第一篇：考研英语作文

Part A 小作文

正式、非正式的区别.开头: I′m writing.可缩略→非正式

I am writing.不可缩→正式

单词数量要100字(把答题卡写满11行)

两头小、中间大、称呼(注意格式)→10分钟

真题分析

09 A 针对一个热点话题讨论

比较2008年12月 四级考试作文 Limiting the Use of Disponsible Plastic Bag

英文书信书写套路: 不要在右上角写日期(以免写错扣分)Jan.9,2009 ① 称呼:Dear Sir(or Madam)

题中无具体收信人一定要加Sir

很多人写Dear editor[: ,] <冒号或逗号都可以;editor没大写>

特例:若是推荐信开头 Dear Sir:

To Whom It 代信 May Concerned ② 正头:一定要分三段(正文)

第一段:开门见山,表明写信原因和目的A: I am writing this letter for the purpose of ordering some

books/resiging from my current post/position.写书信一定要用现在进行时

09年作文: I am writing this letter for the purpose of saying something about the +„

B: I am writing this letter to inform you that/decide to resign from my currentpositing.09年作文: I am writing this letter to inform you that„

C:回信用的开头

I am very pleased to have received 不定式完成时表动作已发生 your letter dated on Nov.12,2008,and my 形容词性物代 writing this letter is to 系动词+不定式 表目的give you some suggestion on how„

第二段:主题段-根据题目要求,将信息点覆盖完整,使用例举法.eg: My reasons可据题来for „[are as follows]如下,First,.Second,.And finally,.千万不要用: In the first place,.In the second place,.On one hand,.On the other hand,.第三段:结尾→一定要简短、精练

任何英文书信结尾段都应表“感谢”必提“期待”.A:感谢型 ⑴ My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond

words.⑵ Words fail me when I want to express my sincere gratitude to you.⑶ I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation for the kind assistance you offered me.⑷ Thank you very much for your time and consideration.感谢 + and + 期待

B:期待(需对方回复时写)

⑴ I look forward to 一定不能接进行时your early reply I {hearing from you soon}.⑵ I look forward to a favorable可表礼貌客套 reply at your earliestconvenience.⑶Your prompt attention to my inquiry 咨询suggestion apdogy world be

highly appreciated被动句.必需有→结尾:①Sincerely,②Yours,③Sincerely yours,三点: 大写、逗号、ly、rs

签名: Li Ming

模拟题P14 Part A 感谢信(20分钟 草稿≤15分钟)

Thanking your all photos your send me

My reasons for the delay on writing lately.I here expess my appreciation again.模拟题P14 2)Part A 道歉信

P15 3)Part A 据09命题型式来

热点（争议）话题：Cosmetic surgery 整容

Fan worship 偶像崇拜

High price in housing 高房价

Ban drunken driving(可大作文)禁止酒后驾车

Housework,for women on foe men?

Live together before marriage.婚前同居

(cohabitale v.cohabitation n.)

书信漫画：Make friends on the Internet 无论在哪都大写

Cyber love（网恋）

排版：

Dear Sir ,A„„„„„

缩进4-5个字母B„„„„„

C„„„„„„.Yours,Li Ming.Part B 大作文

（100-200字）22行（写17-18行即可）

一定要三段式.图表文可能性最大、漫画可能性最大

Ⅰ.评分：①内容完整性--信息点

②组织连贯性—三段

③语法结构、词汇多样性、语言准确性

→句法复杂、长难句、复杂句； 单词拼写、书写.一般在12分及格

Ⅱ.真题分析: 09年来源-09年同等学历申请硕士学士学位

今年-My Opinion Of Blog :Blog is on on-line diary that one keeps on his„01年英语专业八级考试作文题-The Impact of the Internet on society/economics08年作文题-合作、团结

05年翻译中50题-In dealing with a challenge on such a scale, pide we fall„

07年-自信

08年5月同等学力申请 Self-confidence is key to success

06年 盲目崇拜 影射超女现象

Part A 4 可以用来写作文

闪光点:Quite a number of 大量weird 奇怪的The weirdest, however可作插入语,may be this„

The earliest of adoration/admiration/like/love

05年 养老足球赛 讽刺幽默说法

02年 来源-上海亚太经济会议 领导人穿唐装合影 Cultural(主题)

Opening the door ,we can feel the wind;opening the window, we can see

the sky;opening ourselves ,we can get the whole world.04 年: I still remember a poem which I learned in my middle school,“good ,better ,best.I never let it rest/till good is better/and better, best.”

Where there is an end ,there is a new start.Where there is a will ,there is a way.Ⅲ.宏观构思-谋篇布局

⑴漫画作文: Picture/Cartoon/Photo

第一段:主题句 + 具体描述漫画

1.There is a general discussion nowadays on the issue of,just

like(不是as)what is depicted by the cartoon.From it we can see that.2.It goes without saying that the cartoon aims at revealingincurrent society.As is described by the first picture,.The second picture obviously in a sharp contrast the first one.From the two pictures ,we can see that.用两幅漫画对比明显的图中,若一幅图改动后可用

大多数人:There is an interesting and instructive cartoon, in which„

Simple it is ,the significant meaning conveyed by the cartoon

is deep and profound.ironic 讽刺的3.As well know to all,„

H is well known to all that „

With the popularity of „随着„的普及

As is described by the first picture „

第二段:无论什么内容都可写成原因、建议、举例

----自由组合 逻辑清晰

举例是必需的,原因、建议随意选择.只要论述型的文章都可以举例.开头要是主题句: 据主题句 + 具体论说的句子

1.The phenomenon illustrated in this cartoon can be seen virtually

everywhere in the society.李教授的调查.It is really a

thought-provoking social fact.Accordingly, what we should do now

is to建议.In contrast,反面情况.我的邻居.Suppose you are,will you?

亮点：Accordingly = therefore 一条建议不够,再加“Besides”

In / By contrast(98年真题)

Suppose = if + 主谓结构的句子 翻译为“如果”

provided(that)= providing(that)= suppose(that)= supposing(that)

= if

2.We should strongly stick to such an opinion that同位语从句.Just like what is described in the cartoon,.李教授的调查.Furthermore,.Then what are thecausesof this

phenomenon ? Several factors, from my point of view(插入语 = in my opinion), are responsible for it引出原因.To begin with,.我的邻

居.Besides(moreover/ In addition),.3.From the cartoon we can easily define what the drawer tries to reveal to us-.In modern society, people have the freedom to choose.我的邻居.This is true not only in the rural areas/the western countries, but also in urban cities/eastern nations.李教授的调查.Accordingly, such attention should be paid(被动句)to this serious problem(= this phenomenon).First,.Second,.4.This cartoon reminds me of quite a few(= quite number of)stories.The most persuasive examples is my neighbor, who is.Another example which occurs to me is that.本句可插入任何主体段

两个关键的例证提升段落层次:

1.我的邻居

(a)My neighbor is a good case in point, which can illustrate this well.He/She/His son/Her daughter„

(b)A good case in point is my neighbor, who „/whose„/whose

dayghter„

2.李教授的调查

①According to a recent survey made by Prof.Li, who is head of the Educational Department in Zhejiang University, ②about 24% of children from 8 to 15 have dropped out of school across the country.< ①、②句可交换位置>

by Jinling Evening Post, which is a local newspaper in Nanjing.by China Daily, which is a national English newspaper in China.NNJ, which is a national research institute in Nanjing.第三段:结尾段—少而精,具备视觉冲击效果

(A)建议法—漫画主题涉及“不好 ”的现象

In conclusion , it is essential that effective measures should be taken to solve such a problem.First,.Second,.In conclusion(n.)= In brief = In short = To conclude(v.)

Accordingly , consequently

(B)评论法-漫画主题涉及“不好”的现象

1)Accordingly(In a word), we must look for an immediate method, because the present situation, if permitted to continue, will

certainly lead to give rise to.(social problems / serious social problems)

certainly affect(economics development / social development / the

construction of a harmonious society)

2)In brief, if we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly.Have some connection with “某种”联系

In some way 某个方面

Some result 某种结果 some results 一些结果

Some + 单数译为“某种”some + 复数 译为“一些”

(C)预测法-漫画主题涉及“不好”或“好”的现象

1)It goes without saying that the problem will be solved to a great extent as long as everyone realizes the urgency to cope with it

and seeks solutions to its control.2)To sum up, I would predict that the revenue to be derived from tourism in China(根据实际情况转换)could be certainly increased

five-fold(五倍), and probably ten-fold in the next ten years,provided that the business is properly managed.3)It can be predicted that with further implementation(increasing/development)of agricultural policy in China

farmers’ income will to increase in the next ten years.图 表 作 文 graph / chart / Bar picture / Table / picture

第一段 [主题句 + 具体说明]

① The graph depicts(is about / shows / „).本空格处填Directions中的某个句子或第一个提纲或图表的标题

② As is shown by the graph,dropped fromin 1996 toin 1998.③ According to the figures given in the graph,has greatlyincreased(decreased)in the pastyears, readingin 1998.④From the graph we can also see that there is s sharp decline(rise)in.①、②位置可交换

表示曲线的变化趋向: There is(has been)a slight(slow/steady/rapid/sharp/small/gradual/sudden/dramatic)(increase/decrease/decline/reduction/fall/drop)in

(income/population/prices/production)

第二段:原因段: 主题句 + 分段----逻辑清晰 rise demand

There are several reasons for.或 The reason forare as follows.First,我的邻居.Second,李教授的调查.And what’s more.第三段:同漫画作文结尾

第二篇：2014考研英语作文

第一段结构： 万能句+图画描述句+过渡句+中心句 万能句：

1.There have been a heated discussion about a picture(a set of pictures)in the newspaper at present.2.It is universally acknowledged that 主题+is a hot topic discussed by people in all walks of lie and that is true not only in China,but also in other country.3.（正面或负面）At present 主题 has become a matter of public concern especially for the people who are confronted for the problem.4.（精神类）At present 精神 has become a matter of public concern especially for the people who lack the spirit.图画描述句：

As is depicted(illustrated/displayed/)，+ 一个主语+2个动作（使用分句）。

According to the vivid description in the picture, + 一个主语+2个动作（使用分句）。过渡句：(使用到装)Simple（Ridigulous/Funny）as the picture is ,it makes great significance.Simple（Ridigulous/Funny）as the picture is ,its meaning is far reaching.或者(图表类)Isolated as these figures seem to be,as a matter of fact,they are connected with each other closely.中心思想句：

第一种：As the caption in the picture reads,+(图画中文字说的主题)第二种：There is no doubt that +(正面)china is encountered with a serious opportunity of++现象.(负面)china is encountered with a serious problem of ++现象。（精神）精神is exetremly crucial to human beings.第二段 深层涵义阐释段

结构：中心思想句(如果写在第一段，这个可以省略)+预测趋势段+原因阐释段+科学论据+例证+虚拟语气 1.象征意义解释：

Symbolically,主语 is associated with……

某某可以和 某某联系起来。Stand for 象征 Refer to 指代

Be an excellent mataphor for sth.是……的完美比喻。2.科学论据法

According to a surver /an investigation /research/,+ 数据+ 定语从句

According to a surver /an investigation /research/, Money spent on pets by Frenchmen in the city of Paris is as much as one million dollars which can feed the Japanese for a whole year.3.例证法=引出句+例子+总结句 引出句：

大事：Our human history has been filled with a various of examples,with the following one being the foremost.以下面这个最重要。然后写例子。

小事：Among all the examples that I have heard,withnessed and experienced,the most impressive one is that ………….名人：The story of(人名)can best illustrate my perspective /point.总结句：In this case,we can see that 重申观点。4.虚拟语气法：Were it not for sth,主+ would+…… 5.因果论证法=引出句+解释原因 1.引出句

A great number of complex reasons give rise to /contribute to this phenomenon.或

I can think of no better reasons other than the following one.2.解释2个原因

The frist reason ,as far as I am concerned, is that …………

In addition/Moreover,We can’t have failed to have awareness of another potential reason that ……

6.预测趋势法：未来上升或下降

Giving all informations mentioned above a consideration,I can predict that there will be a sharp increase /decline in ……

考虑以上因素，我预测……将有一个上升/下降。

第三段：个人评价段=呼吁+措施+万能总结句 1.负面现象呼吁：

The situation being so urgent,It is high time that we took some effective steps to solve the problem.措施=法律+个人

On one hand,it is essential that some laws and regulations should be worked out by the authorities.On the other,inpiduals should be educated to be cautious of dreadful consequence of the problem..万能总结句：

with a proper law and an alert public,it will only be a matter of time before the problem becomes a matter of the past.伴随着法律和警觉的民众，问题迟早会解决。2.正面现象

The situation being so perfect,it is high time that we took this opportunity to develop our society and economy.措施: On one hand, it is essential that some laws and regulations should be worked out by the authorities to put an end to promote the situation.On the other, inpiduals should be educated to be cautious of the beneficial consequence of the phenomenon.万能总结句：

With ……,we can’t have failed to witness a prosperous future.精神类：

There is no doubt that in do things,no matter great or slight,there are more or less some hardships and frustrations.用谚语结束：

Just as old Chinese proverb says,……is the key point to success.(the foundation of 基石/the shortcut to 捷径)

Having captured our attention,the picture vividly betrays the fact that [描述图片内容].Simple as it is,the drawing set us sinking in awfully.Accordingly,what this far-reaching picture depicts witnesses a common phenomenon in today's society:[图片所反映的现实（寓意）].It goes without saying that its symbolic message that [主旨句子],has gone beyond the picture itself.Why do we lay much emphasis upon this?Several points analyzed below might equip us with the deeper understanding of what we head for.For one thing,[第一个理由].For another,[第二个理由].And above all,[第三个理由（这个理由可以写可以不写）].Consequently,no issue stands as critical to [A内容] as [B内容].{说明：no issue stands as critical to A as B.再没有比B对A更为关键的了。} Judging from what has been argued above,we have come to recognize that the harms arising from [写图片反映出的问题] has been,like the pandora's box,the crippling force of [写对什么的阻碍力].{说明：like the pandora's box 比喻一系列恶果之源} It is,therefore,imperative that effective steps should be made to [点主旨句子].On one hand,[措施一].On the other hand,[措施二].Only by undergoing these measures,can we [写通过措施达到的效果].Also,I do reckon that we human beings can solve this problem,and we will have a bright future.销售：

Last year we achieved a 15% increase in the sales of our.we believe that this happy state of affairs can be attributed to two causes.First，we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second，we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season‘s are，if anything，more attractive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe that you will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.We look forward for you to favor us an order.订购：

Could you give us some idea about your price？

Full information as to prices，quality，quantity available and other relative particulars would be highly appreciated.It will be greatly appreciated if you will kindly send us your samples.However，we find that we can obtain a price less by 30% than yours with local firm.投诉信：

你参加了一个公司的面试，结果在面试过程中考官把你批的颜面全无，根本不顾及你的感受，请写信给这个公司的领导投诉。

1，说明来信目的 2，具体阐述投诉理由 3，期待的解决方式

Dear Sir or Madam，I，the undersigned，am a job applicant who had participated in the interview held by your company last Wednesday.I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about this jod-striving experience.The reason for my dissatisfaction has nothing to do with the outcome but the tone of your interviewer，Mr Wang.First，when I was about to illuminating my deep thought，he began to blame on my so-called nonsense according to his perspective.Additionally，his

cynical eyesight always made me feel that I am a reject，after all，I am a novice who has stepped into this ruthless carrer world for the first time.I appreciate it very much if you could take my letter into consideration，what I really want is just an apology delivered from him，and I would like to have this matter settled by this Friday.

第三篇：2011考研英语作文（推荐）

很好,2011年考研英语入学考试迫在眉睫，很多同学虽也投入在如火如荼的复习进程中，但总有些许瞎忙摸不着头脑的感觉！尤其对于占总分值30%的作文来说，很多同学更是无从下手，而只能拙劣的选择背诵一些模板，最后到考试时也只能东拉西扯，草草了事，那么最终的得分惨不忍睹也就可想而知了。究其原因，实质还是对于历年考研英语写作真题规律研究不透彻所致。本文力图帮助2011年即将考研的学员在最短的时间内找到方向，拟从以下两方面入手拨开笼罩考研作文之层层迷雾。ok

（一）2011年小作文写作前瞻

纵观往年考研小作文（应用文）命题，个人认为规律性非常明显。大纲规定的应用文类型，也就那么几种，几乎是一年考一种。我们来看看真题：

2004年大纲第一次增加小作文，所考的第一篇作文来自于2005年1月的辞职信。当年这篇作文令很多业界所谓的预测大师们感到非常意外，因为按照常理，大学生写的第一封职业类邮件应该是求职信，考研学子大多数都是应届生，还没学会写求职信就先写辞职信，总感觉不大厚道。结果，不厚道的事情就是发生了，随之而来的就是网上所罗列的大量预测模板彻底失效，甚至当年有人叫嚣绝对不可能考辞职信；

紧接着2006年，考了咨询信，如何向希望工程捐款，此封信考的很常规，只需在考前做过适当准备即可；

2007年，考查的是主动建议信，再次把考生放在了非常主动的地位上，没人问你意见，你自己跳出来对母校的大学图书馆管理提建议。这封邮件再次使网络上以及很多培训机构的预测失效，因为他们为同学们准备的范文多半是类似于你有一个同学，要去美国读书，写信问你到底是读历史还是计算机。实质上，这属于回复建议信，它的文章开头多半是In respond to your question about whether to „ , I would like to present the following recommendations.而主动建议信的开头却截然不同，因为是主动，所以收信人多半会感觉比较突然，因此需要写信人在开头稍作自我介绍，并不是介绍自己的姓名，而是稍微说明下自己主动提建议的初衷是为对方好，首先取得对方的理解，这才是一封主动建议信所必须具备的，基于此，开头往往会设计为，As a warm-hearted and attentiveness-full 的人，I have spent a lot of time caring about the development of

so that I write this letter to display some of my recommendations with regard to

as follows.因此，如果不能准确使用，则后果会很严重，从第一句话就会暴露你根本没有审题，得分也就可想而知；

2008年考察的非常巧妙，杂交了两种类型的邮件：道歉加失物归还。出国旅行，把国外朋友借给你听的CD机一不小心带回国了。这封邮件再次使很多死板的失物招领信或寻物启事信模板无用武之地；

2009年，倡议信，倡议大家不要再使用一次性塑料袋，这封信比较常规；

到了最近一次2010年，很多同学都在惊讶于怎么考了一篇招聘通知，难道邮件时代就此终结？我认为，实则不然。首先，通知和邮件的格式并无实质差别，考研小作文的注意力从来就不应该是放在格式上；其次，2009年上课我反复给大家讲过求职信怎么写，尤其是得分的关键---第二段，你必须说明自己适合这份工作，因此我给大家设计了三大自证理由，英文（证书）水准，著名企业实习经验，适合团队协作的性格等，而学习主动性稍微强一些的同学只要动点脑筋，就会发现其实只要把这三点反过来，变成招聘要求，这篇通知就会迎刃而解。这就是为什么当年考完试当天就有很多同学自信的跟我说考得不错的原因，因为他们愿意思考，临门一脚还得靠大家自己！

好了，分析了这么多，也就是为了预测未来。综上所述，小作文考察的特点主要有：第一，希望把学生放在一个主动的地位上，比如辞职，主动建议等，都把大家放在了主动方，而这恰恰与很多同学平时训练应用文时喜欢把自己放在被动方的思维相悖，也是大家为什么感觉总押不到题的根源。第二，考研的考察方向依旧是以邮件为主，换句话说，只要把邮件写好了，即使考别的应用文类型，那也不怕！因此，经过对2011年考研新大纲的考量，本人有七成把握今年考研会考订购信（或出售信，一正一反，都要会写）和投诉信（或回复投诉信）。

（二）2011年考研英语大作文命题方向前瞻

考研英语大作文的命题范围虽每年千奇百变，但基于中国国情的基本事实和命题规律却从来没有改变过，因此命题的方向把握相对就不是太难的事，具体来说，从宏观角度符合以下两点：

（1）高举和谐社会大旗（Harmonious Society）

从1998年考研英语大作文命题至今，考题基本锁定和谐社会的大旗，反复变换切入点，而命题方式，除了1999年的图表题之外，已经基本锁定在图画题，这个规律已经延续11年未变，具体来看，1998年的诚信（credit）话题，1999年以及2000年连续两年的人与自然和谐共处的话题（nature），2001年爱心话题（love），2002年的世界文化融合话题（culture）,2003年的个人、企业独立成长话题（self-independence）,2004年的人生奋斗无止境话题（it ends today but starts tomorrow）,2005年的抚养老人话题（to respect elders）,2006年的偶像崇拜话题（idol worship），2007年的自信话题（confidence），2008年的残疾人合作奋斗自强不息话题（never give up）,2009年的网络对于人类交流亲疏远近之影响（interpersonal relationship immersed in Internet era）以及2010年再次重现的中西文化大融合话题。从这些历年真题中无不察觉出命题者的良苦用心，即完善人格，关注生活，关心他人，最终实现人与人的和谐，个人自身的和谐以及人与自然的和谐。一旦把握此命题思路，在平时的训练时就能真正做到有的放矢，例如，一些阴暗的，过于政治化的话题，就不会成为应试范围，而尚未考察过的一些和谐话题，例如社会责任（responsibility），乐观心态（optimism）亦或平心做人、脚踏实地（to try to grasp your aspiration step by step）等，就应该在平时适当进行练习，这样在走进考场那一刻才能真正实现胸有成足，写作时的素材才会有信手拈来的感觉。

（2）影射当年热点话题（hot spot）

2008年1月19日下午，正值08年考研第一天，我的手机从当天的研究生入学英语考试结束之时起就一直响到当天晚上21时许，大多数是来自学员和同事的祝贺以及感谢，说我押中了08年的考研大作文题。其实，对于押题这个字眼，我内心从来都是不太感冒的，因为一个好的考研者，英文复习的重心绝对不应该放在押题中，一个好的师者，也不应给学员传达押题这样的信息，而是应该帮助学员实实在在找到方向，真正提高写作水平。但押终归押到了，虽有些许惊诧，但也很欣慰的发现，自己一直以来对于考研命题的思路探析没有出错，起码与命题组的专家们算是有些契合了！其实用心观察的人都会发现，近些年尤其是近5年来考研的命题，除了把握和谐社会这个大方向不变之外，影射当年热点就是另一个最直接有效切中命题的捷径。让我们来看看吧，2003年1月考研，正值中国加入WTO第一年，实为2002年经济界的一个热点话题，因此图画选择了“温室里的花朵经不起风雨”，影射中国企业成长继而引申到个人成长都需要自主独立；2005年1月考研，“养老足球赛”，大家查阅2004年全年BBC评选的中国大事记，把当年命名为中国的“司法聚焦年”，因此赡养父母这个小的切入点影射的实为中国当年的人际全局面貌；2006年1月考研，“偶像崇拜话题”，更是明显不过，2005年全年的超级女声几乎撼动了整个中国娱乐界；2007年1月的“自信话题”，漫画中一个守门员，一个射手，正在面临点球大战前的心理波动，回应的的正是2006年沸腾全球的德国世界杯；再到2008年1月，充分显示了命题者的智慧，中国正式进入奥运年，奥运所体现的一切精神就是永不放弃，自强不息，但如果直接选择一幅漫画就是关于奥运，又太过明显，因此，我当时在2007年5月17号的一次考研讲座现场就第一次提出了了08年考研的展望，即奥运这个热点过于强大，所以不可能避开，那怎么隐藏？？所以只能选择打“擦边球”，通过残奥，影射残疾人不屈不挠奋斗之话题，因为每一个观看过哪怕任何一场残疾人运动会的人都会为这个特殊群体的精神所震撼，果不其然，最终的结果如我所料！因此，我们可以大胆的推测，即将到来的11年考研，这个大规律依旧有很大的可能得到延续。

（三）2011年考研英语预测

以下六大话题搜集，是在充分研究2011年全年大事记的前提下，严格遵守以上两大命题思路所作出的预测，具体的范文会陆续在我的元旦押题班中发布，请大家引起足够重视！

1.漫画“瞎子摸到了真象”---影射国际对于中国认识的前后变化。

2.漫画“相互推卸责任”---影射食品安全事件中的社会责任感和道德感缺失。

3.漫画“股市大跌”---影射投机心态不可有，脚踏实地才是出路。

4.漫画“地震中用自己身躯保护学生的好老师”---影射灾难事件中人性的光辉。关于灾难，此命题切入点还有可能为保持乐观心态。

5.漫画“把我整成**明星的样子”---影射整容现象以及山寨现象

附件一：2011年考研英语大作文权威预测一

范文演示：Introduced as a widely known Chinese fable “Blind men and an Elephant”, it tells us never to draw a conclusion from incomplete data.For tremendous years, people outside China could only get narrow and unilateral knowledge about China, leaving a real China far from being unveiled.Nevertheless, the past 2008 Beijing Olympics was the very and perfect time to lift the curse.For most people who are non-Chinese, they tend to have a picture of Chinese who are just Confucius-like, living in a highly polluted place or even having no freedom to speak in public, etc.Reasons behind are usually the following two: one is that westerners are not so eager to learn about China just as our Chinese do about them, the limited information that reached them are mostly outdated or biased one which were more often than not stipulated by a third party with a special interest;the other is that Chinese government were not so open as the one today and did inadequate publicity about its country, thus the image of China is always kind of mysterious to outsiders, then the image depicted above about China, though misleading, is understandable.However, the grand Olympic Games provide an golden opportunity for people around the world to see a complete and “brand-new”China.Therefore, a better world characterized by harmony between China and all the other countries is to come.附件二：2011年考研英语大作文权威预测二

重点推荐: the lack of responsibility

范文演示：When the issue of poisonous milk powder gains an overwhelming focus from the public, what are these malefactors doing? As we can see from the depiction, enterprise, milk station, milch cow and even grass are trying to find someone scapegoating for this credit crisis, in my view point, that’s nothing to do with the credit but the problem of responsibility.Responsibility is a keyword that we should never disregard, defined not only as the courage to face every foreseeable risk, but as the braveness to entail every malpractice when it really takes place as well.The causes of the shortage of responsibility or even conscience may be as follows.Firstly, inner cause ascribing probably to the destructive influence emanating from the decay of morality may result in the over-materialism.Furthermore, outerly , deficient supervisal gives rise to the fearless adventurer who is at the risk of anything ,not to say to deviate from his own liability ,to pursue as many as profits.A case in point is the Melamine-laced Milk Incident which almost destroyed the whole of China’s milk industry.It is imperative that drastic measures should be taken to end this thorny situation, such as enacting related law to reinforce our supervisal mechanism to avoid the behavior of kicking the ball when something bad happen and promoting social entities to regain one of Chinese traditional virtues, which is called “who would enter the hell if I wouldn’t”,that means, undoubtedly, to learn to be responsible for the blunder means sensible unflinchingness.附件三：2011年考研英语大作文权威预测三

背景介绍：山寨现象

“山寨”一词源于广东话，是“小型、小规模”甚至有点“地下工厂”的意思，其主要特点为仿造性、快速化、平民化。如今，网络上各种各样的东西都有山寨版，山寨版明星、山寨版“神七”，山寨版“鸟巢”，山寨版的《红楼梦》甚至火过新版《红楼梦》。

从2003年开始出现山寨手机到各种山寨产品，“山寨”一词从经济行为逐渐演变为一种社会文化现象。如今“山寨相机”、“山寨电影”、“山寨明星”甚至“山寨版的春晚”等诸多带有模仿性质的“山寨现象”层出不穷，形成了独有的“山寨文化”。

KEYWORDS: “Shanzhai” or “copycat”（山寨）

MODEL ESSAY:

As is indicated in the illustration given above, one well-known historical notability named Li Kui is being astonished by his another-self, who is standing in the opposite side, with a disgraceful note in his hand announcing “giving you the parallel experience as the original edition could pay”.So, paid for what? Definitely, he would be paid for his special reputation as a so-called “Copycat Big Star” or “Shanzhai Superstar” which is rampant in today’s China.The trend of the variety of human culture is unchangeable even without the action delivered by human beings ascribing to the various inpidualities themselves, so is this round of culture revolution.The novelties emanating from the “Copycat Culture”---“Shanzhai Movie”, “Shanzhai Camera” and even “Shanzhai Celebration of Spring Festival” have brought a lot of entertainment to the public to some extent, but what we should never be blind to is their negative influence if they go to extremes hypothetically.Just as the exemplification demonstrated in the cartoon goes, “Shanzhai Star” is taking advantage of the fame or profitable value generating from the true superstar, sometimes this kind of behavior is a typical infringement to the intellectual property indeed, which we can never fail to recognize from TV programs or newspapers always.Then, the question goes to another orientation, that is, whether or not should we admit the existence of “Copycat Culture” or to what extent could we make efforts to protect the rights of original authority? It goes with no denying that the engine of the development of a country is subject to the nation’s creative power, which needs the much strongest protection from no matter government or civilian to fight with any behavior ravaging this kind of ecological balance.Fortunately, the first good news has been coming in---“a unique 15-digit code, the International Mobile Equipment Identity(IMEI), is being applied to China’s more than 200 types of registered mobile phones.The effort will combat “Shanzhai” mobile phones, or copycat phones, the Ministry of Industry and Information Technology said recently.”

特别提醒：2011年必背小作文三篇

订购及销售信

销售：

Last year we achieved a 15% increase in the sales of our.we believe that this happy state of affairs can be attributed to two causes.First, we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second, we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season’s are, if anything, more attractive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe that you will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.We look forward for you to favor us an order.订购：

Could you give us some idea about your price?

Full information as to prices, quality, quantity available and other relative particulars would be highly appreciated.It will be greatly appreciated if you will kindly send us your samples.However, we find that we can obtain a price less by 30% than yours with local firm.投诉信：

你参加了一个公司的面试，结果在面试过程中考官把你批的颜面全无，根本不顾及你的感受，请写信给这个公司的领导投诉。

1，说明来信目的 2，具体阐述投诉理由

3，期待的解决方式

点评：这是一封典型的combination（合体式）作文，它既涉及找工作面试用语，又涉及投诉信，代表了考研应用文命题的典型思路。

MODEL ESSAY:

Dear Sir or Madam，I, the undersigned, am a job applicant who had participated in the interview held by your company last Wednesday.I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about this jod-striving experience.The reason for my dissatisfaction has nothing to do with the outcome but the tone of your interviewer, Mr Wang.First, when I was about to illuminating my deep thought, he began to blame on my so-called nonsense according to his perspective.Additionally, his cynical eyesight always made me feel that I am a reject , after all, I am a novice who has stepped into this ruthless carrer world for the first time.I appreciate it very much if you could take my letter into consideration, what I really want is just an apology delivered from him,and I would like to have this matter settled by this Friday.Yours，Li Ming

第四篇：考研英语作文

范文

（一）Writing（图画提纲式议论文）

Directions: Study the following set of cartoons carefully and write an essay in which you should

1）describe the cartoons,

2）state its main idea, and give your comment.

You should write about 160—200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.（20 points）

范文

These two cartoons show two contrasting scenes.While the male student spends all his time and money playing Internet games, the female student studies diligently.One could easily argue that a bright future awaits the students who study hard, while those who waste tuition playing games have little to look forward to.The above images encourage students to value their time in school and take advantage of educational opportunities.

While students dream of being accepted into college for years, they often become lost once admitted.Without their parents' constant support and advice, or because of limited communication with teachers, many students are unable to focus on their future goals.Such confusion leads some to forget their studies and resort to playing on the Internet, among other forms of recreation.Students should not only keep their ambitions in mind, but also seriously strive towards them.Without a clear purpose, one might easily waste crucial years neglecting one's studies.

Constantly playing on the Internet leads to failure, while continuously studying guarantees success.Students need to appreciate their time in school, and work hard in order to ensure a good future.这两幅漫画描述了两个形成鲜明对照的场景，第一幅画中的男生在网络游戏中虚掷了所有的时间和金钱，而第二幅画中的女生却在勤勉地学习。可以很容易得出结论：对于刻苦学习的学生，一个美好的未来在等候着他们；而浪费学费玩游戏的学生没有什么指望了。上面这两幅画激励学生们珍惜在校的时光和受教育的机会。

经过多年的梦寐以求终于跨进大学门槛的学生，却往往迷失了自己。因为没有了父母常在身边的支持和建议，或是缺乏与老师的沟通，很多学生找不到自己未来的奋斗目标。而这种困惑就使得一些学生扔掉书本，靠各种消遣 —— 包括玩网络游戏 —— 来打发时光。大学生不应只空谈理想，应该认真地为之奋斗，而没有明确的目标则会让一个人在度过他至关紧要的几年后头脑空空。

沉湎于网络游戏只会导致失败，而坚持不懈的学习则能收获成功。大学生们一定要珍惜在校时光，为了美好的未来而努力。

范文

（二）Writing（图画提纲式议论文）

Directions: How can we meet the needs of today without diminishing the capacity of future generations to meet theirs? Sustainable development implies a broad view of human welfare, a long term perspective about social development.Write an essay which should cover:）describing the set of drawings below,）stating its main idea, and）giving your comment.

You should write about 160—200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.（20 points）

范文

The images above are both meaningful and instructive: this man's hard work is not only for his own benefit, but also for the benefit of future generations.The pictures serve to remind us that the existence of our current happiness and valuable national heritage is due to the struggles of our predecessors.We, in turn, should also work hard in order to guarantee the comfort and safety of generations to come.Sustainable development has become a topic of heated debate in recent years.While it is justifiable to satisfy current demands, we cannot neglect the needs of our descendants in the process.Our children also depend on Earth's natural resources and we should not deprive them of such necessities.Unfortunately, many people only think of their short term, personal interests.An entire forest might be clear cut, in the interest of making a profit, without a single tree planted in its place.This inconsiderate attitude towards the welfare of our descendants, as well the indifference to the outcome of such reckless actions, can only turn Earth into a cold and lifeless planet.People must be taught to appreciate Earth as not only their home, but also the home of our children and grandchildren, as well as all other plants and animals.While making great efforts to increase our current quality of life, we must simultaneously consider how our actions will affect future lives.译文： 

上面的漫画意味深长而发人深省，栽树人的艰辛劳作不只是为了他自己，也是为了后人。这幅漫画是为了提醒我们今天的幸福生活和宝贵的民族遗产归功于我们祖先的奋斗，而我们，反过来，也要努力劳动来确保我们后代的幸福和平安。

可持续发展是近几年的热点话题，虽然我们要满足自己当前的需要，但不能将子孙后代的需求抛置脑后。我们的孩子同样需要自然资源，我们不能剥夺他们的这份必需品。 不幸的是很多人只考虑他们短视的、自私的利益。为了获得利润，整片的森林被砍光，一棵树都不留下。这种不顾及子孙福利的态度，和对这种轻率行为的后果的无动于衷，只会让我们的地球变成一个冷冰冰而无生气的行星。

必须告诫人们的是：地球不仅是他们的家园，也是他们的孩子和所有后代的家园，还是其他所有的植物和动物的家园。在努力提高今天的生活质量的同时，我们必须考虑到我们的行为会对未来的生命产生什么样的影响。

范文

（三）Writing（图画提纲式议论文）

Directions: Study the following set of cartoons carefully and write an essay in which you should ）describe the cartoons, ）interpret its meaning, and ）point out its implications in our life.

You should write about 160—200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.（20 points）

美丽不是表面的范文 

In the above cartoons, a young woman happily eats bananas and casually discards the peels on the street, unaware of the fact that such actions not only pollute the environment but also pose a danger to others.In the next illustration a disabled man struggles to properly dispose of the trash she has left behind.Despite the girl's youth and beauty, it is the disabled man who is truly beautiful.True beauty comes from one's actions rather than one's appearance.While most of us enjoy pretty appearances, it is more important to cultivate a clean and beautiful soul.Only such souls can create a genuinely beautiful society.Chinese traditionally uphold the virtues of modesty, generosity，broadmindedness, and politeness.Confucian teachings such as: “do not do to others as you would not want done to you” and “one should be delighted to hear criticism,” are wise and worthwhile.If people embody these teachings our society can only improve and progress.The thoughts of great minds like Confucius are also worth studying.His writings set fine and noble examples for us to follow.Another proverb thus comes to mind: in the company of three one always can find a teacher.We should always be willing and able to learn from those around us.译文： 

在上面的漫画里，一个年轻女子愉快地吃着香蕉，然后随手就把香蕉皮扔到了街上 —— 丝毫没顾及到这样的举动不仅会污染环境，还会给他人带来危险。而在接下来的那幅图中，一位残疾人艰难地把她扔下的垃圾清理掉了。虽然这个女孩年轻貌美，但真正美的是那位残疾人。真正的美是出自行动而不是外表，虽然我们每个人都喜欢漂亮的外貌，但更重要的是培养纯净、美丽的心灵，只有这样的心灵才能创造出真正美好的社会。中国自古推崇谦逊、宽宏、心胸开阔和以礼待人的美德。

孔夫子的教导： “ 己所不欲，勿施于人 ”、“ 闻过则喜 ” 是明智的并值得我们遵循。如果人们把这些箴言都落实到生活中，那么我们的社会就会得到改善和进步。大思想家孔子的思想是值得我们学习的。他的著述给我们留下了杰出、高尚的楷模让我们效仿。另一句谚语又浮现在我的脑海里： “ 三人行，必有我师 ”。我们必须随时愿意和能够向周围的人们学习。

范文

（四）Writing（图画提纲式议论文）

Directions:

A.Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in about 200 words.B.Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET II.C.Your essay should meet the requirements below: 1.Describe the cartoon and the message conveyed

2.Draw a conclusion and give your comment on the cartoon..范文：

Indicated above are pictures that show trees play a vital role in water and soil conservation.In the left hand picture, people are fleeing from voracious sand dunes because they cut down all the trees.The caption reads, “As the sand advances, we

retreat.” In the right hand picture, the people have returned carrying tools, water and samplings for the reforestation of the land.We are informed that, “As we advances, the sand retreats.”

It seems that the cartoonist is sending a message about the significance of trees in water and soil conservation and the need for everyone to fight against the danger of the desertification.In fact, what he is saying is if we do not fight against the sand, it will drive us away from the land.If we let this situation go as it is, our environment will suffer a great destruction.The best way to fight back against the greedy desert is made clear in the second picture.There the local people are vigorously setting about the task of planting trees to reclaim the land and make it fertile.The fact that there are three people in the picture, each with a different job suggests that cooperative efforts is one of the keys to success in the battle against soil erosion and only in this way can desertification be finally defeated.（225）

译文：

如图所示，树木对水土保持起着至关重要的作用。左图中，人们被贪婪的沙丘追赶，因为他们砍伐了所有的树木。标题写着： “ 沙进我退 ”。右图中，人们拿着工具、水和树苗回来重新植树造林。我们被告知： “ 我进沙退 ”。

我认为，漫画家要告诉我们的是：树木对水土保持的重要性，以及每个人参与抵制沙化威胁的必要性。实际上，他要说的是如果我们不与沙漠做斗争，它会把我们从土地上赶走。如果我们让这种情况继续下去，环境将遭到巨大的破坏。

第二幅图清楚地说明了击退贪婪沙漠的方法。那里的人们正在热情高涨地着手植树造林、收回土地，使它变得肥沃。图中三个人每人干不同的工作，这说明合作努力是成功防止土壤侵蚀的关键之一 , 只有这样才能战胜沙漠化

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（五）Writing（图画提纲式议论文）

Directions : In this part, you are to write an essay of 160--200 words within 30--35 minutes.Your essay must meet the requirements below.1.Show your understanding of the meaning of the picture below 2.State the harmful effects of fake and inferior products 3.Suggest ways to fight against fake and inferior products

假冒伪劣产品

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As the picture given depicts , the socialist market-oriented economy in our country is developing rapidly, just like a truck running at a high speed.But the general public is surprised to find that there are more and more fake and inferior products seriously hampering the expansion of our market economy.Consumers have to be very careful in purchasing goods and services they need;otherwise they will fall into the traps set by the illegal manufacturers.There is no doubt that fake and inferior products are extremely harmful.In the first place, they endanger people’s health, giving rise to a lot of injury accidents.For instance, inferior-quality medicines not only aggravate a patient’s condition, but also tend to threaten his life and, what’s worse, to result in his death.Secondly, fake and inferior products are usually sold on the cheap.In many cases they interfere with the normal economic order in our country, affecting the marketing of many high-quality goods.This, in a great degree, hinders the development of our socialist market economy and harms the interests of our state.Therefore, we can say that fake and inferior products are a dangerous “tumor” in our healthy economy, which must be cut away as soon as possible.In my opinion , several strong measures should be adopted to fight against fake and inferior products.On the one hand, those who make them deserve to be severely punished by the law.On the other hand, consumers should learn to discern between true and false.Only in this way can they defend their own legal rights and interests.（263 words）

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正如所给的图画所描绘的 , 我国社会主义市场经济正在迅速发展 , 就像一辆高速行驶的卡车。但是公众惊讶地发现 , 越来越多的假冒伪劣产品严重地阻碍了我国市场经济的发展。消费者必须经常谨慎地去购买他们所需的货物或服务 , 否则他们会落入不法制假人所设的陷阱。

毫无疑问 , 假冒伪劣产品极其有害。首先 , 它们危害人民的健康 , 引发了许多伤害事故。例如，伪劣药品不仅使病人的病情恶化 , 而且往往会威胁病人的生命 , 更糟的是 , 导致病人的死亡。其次 , 假冒伪劣产品通常廉价出售。在许多情况下 , 它们又干扰了我国正常的经济秩序 , 影响了许多高质量产品的销路。这在很大程度上阻碍了我国社会主义市场经济的健康发展 , 并损害了我们国家的利益。因此 , 我们可以说 , 假冒伪劣产品是我们健康经济中的一颗 “ 毒瘤 ”, 对此必须尽快清除。

依我看 , 必须采取若干有力措施来与假冒伪劣产品斗争。一方面 , 制假者应该依法严惩。另一方面 , 消费者应该学会识别真假。只有这样 , 消费者才能维护他们的合法权益。

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（六）Writing（图画提纲式议论文）

1.Describe the picture

2.Deduce the purpose of the drawer of the picture 3.Suggest your counter – measures

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Basically, what we see in this picture is a bird lamenting the fact that its home has been destroyed.Of course, birds usually make their homes in trees, and since there are no trees left in the picture – only the stumps, to show that the original trees have been chopped down – the bird is left without shelter.In fact, the bird has no choice but to perch on the handle of an axe, which has been used to destroy its original home.We can deduce from this picture that the drawer is trying to attract our attention to the tragedy of the destruction of forests, which is part of the threat to the ecological balance of the planet.He seems to be saying that soon there will be no trees left in the world.In my opinion, the sad little bird is a symbol of all living things, including human beings, and, like the bird, we too will be left homeless if we allow the destruction of the environment to continue.This simple picture is a wake – up call for the whole of the human race.If this vivid image of the grim future of our planet is not to become a reality, we must take positive steps right now to put an end the plundering of the Earth’s natural resources.It is clear that the drawer of the picture is urging us to start with a campaign to save the forests, which is something all of us can join by urging our local authorities to take positive measures to save the trees.译文：

我们主要能从这幅图上看到的是一只小鸟为自己的家被毁坏而悲伤。当然，鸟类通常把家建在树上，因为图中没有树了 — －只有树桩，表明原来的树被砍伐了 — 这只鸟无处藏身。实际上，这只鸟别无选择，只能停在被用来破坏它原来家园的斧柄上。

我们可以从图中推测出画家试图把我们的注意力吸引到森林遭到破坏这一悲剧上，而这正是威胁地球生态平衡的一部分。他似乎想说很快世界上将没有树了，但我认为这只可怜的小鸟象征包括人类在内的所有生物。而且，如果我们允许继续破坏环境，我们也会像小鸟一样无家可归。

这幅简单的图画是对全人类的一个警钟。如果不想让这个对这个星球可怕未来的生动的描绘变成现实，我们现在必须采取积极的措施停止掠夺地球的自然资源。很明显，画家在力劝我们开始拯救森林的行动。我们都可以参与，敦促当地政府采取措施拯救树木。

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（七）Writing（图画提纲式议论文）

1.Describe the picture

2.Deduce the purpose of the drawer of the picture 3.Suggest your counter – measures

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The cartoon presents the Earth with a personified human face that seems quite unhappy.A examination of the picture immediately reveals that the source of its mood is the air pollution resulting from a huge number of automobiles spread around its surface.The cartoon, no doubt, aims at alarming humans of the heavy load we have exerted on Earth by our insatiable production and usage of automobiles.However, the majority of people merely indulge in the celebration of the convenience brought by cars, while forgetting or simply neglecting their harmful impact on the atmosphere.Admittedly, there are various factors contributing to the current worldwide air pollution, but it is undeniable that the exhaust from automobiles is categorized as one of the major elements.I would like to make the following proposals to solve this problem: firstly, we should apply the most cutting-edge technologies in order to adopt new forms of energy as substitutes for fossil fuels.It should also be guaranteed that the clean energy be inexpensive so that it can be widely accepted.Besides, there should be attempts to develop possible transportation means, so that citizens can be perted from dependence on cars.In short, it is humans' responsibility to resume clean air for Earth.译文：

这幅漫画以拟人的方式呈现地球，它的脸显得非常不高兴。仔细观察这幅图就会发现其郁闷来自于空气污染，这是由于其表面上有着无数车辆在行驶。

毫无疑问，这幅漫画意在向人们敲响警钟，即人类永不知足的生产和使用汽车给我们的地球带来了巨大的负担。但是，大部分人却沉溺于汽车带来方便，而忘记了或者是忽略了其对大

气层的负面影响。诚然，有很多因素导致了现在的全球空气污染问题，但是不能否认的是汽车废气被归为最重要的因素之一。

为了解决这个问题，我想提出以下建议：第一，我们应该运用最先进的技术从而以新能源替代化石燃料。同时，我们要确保清洁能源的价格低廉以得到大众的接受。此外，我们应该尝试发展各种交通方式，这样市民们能够摆脱对于汽车的依赖。简而言之，人类有责任来恢复地球的清洁空气。

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（八）Writing（图画提纲式议论文）

Directions: Study the following picture carefully and write an essay of 160 – 200 words in which you should 1）describe the picture.）state different views on mercy killing, and 3）give your opinion on it.晚期癌症病人请求安乐死。我们怎么办？

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Mercy killing is one of the most controversial issues in the world of medicine.As the picture given above depicts , a late-stage cancer patient is terminally-ill, asking the doctors for mercy killing.But the doctors look deeply embarrassed, feeling helpless because they are at a loss what to do about it.The picture really sets me thinking.It implies that people differ in their attitudes towards the mercy killing.Some people think that physician-assisted suicide can relieve dying patients of unbearable pain and suffering.They maintain that as long as a doctor prescribes a drug for a legitimate medical purpose, he has done nothing illegal even if the patient uses the drug to hasten death.Others are strongly opposed to physician-assisted suicide.They contend that a doctor has no right to give a patient sufficient medication to control his pain if that may hasten death.They conclude that it is illegal for doctors to help the dying end their lives.As far as I’m concerned , doctors have a duty to help dying patients to alleviate their pain and suffering.I also agree that doctors deserve to be punished if they prolong the needless suffering of their terminally-ill patients.In short, I am in favor of mercy killing.（207 words）

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安乐死是医学界最有争议的问题之一。正如上面所示的画所描绘的，一位晚期癌症病人病入膏肓，请求医生们实施安乐死。但医生们看上去十分尴尬，感到无能为力，因为他们不知道该怎么办。

这幅画确实发人深省。它暗示，人们在对待安乐死上看法不一致。有些人认为，医助自杀可以减轻垂死病人不堪忍受的痛苦。他们主张，只要医生开药是为了合法的医疗目的，那么即使病人使用这种药物加速了死亡，医生也没有做什么违法的事。其他人则强烈反对医助自杀。他们坚持认为，医生无权给病人开足以控制痛苦的药物，如果那样做会加速死亡的话。他们的结论是，医生帮助垂危病人结束生命是违法的。

依我看，医生有义务帮助垂死病人缓解病痛。我还认为，如果医生延长了垂死病人不必要的痛苦的话，那他们应该受到惩处。总之，我赞成安乐死。

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（九）Writing（图画提纲式议论文）

1.Describe the picture

2.Deduce the purpose of the drawer of the picture 3.Suggest your counter – measures

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People have the illusion that they can do anything with money.Just as what is shown in the picture, by paying a penalty, people can give birth to more children, factories can let out the polluted air directly without any treatment, and trees can be felled at will.This is a very serious social problem.Compared with other countries, China has a larger population but more limited resources.If everybody behaves in the similar way, it would be far beyond the country's capacity to guarantee everyone a well-off life.Moreover, it was reported that to bring up one child costs 350,000 yuan, which means that a family with several children bears a heavy burden.Meanwhile, if factories do not take any measure to treat the polluted air, the atmosphere will be further contaminated.Also, the felling of trees will surely lead to soil erosion, while frequently occurring sand storms are humans' deserved punishment for deforestation.Though penalty is one of the methods to punish this sort of behavior, it is never the only way.Solving these problems reflected in the picture depends largely on

our responsibility to society and environment.If the sense of responsibility is greatly aroused, harmony between man and the environment will not be far away.译文：

现今很多人认为用钱就可以做所有的事情。正如图中所示的那样，通过付罚款，人们可以超生，工厂可以不经过处理就排放废气，树木也可以被随意地砍伐。

这是一个非常严重的社会问题。相比其他国家，中国有更多的人口而资源却非常有限。如果每个人都用这种方式行事的话，那么这个国家远远没有能力让每个人都过上富裕的生活。此外，有报道称要培养一个孩子需要花费 3 万 5 千元，这意味着一个有许多孩子的家庭将承受很沉重的负担。同时，如果工厂不采取措施处理废气的话，大气层会被进一步污染。另外，树木砍伐会导致土地的腐蚀和水土流失，频繁发生的沙尘暴就是人类过度砍伐森林应得的惩罚。

尽管罚款是惩罚这些行为的一种方法，但绝不是唯一的方法。解决这个问题更重要的一点在很大程度上取决于我们对于社会和环境的责任。如果能够唤起广泛的责任感，那么我们离达到人与自然之间的和谐就不远了。

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（十）Writing（图画提纲式议论文）

1.Describe the picture

2.Deduce the purpose of the drawer of the picture 3.Suggest your counter – measures

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In this picture a man rudely opens a garbage can and violently throws all kinds of waste into it.However, the box is not an ordinary trash can, but is, as a matter of fact, the Earth.It is where survive, breed, and prosper.But as the drawing indicates, Earth does not receive an equal repayment.Quite the contrary, one of the biggest “gifts” humans return to Earth is an unbelievable amount of trash.The picture purposefully points out a kind of pollution that arouses little public attention, tha