling abroad.In 1995, the number of people who choose to travel abroad was about 10000.The number quadrupled to nearly 40000 in 2000.And in 2005, the number further climbed above 12000.There are several reasons for the shocking rise.To begin with, the improvement of the life standards makes traveling abroad affordable to more and more people.Moreover, the convenient transportation facilities make more destinations accessible.The last but not the least, after visiting most famous scenic spots throughout our country, exotic cultures seem to appeal more to many citizens.And gradually, they begin to treat traveling abroad as a new fashion.This trend is beneficial for people on the whole.On one hand, it is a very interesting and romantic way to spend one's vacation.On the other hand, it enlarges people's vision by having a look at what is going on in a different country.话题：树立目标

1.树立目标很重要2.原因是„„3.如何设立和达到目标

The Importance of Goal

There is no denying that setting a goal is very important.We find that successful people are always those having and achieving their goals.They set goals, short-term or long-run, to help realize their visions.Why is goal-setting important? By setting goals you are taking control of the tempo of your life.It is having a map to guide you to where you want to head for.With a clear direction, and with certain plans, you will straightly get what you want.On the contrary, without a goal ,you will live a wandering life.You do not know where to go, what you want and why you are listless.Then your life becomes dull and meaningles just like the dead water in a muddy lake.From my point of view, goals are not difficult to set and realize.First, you should make clear what you really want, which constitutes your goals.Then you make detailed palans and follow the through, as many wi话题：How to Enhance

the Sense of Happiness

1.人们对于如何提升幸福感有不同看法 2.幸福感提升不仅包含物质层面，也指„„

范文：

The sense of happiness is of great significance.As a vital factor of life, it brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for loving life, and helps us to create a promising future.However, in